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*MoF* | 0 | 0% | |
EnVy SKiLLZ | 5 | 100.00% | |
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11-20-03, 04:04 PM | #1 | |||||
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EnVy SKiLLZ vs *MoF*
IP: ED36 AAFF
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5 bar max ill set it up...since u called me out u spit first u got 20 mins to spit and i got anotha 20 after that 5votes no dk no crew no hate all votes must be explained Catagories opening - flow - metas - multis - punches - wordplay - vocab - complexity - closing - my vote - |
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11-22-03, 10:34 PM | #2 | |||||
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IP: 64C2 D7B2
how come the people who always challenge me neva show up
some one close this and this is like the 5th time too __________________________________________________ ___________________________
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11-23-03, 06:01 AM | #3 | |||||||
BE MySELF 'n' STAY MySELF
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IP: FAE8 8D1D
yo peace out....
im in here...check this...... ima post today.... calm down.....perhaps all the people got fear of u......lol i dunno!
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turn ya back on me, get slapped and lose ya legs... IM NOT ALLOWED TO SAY: "NIGGA!" Voice Of Tha Streetz Ya JUDGEMENT DAY
What, I am a GERMAN??
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11-23-03, 11:03 AM | #4 | |||||||
BE MySELF 'n' STAY MySELF
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IP: 1A80 113C
perhaps i would´ve been betta to spit blind.....
but fuck it....i know...u need wins..... check this.....: Im goin up on stage surrounded by lyrical n mystical mist n in rage / wage a war gainst u stand there wit "ballistical" fists and young age // ure used to go as the snd cuz everytime u stand behind the male / (pokin ass) a gale´s streamin out my front u try to find me but hit nuttin - fail // ure shootin wit placebos bitch, u know, words that make no sense / use ur dense i rock the mic this hard, its eruptin n breakin ya hands // u get fucked by my slug aint got luck cant duck cuz u get plucked / cooked by flaming verses gettin half weight crooks like u in hearses, sook // lucky if ure able to survive the epidemic disease caused by lyrical shots/ MoF rocks not wit gats just polemic, feelin home at worst criminal spots//
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turn ya back on me, get slapped and lose ya legs... IM NOT ALLOWED TO SAY: "NIGGA!" Voice Of Tha Streetz Ya JUDGEMENT DAY
What, I am a GERMAN??
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11-23-03, 12:00 PM | #5 | |||||
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IP: 64C2 D7B2
iight yo......sorry i didnt relize u posted...
MoF-Ya-Played, Check-Ya-Grade.. "Straight Fs", Cuz youFail To Come "Hard"// Upset-Ya-Parade, Your Punches are "Weaker" Then "Crashes" Wit "Parked Cars"// Accustomed To Not "Using-Ya-Feet" Cuz U Have Nothin To "Stand For"// Confusin-Ya-Speech, "Dieting" On "Rocks" So U Can Have A "Hard-Core"// Using-Harder-Sayings, Then His Lines Are Gettin Snapped-Like-Twigs// Using-Proper-Language, *MoF* Still Couldn't Make My I's (Eyes) Go Big// I'll Call Ya A-Door-Knob Cuz Ya Style Leads Straight Out-Tha-Door// Givin Credit For Weak Verses Is The Only Time U Step To The Fore// Like Delivering-Lighting-Bolts EnVy Transmits-Thunderous-Blows// Then Toss Ya Life Under-The-Remote So U Can Have Shit-Under-Control//
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11-23-03, 12:49 PM | #6 | ||||||
Up and comming
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IP: 92D7 C649
opening -
flow - metas - multis - Envy punches - Envy wordplay - Envy vocab - .... complexity - Envy closing - Envy my vote - Envy Skillz Not a bad battle. Can ya peep these please? http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93603 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92779 |
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11-23-03, 12:50 PM | #7 | ||||||
Up and comming
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IP: 92D7 C649
Aight it's not lettin me poll my vote. Have a MOD put it in. Peace .................................................. .................................................. .....
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11-23-03, 01:04 PM | #8 | ||||
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IP: 8AFF 7D25
Opening- Envy (had a couple of punchlines, MoF lacked punches in his opener)
Flow- Envy (MoF's flow was choppy due to a lot of mispelled words that I couldn't pronounce..and his syllable structure didn't match up in each bar...EnVy's flow was a lot smoother..) Metas- Envy (Envy had a metaphor in almost every line..MoF had some metaphors but they were weak and not as consistent..) Multis-Envy (again...envy just had more multis, and they were also bigger, better rhymes..) Punches-Envy (once again....just like the metaphors, Envy had a punch in almost every line, if not EVERY line...for the most part his punches were pretty straight too...MoF had a severe lack of punchlines) Wordplay-Envy (the Dieting on rocks line was pretty good, and was the best example of wordplay in his verse I think...although I didn't get the proper language line....MoF really didn't have any wordplay that I could decipher.) Vocab-Tie (both used some decent vocab....) Complexity-Envy (definately b/c each of his rhymes were more complex...his punches were though prevoking without being too complex...overall his verse was much more complex) Closing- Envy (without a shadow of a fuckin doubt....the last line about "shit under control" was NICE....a good closer....MoF just seemed like he ran out of shit to say for his closer) .::My Vote::. EnVy SKiLLZ Peace (btw can u drop an honest vote on Emerge Vs. RapidFire)
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11-23-03, 01:06 PM | #9 | ||||
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IP: 8AFF 7D25
it won't let me poll vote either...I think someone fucked up the poll voting system lol.....someone fix that ish..and whoever adds Tag's vote to the polls can u add mine too?
peace
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11-23-03, 01:13 PM | #10 | |||||
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IP: 64C2 D7B2
you gotta be registered to vote on the poll...thats why
thanks for the opinons anyway uppin for some votes from registered people.............. com on.... __________________________________________________ _____________
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11-23-03, 02:39 PM | #11 | ||||||
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IP: 9B6A 1F1E
Breakdown
punches=envy..jus try not to use.."..." flow=both metas=envy enjoyment=envy structure=both personals=envy creativity=envy sustainment=envy overall=envy pz not a bad battle at all |
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11-23-03, 03:02 PM | #12 | |||||||
BE MySELF 'n' STAY MySELF
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IP: 3A75 402C
yo envy ya shit was tight....
i expected that.... that looks quite straightforward fo u......not a prob fo me.... then lets get sum more votes in here... peace!
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turn ya back on me, get slapped and lose ya legs... IM NOT ALLOWED TO SAY: "NIGGA!" Voice Of Tha Streetz Ya JUDGEMENT DAY
What, I am a GERMAN??
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11-23-03, 03:08 PM | #13 | ||||||
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IP: 64C2 D7B2
thanks for the vote brix.....
uppin............................. and how do u register to vote......i cant figure it out __________________________________________________ __________ |
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11-23-03, 03:09 PM | #14 | ||||||
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IP: 64C2 D7B2
ohh shit my bad............................
i went on my boys name accedentily sorry............ |
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11-23-03, 03:57 PM | #15 | |||||
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IP: 64C2 D7B2
yo sorry bout that............................
uppin #4................................. com on people............................................ .......
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