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whitey313 vs re$tricted voted plz!!!! |
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06-15-04, 01:27 PM
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Banned: Biting
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whitey313 vs re$tricted voted plz!!!!
IP:
ight rules
no crew no hating
no biting
u kno
blind spit
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06-15-04, 01:31 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
Posts: 3,774
From: Pittsburgh, PA
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IP:
.::Ch-Check::.
~R~
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06-15-04, 01:41 PM
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#3
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Banned: Biting
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IP:
I'm known for rattlin'~herbs while ya battlin' I'll dismantle~ya~verse an' leave ya babblin'~words/
I'll teach you a lesson~in~rhymes, you couldn't "handle~my~verse" if you "BMXed~wit~my~lines"/
Smith an' Wesson's~are~fine, but I suggest it'd be best if you digested~this~nine/
faggot ya cowardly, you can't overpower~me, I'll get violent an' "spit shells" like I'm eatin "sunflower~seeds"/
apparently ya scared~o'~me cuz you seemed to approach me carefully/
were you afraid to throw a punch? Do yo need some assistance?/
bitch, your fame is "short lived" like a "midget's existence"/
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06-15-04, 01:49 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
Posts: 3,774
From: Pittsburgh, PA
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IP:
Nice Rhyme...But You Only Had One Punch LOL...
Whitey313?? Kid Please..Another Fake Ass Eminem Wannabe..
I Could Take You To 8-Mile..You'd Get Laughed At Hystericaly..
Trying Out For BluePrint..Haha I've Dissed Threw Whole Crew..
Got No Response..They're All Bitches..So I Guess It Suits You..
I'll Burn My Logic Into Your Brain Only To Seize Your Heart..
Too Much Intellect Your Incompitent Mind Wouldn't Know Where To Start..
Your Ego Too Big To Test The Best..Dog Your Just A Verbal Whore..
You Can't Handle Vets and Beef...This Bitch Is A Herb-A-Vore..
I Snap Weak Necks..And Chin Check This Faggot To Get Him Straight..
By The Time He Realized He Conflicted With Death..It Was Too Late..
~R~
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06-15-04, 01:54 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP:
^^^fuck lol ok uppin
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06-15-04, 02:03 PM
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Just Another DipSet
Posts: 2,806
From: Boggie Down Bronx
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IP:
okay break down
punches:R
flow:R
wordplay:none
structure:R
personals:both
overall:restricted
can you guys drop a vote on this plz..... return tha fava the link is at the bottom of my sig
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06-15-04, 02:53 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
Posts: 3,774
From: Pittsburgh, PA
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IP:
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06-15-04, 02:59 PM
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#8
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Banned: Biting
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IP:
aight this shit was one sided
white- you had a nice flow but i only saw like one punch...you were just freestylin
i think..like whats this line about
Smith an' Wesson's~are~fine, but I suggest it'd be best if you digested~this~nine/
not feelin it
R- nice verse you actually had some punches and that personal about blueprint
was all you needed...and that herb-a-vore...nice drop but not your best
vote-Restricted
drop an honest one on this
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129267 |
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06-15-04, 03:01 PM
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.:So~So~Good:.
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IP:
Nice battle,one of the best I have yet to see.Let me break it down.
Flow=Both
Wordplay=Restricted
Structure=Both
Punches=Restricted by a hair
So my vote=Restricted
Both came with nice verses.But in the end,its about who had harder punches & wordplay.Holla at my battles \/
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06-15-04, 03:59 PM
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..Intelligent Hoodlum..
Posts: 1,669
From: bedrock
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Restricted won as u can see eaasly
bestline-Whitey313?? Kid Please..Another Fake Ass Eminem Wannabe..
I Could Take You To 8-Mile..You'd Get Laughed At Hystericaly..
u beta him wit dat line ahahhahahah
worsteline-none
whitey u had 1 punch ahahahahahahah
bestline-I'm known for rattlin'~herbs while ya battlin' I'll dismantle~ya~verse an' leave ya babblin'~words/
descnet
worsteline-alot
winner-R
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06-15-04, 06:47 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
Posts: 3,774
From: Pittsburgh, PA
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IP:
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06-15-04, 11:26 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
Posts: 3,774
From: Pittsburgh, PA
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06-16-04, 10:51 AM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
Posts: 3,774
From: Pittsburgh, PA
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06-16-04, 11:19 AM
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Ill Nigga Alert.
Posts: 2,486
From: Harrisburg, PA
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IP:
One sided battle.....Whitey your verse was decent...and your punches were okay...but they didnt seem to hit hard ya know....But your structure was messed up manye...Restricted your verse was better i thought and your punches were better too they hit hard also...So overall R got this for better verse and punches....
v/ ~R~
Hit My Battle up against $treetZ in my sig (Honest Vote)......Please
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06-16-04, 06:18 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
Posts: 3,774
From: Pittsburgh, PA
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