damn homie i aint even gonan try u got 30mins.

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Not quite legendary yet....

I am one of the most feared anywhere' cause my mind tears masks like petty
shears//
I keep a bazooka behind my ears like y'all hold blunts...weird? That's just to
blow your mind! from here to anywhere//
I rip my way through mcee`s...no way?//
Way...like a paper mache and its okay//
if you think punk a*** can laugh and hide behind a mask//
I'll bust this vega up like a streetfighter match//
I don't switch positions just planes with intricate precision//
right now I'm in the play-in you are competition not nutrition dimension//
I'm gonna genie grant yo wish wish and send yo to thugz mansion//
where you'll serve as a bitch for this pimps with a collar as yo pension//

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Yeah I'm done with my verse long time now so don't make sure you drop yours.

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Wow i just saw this TODAY - ill key something.

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Not quite legendary yet....

Compared with S ? Nah & you know exactly where your heading...
When.. The only time this guy's the best men is @ his best friend's wedding ,

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Not quite legendary yet....

Compared with S ? Nah & you know exactly where your heading...
When.. The only time this guy's the best men is @ his best friend's wedding ,
Geek...I'm postive when i speak.. & known to be rapping wild...
While i unzip your girl's pants....Faster than extracted files . .
The fact is child... You have no talent.. it's simple queer , look.
You never get anything from you'r signed ... something like ya year book.

Done

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Not quite legendary yet....

skripts won this...he had 3 punches that hit harder then trinis whole verse....trini did have personals, but none that hit hard enuff to really shake my decision
vote = soul skripts...now go poll my vote
ps: i thought u were leavin????

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yo STriniBonafide had no structure it was hard to follow and half of the stuff he ended wit didnt even rhyme, Soul Skripts had great structure, alot of humor, good punches, and and several good personals. so to make a long story short Soul Skripts ripped this wanna be MC

Vote=Soul Skripts

SOul-Quik and easy no need to try
had everything a slight like similies
and metaphores..Lil balance but its aight...
Nothing to hard..Good drop

Strini-Work alot dogg..No hate but you did
come weak but its aight...Work on similies
and metaphores and balance...Also punches

v/Soul Skriptz return the favor http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128356

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Not quite legendary yet....

props to both lyricists on this one, as always, thank you for coming out.

Strini-I see in you a combination of inexperience, and ignorance to a.content and b.sense-making. I can already tell what style you like. but the problem is the fact that you are trying to use a style you haven't mastered or fully understood. the use of vocab is always nice. But sentence to sentence has to connect and mean something for it to truly be ill. You can't take the best parts of a painting and make one great one. IT all has to make sense and this is what you lacked. sense. i also see a bit of corniness as well(i am not dissing you at all, i just call it as i see it, so you can elevate)
I rip my way through mcee`s...no way?//
Way...like a paper mache and its okay//
that was a little corny. I think you should do what i SHOULD be doing, and that is get your feet wet with weaker emcees. I have made the mistake of battling vets as a newbie, and it's not good for ya record.(plus vets pray on innocent newbies for better records, lol) Just practice + full analysis of the lyricism aspect of the style you like and you'll be great in the future. Because i can already see potential of illness in you.

Soul Skripts-I've witnessed greats from you, and i damn near want to hate on you for battling this one. lol. but i can't. I saw a noticeable feeling of, i'll win this anyway, so i'm not even worried. this wasn't a serious battle, and i haven't seen one in a long time, because vets won't battle each other as much as they battle newbs. but i must admit this was a decent verse, and was just enough to get over.
easy readable structure, nice punches, made sense.

best of luck to both lyricists, though and much respect.

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vote=soul skripts

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