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01-20-04, 05:54 PM | #1 | |||
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[pre]Viscosity vs Mad Man
IP: D637 72D3
Verses Due: Saturday, January 24th 2004
Voting Ends: Monday, January 26th 2004 Topic: Learning To Fly
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01-20-04, 09:35 PM | #2 | ||||
Nigga Ima OG.
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IP: F713 F35C
dope topic
o' and checkin in.. gl Mad Man
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OG Status My people skills are way better then yours, nigga.. |
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01-21-04, 12:28 PM | #3 | |||||||
Jee-You Knit?
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IP: 7BFA 90FA
I am In Like Glish
votes: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108523 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...d.php?p=1124323
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-An Original RB Member: Yes, We're That Much Better- Throw Back .Compton Records. .Vicious Determination. "There are times when silence has the loudest voice" - Mike Bibby The First Ever Middle Weight Champion Last edited by Mad Man : 01-25-04 at 02:22 PM. |
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01-22-04, 03:58 PM | #4 | ||||
Nigga Ima OG.
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IP: 2099 B4BF
The circle of life sits beneath me
I fly discretly..the world lies underneath me Effortlesly, flying over the sea.. What was once huge, is now speck's of people My mind is feeble, opened to this new variety This new defied destiny is lethal.. The things I never thought I'd see-till I began to fly... as I begin to soar in the sky The world becomes dim, and shadow's trim my eye River's flow, and my heart open's.. My destiny begin's to grow, and I ressurect Bravery and hope grows like I flex Deep blue sky, I seep, soar in the sky's eye Plane lands, and im still flyin in my mind Because i've completed the design, and finished the plans... because I learned to soar in sky.... one of the few - who can fly
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01-22-04, 10:50 PM | #5 | |||||||
Jee-You Knit?
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IP: AA13 BD60
The fall seems too much, I am too afraid to leave
You said I'd be great things, but I do not believe I'm not as strong, now that you are gone I can't sleep, I wipe away tears at dawn I need guidance in my life, I can't deal, I am still too young All this came out of nowhere, and out the window I was flung I'm falling, not flying, it looks like their's no future for me I hear the words you use to say "All you have to do is believe" Your love carries me on, your love keeps me strong It feels like I'm being beckoned from the life beyond I will not take the shit they give, I will be who I am I will be what you wanted me to, I will be the creme da la creme But the nest is so small, and the world is so big I don't want my legs to fly away from this twig But I won't live in the past, and I won't let your memory die I start to flap my wings, I lift from the ground, I am just learning to fly.
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-An Original RB Member: Yes, We're That Much Better- Throw Back .Compton Records. .Vicious Determination. "There are times when silence has the loudest voice" - Mike Bibby The First Ever Middle Weight Champion |
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01-22-04, 11:05 PM | #6 | ||||
-Real Time-
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IP: FDD6 AE15
I Think Mad Man Took This One. He Had A Better Visual Picture Created.
It Was The Imagery And The Way His Verse Was Written. V: Mad Man |
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01-24-04, 12:27 PM | #7 | |||
Fuck You, I Rhyme Better
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IP: 8458 EAFD
Quick Reminder: You still have to vote on 3 other battles
Edit your votes into your check in |
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01-24-04, 02:08 PM | #8 | ||||||
Pleas, Not the teeth...!!
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IP: 76EB A20E
I must go with Mad Man...!!
I SOO felt this piece....U had an amaizing topic...Viscosity- I think u wasted this topic... I was intregued by the way Mad Mans bar structure (line length) fitted.... Good Work....U used the topic to show some part of ur writtin ability as much as u could... Mad Man |
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01-24-04, 02:15 PM | #9 | |||
Like Whoa...
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IP: 3273 E58A
Vote: Mad Man
Viscosity....your peice was bad.....Likem Big said: "You wasted this topic" ..too bad too MM: You dropped a really interesting peice. Probly the same view I would have taken on the topic. Imagery was good, and your content kept me reading. Nice, Ups to both. P.S. to mods....I'm Wr!te Mind |
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01-25-04, 05:06 PM | #10 | |||
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IP: A9A7 727D
viscosity-hmmm...this piece was very well constructed. It had some quality lines. It just seemed like you were rambling though...didn't really bring the topic to life.
mad man- I like the idea of falling and then saving yourself at the last minute. This piece was so dope, largely because it can be related to lives of a lot of people. good job. v/mad man
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01-25-04, 05:10 PM | #11 | |||
Fuck You, I Rhyme Better
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IP: B8B0 7253
Mad Man Wins
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