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Proliphik | 5 | 100.00% | |
fine mind | 0 | 0% | |
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05-03-04, 06:37 AM | #1 | |
This is my first post!
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Proliphik vs fine mind
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10 lines only
no dick riding 1 post |
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05-03-04, 06:44 AM | #2 | |
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IP: B714 51BD
It's the hosts privilege - you spit first.............
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05-03-04, 06:51 AM | #3 | |
This is my first post!
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battle
IP: DF7B C8F7
my words are told to the unknown, they will derange to change you/
theses raps are laps that colapse you faster than my crew stomps/ i'll make u a fake, i'll give you the biggest head ache pooping out ya brain/ this is a peice of cake, i can easerly finish you off for me its like one big scof/ im gonna run you over the speed of lightning watch you fly like a shuttled spaced rocket/ i'll whip your ass lay you out can' you stop this mind from wipeing you out/ you get crushed and made into something that an't lush, rush ya to the hosital with heart failure/ you an't my league im lowering your fatigue, i feed on greed and your like a growing seed/ quite rap, i'll stamp on you like a angry tramp going balistic, i'll pelt you away like a rubber band elastic/ you can't stop me, im the top baby my flows to strong for you to hold back it stacks on you like a pil of open draws/ |
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05-03-04, 07:25 AM | #4 | |
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IP: B714 51BD
Mediocre emcees marvel at my magnificence
It's no co-incidence you're reduced to insignifcance It's not that I despise you, this is business man, not personal But stepping to Proliphik's like WitchDoctor's put a curse on you You're running over who? Ain't got enough tread in your Firestones It's getting kinda chilly, cos you JUST ain't spitting fire, homes, You f*cked around and called me out, you upped and took the wrong lane I spit hot flames, and I got game like I'm LeBron James You got heart, kid, I'll give you that, but you'll never be in my class What's the point in having heart when your skills have had a triple by-pass?
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05-03-04, 11:12 AM | #5 | |
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IP: C348 5CFF
alright..this was a aight battle...
Fine: hey dawg, ur spit was hella hard to read...some of the words didn't even rhyme Pro: aight dawg...first two lines were nice voacb and u had a frew lil punches jst enough to beat him vote: pro |
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05-03-04, 11:29 AM | #6 |
GrOwN aSs MaN
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my words are told to the unknown, they will derange to change you/
theses raps are laps that colapse you faster than my crew stomps/ ^^ ugh...awful rhyming here um.. Mediocre emcees marvel at my magnificence It's no co-incidence you're reduced to insignifcance good, if not a bland opener aiyo...i was pullin for fine mind because he had nice vocab and set-up but, his rhyming hurt him big time... Dawg...stick to true end rhyme...throw some internals in there Vote: Pro...better flow and rhyming Punches were about equal in this...decent, but could have been better on both parts |
05-03-04, 12:03 PM | #7 | |
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IP: B714 51BD
All constructive critiques are well accepted
uppin for more votes, tho.....
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05-03-04, 12:53 PM | #8 | |
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yo Proliphik kilt. plain and simple. beter punches and over all flow was decent. the cpmpetitor verse was good to but you punchez were weak. i don't even know what your were talking bout. i droppe d and honest vote don't forget to return the favor.
vote=Proliphik
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THIS RAP SHIT IS NOT A GAME CRAZE I GOT THE ARTILERY THAT AH RING YAH HEAD 4 DAYS SO ONLY COME AT ME PROPER IF YOU DON'T WANT TO RAP LIKE MACE
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05-03-04, 01:00 PM | #9 | |
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IP: B714 51BD
uppin for votes - keep 'em coming and we'll return da favour in ur battles....
One.
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05-03-04, 01:04 PM | #10 | |
Killin' G'z
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IP: D4FA A3B8
Proliphik - Alright spit man, had some good vocb in there and some good fro, followed up by some hard hittin punches.
Best Line - Mediocre emcees marvel at my magnificence It's no co-incidence you're reduced to insignifcance (niice opener) Worst Line - You f*cked around and called me out, you upped and took the wrong lane I spit hot flames, and I got game like I'm LeBron James (played) Find Mind - Alright spit man, had somew good multi's in there. You need to work on your flow a bit and use some harder punches. Best Line - NONE Worst Line - my words are told to the unknown, they will derange to change you/ theses raps are laps that colapse you faster than my crew stomps/ (stomps and you?... hmm...) OVERALL - I gotta give this battle to pro, he had better punches and his flowed better. Fine man you gotta get some punches in there and maybe use some personals.. and you gotta work on flowing your lines together better. VOTE - Proliphik RETURN THE FAV http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121868
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05-03-04, 03:44 PM | #11 | |
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i gotta go wit proliphik here.
that shit was nicely put together. it flowed nice together. tha punches was landin where they was suppost to. It was just all in all better overall. good shit. vote-PROLIPHIK |
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05-03-04, 03:58 PM | #12 |
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IP: DF7B C8F7
im going with proliphik i see this.
Punches = Pro flow = pro Creativty = none Multis = prof Metas = non
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05-04-04, 03:10 AM | #13 | |
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Uppin' for sommore votes - I'ma return the favour & critique ur battles too, I'm sure Fine Mind will too.
Keep 'em coming...
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05-04-04, 03:12 AM | #14 |
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yo prolifik vote in one of my batlles and ill vote in this one aight!
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05-04-04, 03:13 AM | #15 |
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honest votes only please...............................
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