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06-05-03, 04:04 AM | #1 | ||||||
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IP: E03C F70C
My flows iz lethal my rhymes'll eat u//
This iz the prequel amd you'll have no sequel// I'll treat u like a bicth and instigate on yo shit// I'll sick blood and cryp until yo whole body splits// U keep on talkin shit and see if I don't catch u// I'm Def by mouf fuck wit me and i'll wet u. |
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06-05-03, 12:17 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 130E 7DAF
ok if that was in a battle you woulda been lackin punches word play and multis
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06-05-03, 03:02 PM | #3 | |||||||
BANNED as runindisrapshit
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IP: 4919 70FA
Up dat vocab at the end cuz it got a lil weak
and try to use (-) so i have a betta understandin on how u sayin it You lackin punches juss dont say u gonna do sumin tell dem how w/ creativity aiight 1 |
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06-05-03, 03:03 PM | #4 | |||||||
Retired.
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IP: E42C C25B
too short hear to offer any real advice
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