Rules - U spit first, 10 lines minimum

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Mystic (Traitor)

I no longer hit wit bullets just *ROCKETS*, and leave battles closed like neclace *LOCKETS/
rip ya arms out the *SOCKETS*, beat you senseless with'em till ya face is pushed in like *POCKETS/
no change of TOPIC, all ya text and audio is *NONSENSE*, it could never prosper over my treacherous *CONTENTS/
this battle will be won and closed like a *LOCK-IN*, I wouldn't say it was a KO but a TKO the way ya body got hit and lyrically *KNOCKED-IN/
yo rhymes are outta style and forgot like the word *JOSHIN!!!/
I keep *ON* runnin catz over and jumpin on *DOMES* like PRIEST *HOLMES/
Check mah *BARS* you're not able to defeat this rising *STAR*, I haven't even spit the minimum and beatin you by *FAR/
I got more chrome than a Big Tymer's #1 stunna *CARS/
I *BLAST* so *FAST* olympic judges couldn't clock how quickly I whipped dat *ASS/
Your fuckin *TRASH* i turn punks to *ASH* with a Rhyme *MASS*, of *1000 KILOGRAMS* to smoke you faster then lime green *GRASS/

Hmmm, I didnt think u were accepting the challenge. Give me like 20-40 minutes max cuz Im at work and dont wanna get fired............................................. .................................................. ...................................

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Mystic (Traitor)

Focus'd slained this herb, so I'll hit ur ribs to make u verbs fumble+
Callision? Ur words crumble, it now appears like ur verse is mumbled+
U've been lacking depth..pretend this is an audio..Listen..U suck ass in text+
Strapping ether to a top dogg surgeon is the only way ya impact a vet+
U could double ur efforts, but u'll just be cloning wak..Ur phony black+
Ur record 0 in 1,Okay..I'll take it easy cuz Wisconsin aint known for rap+
Ur writtens going audio is like listening to a moaning cat, U screech talk+
I have ya tasted graves in a dreams, Kill ya off while ya sleep walk+
Ya stupid..donated bmx bikes is the only way ya could FREEstyle+
Ya could guess star on Mardres Gras but still wouldn't be wild+

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Mystic (Traitor)

up for some votes............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...................

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Mystic (Traitor)

OPENER: ANTONIO - Callision was jus reppin himself

FLOW: ANTONIO - it flowed alot smoother

PUNCHES: TIE - there wasnt that many good ones at all on either side, and Callision just seemed to try to make sense out of whatever word he could rhyme next

PERSONALS: ANTONIO, he talked bout how Callision lost before, and Callison just ripped random rhymes

MULTIES: ANTONIO by a bit, cause its harder to rhyme every last 2 words and make it still make sense, then jus put in a bunch of multies in one long ass line like Callison

VOCAB: ANTONIO- Collision just rhmes the same words we've seen a thousand tymes, ass, cars grass..etc. U can only do that if u do it cleverly enough and u didnt.

CLOSER:ANTONIO - Basicly it was more clever then Collisions, Alot more clever.

OVERALL VOTE: ANTONIO BANDERAS

Thanks for the vote..... Anyone else voting here???


Come one guys. I cant vote yet, but I can rate your writings.......................................... .................................................. ..................................

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||Sonny Barz! - The Middle Weight 1-2 Punchline Champion||SickHead.||Fly-E||Antonio Banderas|


Mystic (Traitor)

Votes?????

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Mystic (Traitor)

Votes.......PLEASE

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Mystic (Traitor)

Guess this is my last up...


What a waste of fucking time.............................................. .................................................. ................

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Mystic (Traitor)

ite antonio gets my vote cuase of all rnd better verse.his flow was better also structure.punches didnt hit hard but harder than the otha man.work on mre personals.......................put a vote on this dnt woz bout poll cus u cnt http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102351 .........thx............pz

yeah Antonio's drop seemed to have more flow, structure and better vocab..the Callisions drop was weak..some played lines..

^sorry

vote...Antonio

i entered my reasons ^up there (previous post) it won't let me edit..or i would have.....

BREAKDOWN!!!!!!!!!!!!!

COLLISON

I no longer hit wit bullets just *ROCKETS*, and leave battles closed like neclace *LOCKETS/
rip ya arms out the *SOCKETS*, beat you senseless with'em till ya face is pushed in like *POCKETS/
OK OPENER LITTLE SIMPLE RHYME SCHEME

no change of TOPIC, all ya text and audio is *NONSENSE*, it could never prosper over my treacherous *CONTENTS/
this battle will be won and closed like a *LOCK-IN*, I wouldn't say it was a KO but a TKO the way ya body got hit and lyrically *KNOCKED-IN/
KINDA WEAK HERE AND MAN UR LINES ARE STREEEETCHED

yo rhymes are outta style and forgot like the word *JOSHIN!!!/
I keep *ON* runnin catz over and jumpin on *DOMES* like PRIEST *HOLMES/
BLAH

Check mah *BARS* you're not able to defeat this rising *STAR*, I haven't even spit the minimum and beatin you by *FAR/
I got more chrome than a Big Tymer's #1 stunna *CARS/
PLZ TELL ME U AINT JUST SAY DAT?

I *BLAST* so *FAST* olympic judges couldn't clock how quickly I whipped dat *ASS/
Your fuckin *TRASH* i turn punks to *ASH* with a Rhyme *MASS*, of *1000 KILOGRAMS* to smoke you faster then lime green *GRASS/
VERSE WAS WACK HORRIBLE...ELEVATE HOMIE FA REAL....GET IN THE MIRROR AND FREESTYLE BATTLE YOURSELF...THATS WHAT I DID...ATLEAST TRY DON'T STRETCH UR LINES AND TAKE ALL DEM FUNNY ASS SYMBOLS OUT UR VERSE
OVERALL=4/10

ANTONIO

Focus'd slained this herb, so I'll hit ur ribs to make u verbs fumble+
Callision? Ur words crumble, it now appears like ur verse is mumbled+
PRETTY NICE

U've been lacking depth..pretend this is an audio..Listen..U suck ass in text+
Strapping ether to a top dogg surgeon is the only way ya impact a vet+
VET=VETNARIAN=LINES ARE PLAYED


U could double ur efforts, but u'll just be cloning wak..Ur phony black+
Ur record 0 in 1,Okay..I'll take it easy cuz Wisconsin aint known for rap+
LOL

Ur writtens going audio is like listening to a moaning cat, U screech talk+
I have ya tasted graves in a dreams, Kill ya off while ya sleep walk+
...

Ya stupid..donated bmx bikes is the only way ya could FREEstyle+
Ya could guess star on Mardres Gras but still wouldn't be wild+
[B]WHY WOULD HE WANNA BE WILD????? WEAK ASS VERSES FROM BOTH EMCEES BUT BANDERAS TOOK THIS BARELY BECAUSE HE HAD STRONGER PUNCHES NICER STRUCTURE AND A GOOD SCHEME


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