10-20 lines
u spit first
3-0 is a ko and 5 to w/e wins
so go ahead and spit ya lines

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Street Killed:
The One(5-0)

go ahead and spit first punk

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Street Killed:
The One(5-0)

yo where da fuck r u spit ya shit already

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Street Killed:
The One(5-0)

u kallin me a punk?
look at u, a fat lil chunk
chunk a shyt, u kan't afford a pit
y don't u shut ur mouth an quit
go battle sumone as shyty as u
even betta, go get yaself a crew
maybe they kan help ya get betta
if u do send me a letta
a letta on how i waz rite
thank me,? u just might
now go, startin lookin
there's ur wife, she wantz ya cookin
u ain't no rappa
u a beava trappa
don't no wut ur doin on ere
ur just lookin for a kik in the rear
to get u in gear
to pik up ur career
here ya go wanna be
come for a rematch wen u kan at least try me

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Leav feedbak on ma battlez an don't even think i kare bout winz maw fuka! : An' don't think i care bout ma record etha

Look at this kid likes to get dissed/
All his lines are pittiful so dont get pissed/
Dont get pissed cuz ya gonna loose/
Kill u in a second didnt let u choose/
Look at this bitch callin himself the one/
This aint no fun this bitch is done/
And Im still not finished wit my verse/
U can tell dat I'm alwayz first/
Dont kno y he even picked up a mic/
Now he knows dat he shouldnt have stood up in this fight/
Itz ova so now listen and neva eva pick up another mic for the rest of ya life/
Cuz if u do ya gonna have a meeting wit a 10 inch knife/

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Street Killed:
The One(5-0)

IIght I got this kid done ya already kno dat I wonbut I need votes uppin for votes only ppl wit 20 post or more can vote remember explain ur vote and den vote on the poll

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Street Killed:
The One(5-0)

aight ppl, show the votes an explain em, win or lose i want feedback on mine, i'm still learnin, and Street, that was sick man, right on

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Leav feedbak on ma battlez an don't even think i kare bout winz maw fuka! : An' don't think i care bout ma record etha

well this battle was nuthin' too special at all for real ummm..... The One
u had good structure & decent flow but your punches were the definition
of whackness no offense Ima noob also....... Street you take this basically because you had better punches & everything else seriously if you both
just starting than you have a long ass time to elevate

do a honest vote on my battle: it's in my signature

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iight cooll 1-0 and no I aint startin to rap thing is i felt like takin it ez

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Street Killed:
The One(5-0)

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this was a wack battle.....the one you need t o elevate and work on your structure hardcore

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WHACK ASSED BATTLE. Neither of you had anything to offer.
The one had no flow, structure or punches. Get a lesson in how to battle
Street ya had punches but they were simple.

Vote-Street

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oh yeah peep my battl eand drop an honest vote (its in mah sig)

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One

Flow 5/10
Rhymes 5/10
Structure 5/10
Punches 5/10

Street

Flow 7/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 8/10

v/ Street

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

both these cats aint impressed too much...One you know i got love for you but lengthen ur lines more dont just use 4 words a line, and use metaphors and shit.
Street it was pretty simple but u didnt need much on dis battle, u beat him in every category but didnt kill him.

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