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02-09-04, 02:29 PM | #1 | |||||||
New to RB
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my rhymes
IP: 7A52 73B1
I rap for a living
my first rhyme started in the very beginning my raps r like 9mm bullets I'll kill u to the fullest these pussies r scare to go aganist me wha is it because I'm the real mc my rhymes r letal people tell me that my rhymes that my ilegal lunatic is my name for a reason to beat ur ass like the panthers when they lost the season my flows hit these beat like when bush hit up the shits creek
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02-09-04, 03:02 PM | #2 | |||
"The Eleete"
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IP: FAD9 BD2A
Well..........its been said before but self glorification OM rarely ever fly on Open Mic.....but you just got started.......your lackin a lot in this piece..........flow, vocab, etc........your new to the RB world i see.........ill i can tell you is keep at it......you only get better with time.......dont let anyone bring ya down an keep ya head up..........peace....hit my latest piece up when you get the chance.......
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02-09-04, 04:36 PM | #3 | ||||
Word.
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IP: DD10 0DFF
1 Open Mic Per Day...Follow The Rules.
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