Here is a little short thing I wrote

Dare to push your way out of your mother`s womb;
Dare to do your very best until the day they lay your tomb;
Dare to live a full life in between;
Dare to dream the impossible dream.

Dare to learn how to walk undaunted by the fact that you might fall;
Even if you fall learn from your mistake and dare to try some more;
Dare to grow out of your mother`s craddling arms;
Dare to bring your boisterous temper to a calm.

Dare to find yourself a life long friend;
Dare to love her until the very end;
Dare to be loyal and faithful to her;
Dare to ignore that fleshly stir;
Dare to love her with all your heart;
Treat her like a queen, respect her, be smart!

Dare to leave your parent`s house;
With a well chosen bride to be your spouse;
Dare to start again that orbit around the earth;
As you announce to this world your child`s birth.

In case, my friends, you didn't see my plan;
I am saying dare, dare to be a MAN!

this had potential.. n' alot of it.
i could see if you improved you'd have
alot better piece here,, just elevate
you had a good concept

n' hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102145

Even though the dare to prove can get old quick, I think ya did a pretty good job here.....

5.2/10.....

Nice flow on this peice dogg....

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