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01-22-04, 08:31 AM
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Help me elevate please
IP: 17AC 3451
I'm not the worst but want to elevate.....got any idea's.
Links in my sig!! p.s. And you can vote in it if ya want Last edited by Celebral_Killa : 01-22-04 at 08:51 AM. |
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01-22-04, 01:31 PM
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IP: 4577 CD9A
..Your punches were very weak...structure seemed okay...no personals..flow was decent..I think you'll get better with time..
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01-22-04, 08:56 PM
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dawg work alot on your punches and come really hard 2 everyone newbs and all cause some newbs r aliases and r really vets and pros so work on your punches and you'll be there dawg iight, welp elevate dawg
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01-25-04, 10:18 PM
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try to add metas and personals into ya punches.. they make them more compex
see feebles thread about personals
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