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04-26-04, 09:46 AM | #1 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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shadows edge vs. kingz(forced word match)
IP: 275E DC37
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battles go up monday check in by wedsday verses due by thrusday votes due by sunday rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse forced words must be bolded or something so people can see them bar limits: 16 bar min. 32 bar max. forced words you must use these in your battle verse or be d'q: contestant,transaction,negotiable,multimedia
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04-26-04, 10:05 AM | #2 | |||||
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IP: 75F5 BDD1
ayo, checking in, this gonna be a good one.
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04-26-04, 11:20 AM | #3 | ||||||
Street Royal-T
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IP: FF04 B08A
checkin in
yep 2 hot propects here. i aint guna go down without a fight
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04-29-04, 07:10 PM | #4 | ||||||
Street Royal-T
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IP: 3EEB 5381
My verse casts a ‘shadow’ over ya whole damn life….
….punches so accurate and precise…like a surgeons knife but you ain’t gonna survive this surgery…your at the ‘edge’ of your existance this kid raps about the 'same thing all the time'…and calls it 'persistence' this bitch is ‘fake’…tryin to ‘hustle’ you…that’s a fact son but none of the crowd gonna fall for shadow’s ‘fraudulent transaction’ scared to lose?…this bitch Pmed me askin if this battle was negotiable? damn…his avatar is his self portrait …and he wonders why he is unsociable I’ll murder u beyond text…could combine with sound..that’s multimedia You could even reach ‘my level’ if you ‘used’ or ‘stood on’ an encyclopedia Im bout to lyrically torture you…but aint gunna kill-ya-yet When im done with you…there be nuttin left but a ‘Silhouette’ he thinks his verse has got the crowd at the ‘edge’ of their seat I suppose that could be true…cos we are all falling asleep! This kids says he is ‘sick’….yeh dog you look like it Rapping like some1 tampered with ya drink…did someone spike it? Im a solo artist…but I’ll still kill ya crew headphone murder My verse is so well ‘structured’…its supported with a ‘girder’ I guess this kid is gonna use kings jokes…no doubt we should call him the ‘sahara dessert’…cos of his lyrically drought look you aint even a worthy contestant you cudnt beat me with ya best chant this dog can’t even defend his self, with weak punches and sad flows but jus remember that after dark…there are no shadows! |
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04-29-04, 07:44 PM | #5 | |||||
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IP: 75F5 BDD1
Wow holy shit I forgot this was forced word... ok hang on I gotta rework my verse...
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04-29-04, 08:10 PM | #6 | |||||
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IP: 75F5 BDD1
This cat’s 16-1, thinking battling herbs brings recognition
It’s like… I enjoy your verse but prefer the Sesame Street rendition My second league battle, and still predicted to win This cat spit one nice bar all his life… and already he a has been Crack head father, dropped you so many times like your avvy Now all Kingz say is “I wanna drop shit.. just like my daddy” Call you a calendar, spit line after line and they all come out weak Check it.. It’s funny, this kid call himself hard running a boutique Ghetto? Fuck guns… this kids “last resort” is Club Med Ever wonder why ~R~ looked at you… and promoted Phat Mic instead?* Your music so bad, you being arrogant when you say it’s the worst Your multimedia player cry when you play just a verse Sickest you ever been required a dose of decongestant…. You get so few votes, you’d be a winning Survivor contestant Plain sad when buying your verse for free is a losing transaction Lace my verse with herbicide, now you having allergic reaction… My win not negotiable, my verse contains no flaws This cat just wishing for a tie the way he drops drawers/draws Dog, this is the day of your execution, take it with pride It’s like I’m replaying the French Revolution… …. Because this verse is regicide.**
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04-29-04, 08:11 PM | #7 | |||||
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IP: 75F5 BDD1
This should be there:
*Phat mic is the new leader of UE, Kingz crew ** regicide = the killing of a king
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04-30-04, 01:00 AM | #8 | |||||
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IP: 75F5 BDD1
Be nice to get some votes on this ish...
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04-30-04, 06:47 AM | #9 | ||||
Light Weight
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IP: DF7B C8F7
kings nice verse, the structure was good and u had a couple of nice lines in there, although im not feeling ur opener ur closer was aight, good job
s,e good clean opener aswell as closer, nice flow although kings was beta, nice punches aswell, and very hardhittin punches vote-shadow drop feedback http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120828
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04-30-04, 07:18 AM | #10 | |||||
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IP: 0358 0BEE
structure was good on both threads, i liked kings "lyrical drought" line
but both lacked punchlines! i got respect 4 shadow edge but feel, he had a weak performance this time round there were'nt much b'tween it but im votin KINGS oh and drop a vote on my battle so i can seal this bitch above me PEACE OUT |
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04-30-04, 09:11 AM | #11 | |||||||
The New King Of New York
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IP: 03BD 6ECD
Wow, both of you came madd hard.
Kingz- Flow: Decent, except the contestant/chant bar was madd short, I was kinda like WTF, but otha than that, it was pretty solid. Punches:The Murder/Girder bar was madd good. Punches was pretty good throughout. Personals: Good. The closer especially. Vocab: Good, not great though. Fav Line: this dog can’t even defend his self, with weak punches and sad flows but jus remember that after dark…there are no shadows! Shadow's Edge- Flow: Very Solid. Very readable and easy to stay wit. Punches: Good. Opener was nice. Personals: Really fuckin' good. The club med/Instead bar was just downright nasty son. Vocab: Great. Nice use of the English Language basically. Fav Line: Ghetto? Fuck guns… this kids “last resort” is Club Med Ever wonder why ~R~ looked at you… and promoted Phat Mic instead?* Very Good job by both of you, just think Shadow brought a lil' more to the table. Real good job, it lived up to what I expected it to be, a really good, enjoyable, and close battle. Vote/Shadow's Edge |
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04-30-04, 10:00 AM | #12 | ||||||
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IP: 0F6A C933
kingz you took dis one man... you were FResh... shadow edge you were good too though but my vote goes to kingz
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i cooked and grilled ya, dats all that took to kill ya, you better recognise me like a look familiar, you want an mc battle? you beat around the bush, like you scared to lick pussy so u eat around the tush, i need a boy i can push, someone i can bully, no, i dont think you understand fully, me without the lines is like mustard without the hines, your the busta without the rhymes, i'll rip the shit out ya lines. |
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04-30-04, 10:09 AM | #13 | |||||||||
...Belong...
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IP: DF7B C8F7
I think king got this 1. He brought good delivery and was good with the forced words. Dont get me wrong, the other guy was jus as good...but i felt king was more consistant wit tha punchlines. props to both tho if i could vote 4 both...i would peace!
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04-30-04, 10:10 AM | #14 | ||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 8CD1 A2EF
kingz - pretty sweet opener, good use of forced words -
"I’ll murder u beyond text…could combine with sound..that’s multimedia You could even reach ‘my level’ if you ‘used’ or ‘stood on’ an encyclopedia" good flow, with sme hard punches. shadow - nice opener. smooth flow throughout, jut thought kingz was a little better. An' i feel Kingz had some harder hitting punches, close battle. Vote - Kingz
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04-30-04, 10:15 AM | #15 | |||||
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IP: 63F3 DE49
best line in this was...
Ghetto? Fuck guns… this kids “last resort” is Club Med Ever wonder why ~R~ looked at you… and promoted Phat Mic instead?* that was straight but overall KINGz was whoopin' ass wit' a good opener... shadow's edge- you were pretty good but kingz takin' it this time... close but my vote: KINGz
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