10 lines...
no feeding
no h c dr
good luck

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[b] HIS VERSE [\B]

ya name is technician u say u nice wit dem cars
but dat ain't gon help u when u spittin 10 bars
too bad ya occupation can't help wit ya rhymes
get da fuck out da game n go back to TOOL TIME
i see ya wit ya 9 mili piece! can't compare to my gun
as soon as u see da AK ya bitch ass is on da run
so get out da game, dis is respect n u lost
u just a bitch n my class can't fuck wit da boss
wanksta, you wanna be known? well pump u in da anus
now whos da lil bitch dats makin da other one famous?

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checking in..........beginning to key..................
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boy this is a cheap win

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ey yo i gotta tell u tho, if you good like reeeeeel good then ima ask you to be in da MC n da info on dat is
its me n my boy derek carson from east park aight
n we makin our lil demo in a lil bit but i put dat shit on hold cuz i want some peeps to make it up there ya know what im sayin, like da roc has already said they was gon listen to our demo like ROCAFELLA RECORDS, n im just on here to get some mo talent wit us ya know
out

First thing is, what kinda name is Thutch12
I'll burn this herb introduce him to dutch hell
It's that simple to roll up ya verse and ignite
I take this W, you dont even put up a fight!
I liked ya wise cracks and attempt at punchlines
I keyed in 5 minutes i guess u'd say its crunchtime
Theres 2 more bars for this bitch before the last call
Ya mouth shattered for talkin Rec-less wit a glass jaw
Nothin special in this verse yet, really just a little advice
Why you even steppin to a vet?, next time think twice

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upppn..........good battle............................................ .................................................. ............................................i went easy on you............................................... .........................be thankful

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[Verse1]
ya name is technician u say u nice wit dem cars
but dat ain't gon help u when u spittin 10 bars
too bad ya occupation can't help wit ya rhymes
get da fuck out da game n go back to TOOL TIME
i see ya wit ya 9 mili piece! can't compare to my gun
as soon as u see da AK ya bitch ass is on da run
so get out da game, dis is respect n u lost
u just a bitch n my class can't fuck wit da boss
wanksta, you wanna be known? well pump u in da anus
now whos da lil bitch dats makin da other one famous?[/verse1]

Weak kid rhymes
No good punches
Flow was ok.. but could use work
Used kid rhymes to much.......
Personals were lacked
Wordplay was lacked
Overall..........8/20




[verse2]
First thing is, what kinda name is Thutch12
I'll burn this herb introduce him to dutch hell
It's that simple to roll up ya verse and ignite
I take this W, you dont even put up a fight!
I liked ya wise cracks and attempt at punchlines
I keyed in 5 minutes i guess u'd say its crunchtime
Theres 2 more bars for this bitch before the last call
Ya mouth shattered for talkin Rec-less wit a glass jaw
Nothin special in this verse yet, really just a little advice
Why you even steppin to a vet?, next time think twice[/verse2]


Straight...
Dope punches
good personals
Dope wordplay
Some funny lines
Flow was good
Overall......11/20

Vote--Technician-

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thutch had a kool flow but he didnt have a single punch so basically the whole verse was filler, other than a personal or 2, not sayin much.. tech ive seen better from but he had some personals seasoned with a few punches here n there and a much better rhyme scheme so.. he hit his opponent harder

i don't know what thutch was thinkin but that was weak, nothin hit good at all, he lacked punches, no wordplay, his opener
was weak and he lacked heat..

tec had an ill opener, nicer flow, betta punches, came with some
ill barz..like tec said easy win...

kind of a weak battle by both emcees.. thutch you had alot of gun talk but really your verse lacked creativity and wordplay.. you can talk bout much more than bustin a gun in someones ass

technician.. you also came weak in this battle.. yet you had enough wordplay.. and disses to take this shit

hit this battle up with a vote and then ill poll vote in this

here the link

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=106253

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ya name is technician u say u nice wit dem cars
but dat ain't gon help u when u spittin 10 bars
.....hmmm naw sorry
too bad ya occupation can't help wit ya rhymes
get da fuck out da game n go back to TOOL TIME
almost a decent punch
i see ya wit ya 9 mili piece! can't compare to my gun
as soon as u see da AK ya bitch ass is on da run
/\not punch nor personal
so get out da game, dis is respect n u lost
u just a bitch n my class can't fuck wit da boss
/\nope
wanksta, you wanna be known? well pump u in da anus
now whos da lil bitch dats makin da other one famous?
/\personal




First thing is, what kinda name is Thutch12
I'll burn this herb introduce him to dutch hell
/\not punch
It's that simple to roll up ya verse and ignite
I take this W, you dont even put up a fight!
/\nope
I liked ya wise cracks and attempt at punchlines
I keyed in 5 minutes i guess u'd say its crunchtime
/\average
Theres 2 more bars for this bitch before the last call
Ya mouth shattered for talkin Rec-less wit a glass jaw
average
Nothin special in this verse yet, really just a little advice
Why you even steppin to a vet?, next time think twice
/\average as wel


this battle had no ''Wow'' lines but i think technician won
due to better punches...both need some work on how to
diss people keep it up

ey well, everyone read my lil post
yall niggas is stupid! aight aight
dats what yall need to write
haha
n den we'll see who got da last laugh

Vote : tech

ayo, this kid thuch was sick.... his rhymes were basic.. you got killed by punches alone. keep practsin....

ayo,

get at these

battle vs mel

battle vs. calis H.N.I.C

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