10-12 lines
no crews
no feeding
no hate votes

Whats happenin then, Am I spittin first or are you gonna, Gonna have to be soon, gotta leave in a few.

Ok, I'm gonna spit now, cos I'm ready so here it is for you,

This bitch comes out with more crap than a Fat man's ass,
Tryin to make his rhyme smart, sat in the remedial class,
I serve you up like a waiter serves food,
You'll reply to this angry cos you'll be in a mood,
Knowin theres no way to step up more than this,
Your method of improving is drinkin veteran piss,
I'll rip you apart with this battle I'm spittin,
Try to throw a punch, Not one of them's hittin,
You lie to people in forums, sayin yous a street child,
Science book, Thick glasses, Your reputation : Mild,
Time to wrap this shit up, with one final punch,
Go beat a Dick you fuckin faggot ass-munch.

Much love to my people,

Traxik

Hey so what? u spittin yet Rican, i spit first cos i checked the thing and cudnt be bothered waitin, Let's see what u got then.

Traxik

i got ya sweating like grease from oscar mayer/
my rymes shine more than his that its written in high lighta/
i"ll kanya'em and really put his ass thru the wire/
traxik is going to change his name to tragic when i bust this fire//
your cards are stacked like fullhouse decks on tables/
yo defeat will not only be legendary it will be a fable/
i anhilate yo kiddie rymes like a pedophilac raped you/
even if you sold yo soul to satan he still wouldnt do you label//
never stop going like duracell batteries/
i got ya shook like gothikca with halle B/
this aint battlin this is me spitting preparing for victory/
spit that 100 degree heat that makes fat kids lose calories//

uppin for votes people ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::

This bitch comes out with more crap than a Fat man's ass,
Tryin to make his rhyme smart, sat in the remedial class,
^Alright Opener Yet Weak.. 6/10

You lie to people in forums, sayin yous a street child,
Science book, Thick glasses, Your reputation : Mild,
^Nice Punch

Time to wrap this shit up, with one final punch,
Go beat a Dick you fuckin faggot ass-munch.
^Weak Closer ...!! But Yet Better Than Any Of The Other Cat's Lines lol

Vote: Trax

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ok battle but trax got thiz
You lie to people in forums, sayin yous a street child,
Science book, Thick glasses, Your reputation : Mild,
haha lol

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FLOAT LIKE A BUTTERFLY..STING LIKE A BEE..YOUR HANDS CANT HIT..WHAT YA EYEZ CANT SEE!!!!!
<img src="http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/8295/jonezsig.jpg" alt="Image Hosted by ImageShack.us" />
I AM THE CHAMP!!!!

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I DONT CARE WHO THEY BRING I DONT LOOSE I DONT DO THAT

uppin for vote :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::

uppin for votes everybody, come on vote, I'm pissed:::::::::::::

traxik

Flow 7/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 7/10
Punches 7/10

pro

Flow 5/10
Rhymes 5/10
Structure 5/10
Punches 5/10

v/ TraxiK

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

punchesro
personals:traxic
creativityro
word play:traxic
structure:traxic

vote:traxic

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quote your own damn lyrics...

Im gonna have to say pro took this battle idk why but i was feeling pro more then trax no hate vote or anything but i think she came harder in her punches maybe idk i like his or her style im not sure but who knows

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this onegoes to trax for his well opener that came out an attacked his apponent.
and he gets my vote for his closure, and his personels.