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10-28-03, 09:45 AM | #1 | |||||||
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about my mother, (r.i.p) I love you
IP: 3BCE 57C7
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On this path of life, road to wealth I'm forced to walk alone My feelings still unknown Wondering who I'm gonna be Who I want next to me is you Lost you at 21 now I'm 22 Just proof to me the years still pass by Only God Can tell me why But til then I'm gonna struggle Cause it's hard to carry on When nobody loves you All my secrets, who to tell But on my shoulder you dwell Angel wings spread afar Still keep me safe if I fell You see I'm lost But nobody cares if they can find me In your Cross It holds your memory It reminds me Begging God please Pull my body and soul apart It isn your love The only things to fix this hole in my heart *chorus* Momma, your my world the air that i breathe the blood that i bleed part of you is part of me destiny, put us together god had took us apart now that your gone so is a piece of my heart (vs. 2) Only a mothers love Can fix her first sone's broke heart July 15th The day that we were first broke apart And I still see your face in my eyes I know your looking down from heavenly skies And in my dreans you send replies And in prayers I send questions Still ask for direction Still ask for your blessing When my wife's expecting But I can't put i passed me Death's everlasting And life's just a moment in time A speck in this world Name her Daisy if expecting a girl Never give her nothing less than a pearl I'll follow your footsteps From dirtroads to streets of gold Eternally you're gonna be in my soul *chourus* __________________ Fate is inevitable, everything happens for a reason |
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10-28-03, 10:38 AM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: 8E42 0827
I love this. You mom will be proud. You rhymescheme was great and every word fitted together perfectly. Good work.
Can you check out and drop a comment on my open mic peice. It's called Mom I'm sorry. It's written in a different style to this and I want some feed back on it. And I'm gonna pm you soon askin you somethin. Keep checkin you pm's. Once again good work on this I enjoyed readin it and sorry bout your mom. Peace!!! |
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