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PennyWise 0 0%
alias 5 100.00%
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Old 12-23-03, 03:06 PM   #1
alias
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PennyWise Vs Alias

IP: 5BD4 3E07

i set up
you spit first
10 lines
usual rules
no d/r etc etc
 
Old 12-23-03, 03:08 PM   #2
PennyWise
Banned
 
IP: F9E5 9C47

Due In An Hour

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Old 12-23-03, 03:11 PM   #3
alias
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i didnt say a time limit but i will drop as soon as i can............................................... ...........................................
 
Old 12-23-03, 03:40 PM   #4
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style outdated, cant grasp moderness, like peeps wearin sandals,
get a 'grip', you couldnt 'hold' me back if i was born with 'handles',
im aint a 'psychic', but theres no need to foretell your 'wackness',
yous never gonna get the fire, cos u've jus started losin 'matches',
hate to deal with loose change, but 'penny's aint 'wise' battlin me,
why do herbs find my range, an step forwards for thier first defeat
you must not be in your proper mind by tryin to drop a ill rhyme,
becoz the hot lines in ya verses equal the same as a dollar sign's,
stand down, you couldnt elevate, if u was jury, risin in court rooms
well, i never expected, to type so quick, an merk pennywise so soon,
 
Old 12-23-03, 03:45 PM   #5
PennyWise
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Denying-Ya-Fame, I'm Rhymin'-Wit-Lames, Ya Skill Equalz 0 Like Capitalizes-In-Ya-Name
Ya Behind-In-Da-Game, Blinded-By-Pain, Ya Like Pics Of Gay Sex, U Like Gayz-In-Ya-Frame
My Fists Fold-In-Ya-Cheek, Like Photo's Of Anerexics Alias Just Showin-He's-Weak
Ya Flows-Ain't-Unique, I'll B Wise N Show U Ya Biggest Mistake By Exposing-This-Link
Spit Heat-Verbs, Along Wit Deep-Wordz.. But Like Atanta Teams Alias Is A Weak-Bird
Don't Seek-Wordz, I'll Defeat-Nerdz, Ur A Herb!! Like Faults In Tennis You'll Get Served
Wise Known To Jack-Dudes, This Battles Far From Opinions Cuz Its A Fact-You'll-Lose
Snap Ya Back-In-Two Cuz Alias Is Prone To Suck More Then Daily Used Vacuum-Tubes
Smash Faggots-Wit-Ease, My Punches Will Scar Ya Mind Wit A Traumatic-Disease
Once The Matic-Is-Squeezed, I'll Have Ya Thinkin U Out Of Breath Like Asthmatic-Beliefs
 
Old 12-23-03, 03:46 PM   #6
PennyWise
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Uppin For Votes.. Nice Verse Alias

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Old 12-23-03, 03:50 PM   #7
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aiight that link you has provided,
is
1- spamming
2- biting

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so maybe you will be banned????
 
Old 12-23-03, 05:33 PM   #8
Slim Thug
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Opener: Alias
Structure: Alias
Punches: Alias
Personals: Penny
Flow: Close but Alias
Closer: Penny (Alias overplayed mixed closer)
Overall: Close battle but Alias takes this with what I think better punches...
 
Old 12-24-03, 10:30 PM   #9
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aiight well...........................uppin.............. ...drop a fair vote.........an a link.........................
 
Old 12-31-03, 12:04 PM   #10
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IP: 5BD4 3E07

2cnd time uppin............................................. ...................bump..............bump......... .bump....................................
 
Old 12-31-03, 01:35 PM   #11
IC3yThuG
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ok i dont have 100 posts but i gotta say vote:alias

better flow better puches jus all round better

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Old 01-01-04, 02:02 PM   #12
The Jett
Im Short.Ur Fat.He's Gay.
 
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From: Ya Eah
IP: B323 F167

ok look here's the deal......

you don't bold your whole battle or any of it for that matter...it get's really stupid and makes people not even want to read it-

wit that said......
penny wise u tore the multi's up....but thats it...other wise ur verse lacked punches flo-meti's and structure for that matter....the style is wak...kill-the-dashes-all-over-the-place...

overall....alias came in witta better battle verse along with alot funnier an wittier wordplay and stronger vocab...his structure was much better and flo on key.....overall he murked this kid-

my vote- alias......penny learn and elevate....view other battles
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Old 01-01-04, 10:48 PM   #13
Virtuoso
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From: ..::Detroit, Michigan::..
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[quote]Opener: Alias
Structure: Alias
Punches: Alias
Personals: Penny
Flow: Close but Alias
Closer: Penny (Alias overplayed mixed closer)
Overall: Close battle but Alias takes this with what I think better punches...[quote]

sonned.... teh closer was a lil played an alaias came harder
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Old 01-01-04, 10:59 PM   #14
B.I.Detained
Mona Lisa.
 
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IP: 9E53 07A2

battle was aightish
alias..who are you?? jus wonderin
penny had right idea but dint deliver
BREAKDOWN
punches-a
flow-a
Structure-a
enjoyment-both
multis-Penny
sustainment-A
complexity-p
wordplay-a
overall-Alias

MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP PLZ...BEING SLEPT ON PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1
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Old 01-01-04, 11:18 PM   #15
B.I.Detained
Mona Lisa.
 
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YEP PEEP THE LINK PLZ ONE OF YA'LL..........................
NEED THIS TO BE LOOKED AT
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1
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