I rap for a living
my first rhyme started in the very beginning
my raps r like 9mm bullets
I'll kill u to the fullest
these pussies r scare to go aganist me
wha is it because I'm the real mc
my rhymes r letal
people tell me that my rhymes that my ilegal
lunatic is my name for a reason
to beat ur ass like the panthers when they lost the season
my flows hit these beat
like when bush hit up the shits creek

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Lunatic

Well..........its been said before but self glorification OM rarely ever fly on Open Mic.....but you just got started.......your lackin a lot in this piece..........flow, vocab, etc........your new to the RB world i see.........ill i can tell you is keep at it......you only get better with time.......dont let anyone bring ya down an keep ya head up..........peace....hit my latest piece up when you get the chance.......

Foresight
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