o god i just want u to kno that i got mad respect for u but lets go

good luck

10 lines

due by 7 eastern time tonight

no d/r
no crew
no feedin
no hate
blind spit

u spit first

and god have mercy on my soul

good luck bro

i'll try to meet the time but i have one verse to make against someone else

checking in

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Huh china.

aight no problem just spit when u can^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

checking in ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ill go first ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Get slapped with twice your reach just watch my rage/
Ignite and have you tasting Spears, like Madonna at the VMA's/
Im subsidin it, plus my gun..im firin it/
And It'll cave ya chest in so far Osama will run and hide in it/
It was good to battle you cuz today i was in need of a laugh/
When you see five straight votes for me then you can be the one do the math/
Im not the person to fuck wit, your luck is diminished/
Your ripley's believe it or not, while i'm up in the guiness/
See i'm like Clemens on the pitcher's mound, i got this under control/
There's no defense aganist my lyrical curve balls... there aimed for your soul/


good luck to you bro


explanations:
madonna and britney kiss at vma's
ripleys believe it or not is a lower record holder thing than guiness
guiness is better and more superior
and clemens throws curve balls lol

again good luck

spit at any time just dont prewrite

nice spit checking into this also...i'll spit in a lil bit it's gonna take a while i have 10 bars to make

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Huh china.

Aight check it

Make you lose your train of thought like forgetting to ride the subway//
Like traffic jams, delayed, this dudes gay, like graffiti art, you get sprayed//

Gaz dont see himself beating me like kids masturbating blindfolded//
Hot spit make you scolded, ya flow couldnt be noticed even it you bold it//

Your played out and gay like watching instant replay "play Bi play"//
Go away, leave you stuck in ya prime like taking a Youth Foundation survey//

Leave Gaz overexcited like kids losing their virginity thrown over ships//
Ya fell but didnt slip, thats like having a conversation talking wit no lips//

Your not finding a way out like blind terrorists trapped in caves//
This kids brave, live on the net, die on the net, is on your tombstone engraved//





3rd bar: play by play..bi..bisexual
youth survery is a 3 hour survey that asks kids questions

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Huh china.

aight aight nice drop uppin 1 for votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

uppin for votes (1)

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Huh china.

GaZeBo

Get slapped with twice your reach just watch my rage/
Ignite and have you tasting Spears, like Madonna at the VMA's/

Dope wordplay

Im subsidin it, plus my gun..im firin it/
And It'll cave ya chest in so far Osama will run and hide in it/

....Ok...not great


It was good to battle you cuz today i was in need of a laugh/
When you see five straight votes for me then you can be the one do the math/

Kinda weak...


Im not the person to fuck wit, your luck is diminished/
Your ripley's believe it or not, while i'm up in the guiness/

Wordplay...


See i'm like Clemens on the pitcher's mound, i got this under control/
There's no defense aganist my lyrical curve balls... there aimed for your soul/

Straight...needs work
Ya wordplay was pretty good
Punches need work
Structure was a lil bit off...
Overall 15/20



Metaphysik

Aight check it

Make you lose your train of thought like forgetting to ride the subway//
Like traffic jams, delayed, this dudes gay, like graffiti art, you get sprayed//

Wordplay..decent punch

Gaz dont see himself beating me like kids masturbating blindfolded//
Hot spit make you scolded, ya flow couldnt be noticed even it you bold it//

Straight punch...wordplay...flow a lil off

Your played out and gay like watching instant replay "play Bi play"//
Go away, leave you stuck in ya prime like taking a Youth Foundation survey//

Wordplay...decent punch...creative

Leave Gaz overexcited like kids losing their virginity thrown over ships//
Ya fell but didnt slip, thats like having a conversation talking wit no lips//
...Hmmm...kinda weak

Your not finding a way out like blind terrorists trapped in caves//
This kids brave, live on the net, die on the net, is on your tombstone engraved//
LoL...pretty funny..dope punch
Verse was pretty good
Punches need ta hit a bit harder
Good with tha wordplay
Some points were creative
Overall 17/20

Metaphysik edged this one....
It was pretty close...
But GaZeBo didn't come much with punches

Vote-Metaphysik

PS...DONT PUT EXPLANATIONS ANYMORE

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aight thanks for the honest vote. at least some people take the time like u did. aight uppin for votes 2 this was a good battle^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Opener: Gazeebo ( haha nice line kat hadnt hurd 1 like that in awhile)
Punches: Meta took this because I felt his punches conned better
Personals: Tie
Flow: Tie
Structure: Meta
Closer: Meta barely nice by both

Close battle but meta took it with punches - 1

Vote gone.. Read new voting rules -Token

Ok...
Break done..

Fav lines from

GaZeeBo..

"Ignite and have you tasting Spears, like Madonna at the VMA's/"

Very well structured punch wise..reminded me of a Shakes Speare punch I did awhile back...!!

"And It'll cave ya chest in so far Osama will run and hide in it/"
Clever Punch decent...

I believe you should have come like this threw out the whole battle..

Ok now for..

MetaPhysik..Fav Lines...

"Like traffic jams, delayed, this dudes gay, like graffiti art, you get sprayed"

Kinda unique scheme nicely done..

"Gaz dont see himself beating me like kids masturbating blindfolded"

Was a funny line...was cool...

Ok

Punches..Meta
Creativity..Meta
Structure..You both need work..
Flow..edge to Meta..

Gaz...you came hard in the begginning..feel off at the end..Meta was strong threw out...


Both keep elevating...

Laters...

gazeebo
Get slapped with twice your reach just watch my rage/
Ignite and have you tasting Spears, like Madonna at the VMA's/
5/10[/b]

Im subsidin it, plus my gun..im firin it/
And It'll cave ya chest in so far Osama will run and hide in it/
4/10

It was good to battle you cuz today i was in need of a laugh/
When you see five straight votes for me then you can be the one do the math/
5/10

Im not the person to fuck wit, your luck is diminished/
Your ripley's believe it or not, while i'm up in the guiness/
4/10

See i'm like Clemens on the pitcher's mound, i got this under control/
There's no defense aganist my lyrical curve balls... there aimed for your soul
6/10


overall 24/50



metaphysik
Make you lose your train of thought like forgetting to ride the subway//
Like traffic jams, delayed, this dudes gay, like graffiti art, you get sprayed//
6/10

Gaz dont see himself beating me like kids masturbating blindfolded//
Hot spit make you scolded, ya flow couldnt be noticed even it you bold it//
7/10

Your played out and gay like watching instant replay "play Bi play"//
Go away, leave you stuck in ya prime like taking a Youth Foundation survey//
6/10

Leave Gaz overexcited like kids losing their virginity thrown over ships//
Ya fell but didnt slip, thats like having a conversation talking wit no lips//
6/10


Your not finding a way out like blind terrorists trapped in caves//
This kids brave, live on the net, die on the net, is on your tombstone engraved//
6/10


overa;; 31/50

meatphysik wins


plz drop an honest vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102931

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