Aight check it
15-20 lines
No d/r h8 unexplained votes or crew votes
Me 1st
Honest votes only (If u got beef then Blacklist them coz i want it fair)
I'll spit when u check in...

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this aint a chk in.....u sed weve got till 2moz noon....that still stand????????????

That still stands i forgot to put that in soz

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ok...chck in...................spit wen ur ready....

Ha ha who da fucks dis man t-storm??? he dissed the DK Knights?!? Wot the fuck man ima let him feel this check and drop...

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...Lyrical style 1st class like a drug and ima pump mega slugs into this fake thug/
Who thinks he can come into the RB club and diss the Dk Knight Thugs/
Are u on a death wish coz if u are then i can carry it out on command...Like a Genie/
Coz im thinkin u aint feelin us or me...here's my glock HA and rest for eternity/
And this aint self gloryfied...these are truthful words/
Quit while ur ahead T coz u know gettin beaten like a bitch hurts/
And whats wit the name t-storm???...u think u wild or sumthin/
Our country (England) hardly gets hardcore storms...actually im wonderin/
Does the T stand for tiny, tryin or trippin?/
Coz u gettin tiny fo tryin...and my PIMP hand make sure u gonn be slippin/
Cover yoself up in quarentee...coz yo wack rap disease is a worry fo me/
Tiny storm is jus a lil rain shower...he'll pass over in 8 lines u'll see/
Im the biggest disaster that u'll probably ever see word is bond/
Oh except when u walked in on yo bitch and her ex Raymond/
Coz the truth is...EVERYBODY LOVES RAYMOND and yo bitch is willin 2 prove it/
But dont worry u wont be a virgin forever...1 day she'll give up the clit/
But ur gay...so u wont...ur gynophobic/ (gynophobic = fear of women real word)
I'd take u to a strip club...but u'd prolly run from it/
Pack yo bags and fly away the next day/
Collect call Raymond and tell him to flee the same way/ (Secret lovers)

Aight thats me done waitin on u...

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Keystyled to Kanye West (Work it out beat so read it fast thats y lines are long)

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dude that suxed wot did any of ya spit have to do wit t-storm??? t-storm u should be able to merk him now

they call u mad dog..n ur crew they call dark knights/
i call u sad dog.. n ur crew do shit but bite/
fukin wit me...set u all on fire...im crazy-psycho-manic/
ur crew alarm bell ringin...t cumin up swingin...cause u all to panic/
ur shits so weak..u been in for colonic irrogation?/
dnt try to understand...u wudnt know the meaning of personification/
bitch ull never surpass me...coz im insubordinate/
u cudnt work that out...if i gave u a map n tha co-ordinate/
bitch u claim ur serious...i think your all delerious/
ma styles complex,convex n concave...ur styles straight played/
you rap like u ashmatic...my style pumps like im pneumatic/
you must b sufferin from amnesia?...coz i tie u up in mastic(tape)
u need to grow a brain...ur styles fucked n lame/
ma gran cud do beta...n ur shit cud do wit her zimma-frame/
so fuck u...first i merked jay-dogg...n now ima merk you/
whos next in line...i take out ya whole bitch-ass crew.

C'Mon people vote dammit uppin# 1

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(Round of applause) I can't believe I'm doing this, but this battle was quite alright!!

"Are u on a death wish coz if u are then i can carry it out on command...Like a Genie/
Coz im thinkin u aint feelin us or me...here's my glock HA and rest for eternity/" - wasn't sure I was gonna like this line, but in the end I did - finished it well.

"And this aint self gloryfied...these are truthful words/
Quit while ur ahead T coz u know gettin beaten like a bitch hurts/" - this is just a good line

"And whats wit the name t-storm???...u think u wild or sumthin/
Our country (England) hardly gets hardcore storms...actually im wonderin/
Does the T stand for tiny, tryin or trippin?/
Coz u gettin tiny fo tryin...and my PIMP hand make sure u gonn be slippin" - all good solid rhyming, good continuity, I like it.
Shoot, I even thought the 'Everybody Loves Raymond' references were funny!!!

T-Storm
"ur shits so weak..u been in for colonic irrogation?/
dnt try to understand...u wudnt know the meaning of personification/
bitch ull never surpass me...coz im insubordinate/
u cudnt work that out...if i gave u a map n tha co-ordinate/" - liked this, man. Good put-downs & wordplay
"u need to grow a brain...ur styles fucked n lame/
ma gran cud do beta...n ur shit cud do wit her zimma-frame/
so fuck u...first i merked jay-dogg...n now ima merk you/
whos next in line...i take out ya whole bitch-ass crew." - A good finish, no doubt.

there were other good lines in there too, like the convex, concave/str8 played line.

However, only 1 person can get the vote, so mine goes to..
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Mad Dog! (Dang! Either Mad Dog has spat a good verse, or I'm drinking whiskey on an empty stomach again.... ain't no whiskey bottle around here, so it musta beena good rhyme! Props when and where they're due.)

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... but apparently certain cats don't want my vote.... that's cool & the gang, chalé.... I thought you might have let that stuff go, but clearly not!

it's on you, bruv

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drop a vote n drop ur links.....wll return favour asap

i gotta go wiv t-storm basically i just liked his flow beta, punches from both y'all were pretty weak but both still elevatin, t-storm took it wiv beta personals n much beta flow, mad ain't nobody wanna be listenin to a kanye beat n readin stretched lines, change ya structure dawg...pz

v/t-storm

return fava on dis battle...honest vote plz
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123463

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