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Check in and ill start keyin...

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iight checkin' in spit ya shit dawg, good luck********************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** *******

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<a href="http://http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?p=1194274">Se7eN v.s Long Beach Finest</a>

aight. sorry about the wait. i had to go eat. ill have it posted up in about 20-30 minutes. and you can drop tomorrow. p'z

Let us-dettach-this.. until 7's face gets reddish-with-sadness;
I have love for 7 due to my fetish-for-whackness;
Wreckin-with-tactics.. So why dont we be gone with facts;
Pride attacked-me, Ya Ma turned on me, so I jumped honor back;
Upon-ya-snaps.. I-crack ya fingers, to have you absurdly-AWW'n;
My punches have jaws-droppin.. like you were Permanently-Yawnin;
7 heard-all-my-tauntin.. After I put ya presence-in-poverty;
So if the 'truth hurts' then my verse in the essence-of-honesty;
Ya-botherin.. Reached the Top of shit list.. but ya rankin-was-luck;
Your a 'Hidin Jew'.. I've peeped ya shit.. 'Anne Frankly',-you-suck;
Takin-ya-bucks, Statin-you-fucked, ya verse is tollin-a-prophet;
7 can try to steal my verse, but let it burn a hole-in-his-pocket;
Go with-the-topic.. Ya curdlin at my knife.. Wastin him, and killin the final-sewage;
So If battling is the backbone of hiphop.. I'm drainin spinal-fluid;

ehh... not bad drop. 7 drop yours soon.

nice drop liked this part


Let us-dettach-this.. until 7's face gets reddish-with-sadness;
I have love for 7 due to my fetish-for-whackness
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hahahahahahha made me laugh

Ayo, something 4 u lil phresh,

yo, yo, yo, Ayo,

I'm battlin' a pussy, a gay, stupid, and worthless rookie/
He's faker than Lays, trying 2 sell some oroe cookies/
Pussy, this a handicap fight, I'll win this shit and u know I'm right/
So u can spit wit your lil phresh dick, while I spit wit a mic/
Your white ass is on the run, stab a fork in ya cause your done/
Your so ugly, I can't call ya my neighbor, my nephew, or my son/
Juss for fun, Lil phresh hangs in his hood, like he should/
He would fuck any 1 of his boy friends, and he knows he would/
My shit ain't tollin' phrophets, it's opening up the Armegedon/
wit the shit you stick your head in, is only shit you juss said then/
U need a MED then, you blow like a trebel, I'm raps next devil/
I'm stuck battlin' a guy, who's only on the handicap level/
So be careful, I'm toxic, when I go 2 pop you stupid bitch/
You didn't use many punches, juss love and some cupid shit/

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<a href="http://http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?p=1194274">Se7eN v.s Long Beach Finest</a>

Uppin' for votes people, don't sleep on it, Uppin x1************************************************ *****

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<a href="http://http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?p=1194274">Se7eN v.s Long Beach Finest</a>

lil phresh
Let us-dettach-this.. until 7's face gets reddish-with-sadness;
I have love for 7 due to my fetish-for-whackness;
6/10

Wreckin-with-tactics.. So why dont we be gone with facts;
Pride attacked-me, Ya Ma turned on me, so I jumped honor back;
6/10

Upon-ya-snaps.. I-crack ya fingers, to have you absurdly-AWW'n;
My punches have jaws-droppin.. like you were Permanently-Yawnin;
7/10

7 heard-all-my-tauntin.. After I put ya presence-in-poverty;
So if the 'truth hurts' then my verse in the essence-of-honesty;
8/10

Ya-botherin.. Reached the Top of shit list.. but ya rankin-was-luck;
Your a 'Hidin Jew'.. I've peeped ya shit.. 'Anne Frankly',-you-suck;
7/10

Takin-ya-bucks, Statin-you-fucked, ya verse is tollin-a-prophet;
7 can try to steal my verse, but let it burn a hole-in-his-pocket;
6/10

Go with-the-topic.. Ya curdlin at my knife.. Wastin him, and killin the final-sewage;
So If battling is the backbone of hiphop.. I'm drainin spinal-fluid;
6/10


overall 46/70



se7en
I'm battlin' a pussy, a gay, stupid, and worthless rookie/
He's faker than Lays, trying 2 sell some oroe cookies/
6/10

Pussy, this a handicap fight, I'll win this shit and u know I'm right/
So u can spit wit your lil phresh dick, while I spit wit a mic/
6/10

Your white ass is on the run, stab a fork in ya cause your done/
Your so ugly, I can't call ya my neighbor, my nephew, or my son/
5/10

Juss for fun, Lil phresh hangs in his hood, like he should/
He would fuck any 1 of his boy friends, and he knows he would/
5/10

My shit ain't tollin' phrophets, it's opening up the Armegedon/
wit the shit you stick your head in, is only shit you juss said then/
6/10

U need a MED then, you blow like a trebel, I'm raps next devil/
I'm stuck battlin' a guy, who's only on the handicap level/
7/10

So be careful, I'm toxic, when I go 2 pop you stupid bitch/
You didn't use many punches, juss love and some cupid shit/
6/10


overall 41/70



my vote lil phresh

plz drop an honest vote on this it's being slept on real bad
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102292

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uppin x2 come on people vote on this battle please, iight juss don't sleep on it, k Vote ***********

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<a href="http://http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?p=1194274">Se7eN v.s Long Beach Finest</a>

Lil phresh took this one, his shit was more complex with more multis and made me laugh more, some good metas too, se7en was just a bit repetitive, nothing too exiting, my vote don't count any way tho lol chek this out and vote please, it's an old battle of mine i need 3 votes to win:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=88742

Vote - Lil Phresh

Conclusion
This was a pretty weak battle. There were some nice attempts in here by both of you. I felt that phresh brought more effect with this punches. He had a little more creativity in there. Both strucures were straight. Maybe work on your rhyme schemes more. But lil phresh just had more effect with the punches. It was pretty close though, keep elevating playas...

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aight thanx man. make sure to poll ur vote if u haven already. aight guys. 2-0 me. lets keep em coming

PLease return the Honest vote in the battle between me and chrit... The link is in my sig... It would be much appriciated...
Remember I took the time to vote on this, please do the same for chrit and myself...

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lilphresh took this one.

Reason:
had better punches
Jaw Drop line was classic
Ryhme scheme as better than tha average one two. that prophet
"Anne Frankly" line killed you. prophet i didnt see any quotables but both good pieces


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102779