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10-24-03, 09:31 PM | #1 | ||
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Topic - Ja Rule Diss
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haha, this man wack as hell...
yo, how the fuck am i sposed to understand when ya keep-yellin, claim to be a gangsta and a natural killa but you just a cheep-felon, i said sup dog and thats cause ya keep barkin-shit, this a ja rule diss session and im sparkin-it, beat u up at night even though i cant see you when the darkness-hits, your a determined bitch, id kill u n not be surprised when ya carcuss-spits, get lyrically raped... cause when ya battle me ya ''FUCKED", ya i could beat you.. but ima betta man so lets battle whats up?, like when 'sluts suck' your "SPIT" "blows" at the same-time, forever improving my skill while this fake keeps spittin lame-rhymes, u a skinny nigga, capable to get filed-away, you might as well be suckin 'cock' cause ya style-is-"gay", |
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10-24-03, 09:41 PM | #2 | ||
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IP:
yo id appreciate some feedback...
this was keystyled as in any other battle, cept its directed at Ja... Let Me Know What Ya Think. []Deace |
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10-24-03, 09:49 PM | #3 | ||
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i need feedback,
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10-24-03, 10:35 PM | #4 | |
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IP:
hey i havent seen this topic in a while......not......
another one jumpin the hate ja-rule band wagon....cus everyone else does...... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ i say ur battle verse -v- ja rule was weak...... he would rip u in half.......no offense.....keep postin up... just be creative.... |
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10-24-03, 10:46 PM | #5 | ||
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fuck you carson, im not a fuckin follower i did this because its practice for me,
i said feedback, dont be makin shit up bout me, and i dont givva fuck if ja rule could rip that or not, its not the fucking point. the point is i couldnt understand what the fool was saying anyways. so when people ask for feedback dont be sayin shit that u dont even know a fucking thing about, fucking fagget, |
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10-24-03, 10:47 PM | #6 | ||
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fuckin bandwagon, man ive never even seen this done before, cept in eminem songs n shit. why u so stupid bro?
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10-24-03, 10:51 PM | #7 | |
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IP:
ok....sorry i'll make sure to only post postitive feedback to u for now on.......
fuckin panzy....don't post if u dont want critique'd |
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10-24-03, 10:54 PM | #8 | ||
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u didnt even critique, just said i did this cause everyone else does,
then said ja rule could rip that, i really dont givva shit. tell me what u think of the punchlines and wordplay dont tell me some fuckin famous rapper could rip it, shit man. |
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10-24-03, 11:14 PM | #9 | |
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IP:
ok....punches weak
flow choppy disses...generic... overall ...played... originality...none... vocab...none.... |
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10-24-03, 11:48 PM | #10 | |
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IP:
[closed] for freeposting.
don't up so much. read the rules.
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