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$MOKESKREEN |
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5 | 100.00% |
Scriptive |
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0 | 0% |
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Flyweight
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Scriptive vs. $MOKESKREEN
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^ War Sergeant ^
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bet...checkin' in.....................................
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Flyweight
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IP:
ok this is it, your going to get merked smokescreen,
notice his age is undisclosed, it's because he's thirteen, this guy gets his name of poke'mon what a fool, he's a choke artist, someone send him to rap school, plus one to your beaten record, that makes it two, i don't know why your on this site, you still wear baby shoes, your probably a white boy with a laptop, thinkin you a thug, while your mum, is in the kitchen popping prescription drugs, slimey and smell imma squash this guy like a slug, his laptop has broken down, ive just pulled the plug, |
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Flyweight
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NOTE: where it says "smell"it's ment to say "small" sorry for the spellin.
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Like Raiden, I’m sendin’ you “flows” of an electricity shock
Scriptive wouldn’t be a “Icon” if you was on a computer “desk~top You covered in blackness “Script” you lack the realness so practice In-fact-this nigga excels in one skill and that’s wackness Scriptive battles SMOKE dogg what the hell are you thinkin’ You couldn’t “Navigate” a win if you was drivin’ a “Lincoln” Don’t you know that stealin is wrong you’ll be locked up doing some time If you did then why you stealin Eminem’s mom’s prescription drug lines I’ll put a stop to you like a period at the end of a phrase You’ll think its “The Day After Tomorrow” when you get hit wit this wave
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IP:
damn that was good aight upppin lets ge this over with
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Lyrical Assassin Who Want It
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smokescreen got this one he seeemed to have come harder he got it with the
eminem line but yo scriptive i wanna battle you
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Me my pencil n pad
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Scriptive
ok this is it, your going to get merked smokescreen, notice his age is undisclosed, it's because he's thirteen, -not a good personal this guy gets his name of poke'mon what a fool, he's a choke artist, someone send him to rap school, -bad punch plus one to your beaten record, that makes it two, i don't know why your on this site, you still wear baby shoes, -if hes 13 how is he wearin baby shoes your probably a white boy with a laptop, thinkin you a thug, while your mum, is in the kitchen popping prescription drugs, -whats wrong wit a laptop and the last line is played slimey and smell imma squash this guy like a slug, his laptop has broken down, ive just pulled the plug, -really bad punch not all cats squash slugs Smokescreen Like Raiden, I’m sendin’ you “flows” of an electricity shock Scriptive wouldn’t be a “Icon” if you was on a computer “desk~top -that was pretty good punch You covered in blackness “Script” you lack the realness so practice In-fact-this nigga excels in one skill and that’s wackness -need to word it better Scriptive battles SMOKE dogg what the hell are you thinkin’ You couldn’t “Navigate” a win if you was drivin’ a “Lincoln” -bad punch Don’t you know that stealin is wrong you’ll be locked up doing some time If you did then why you stealin Eminem’s mom’s prescription drug lines -good personal I’ll put a stop to you like a period at the end of a phrase You’ll think its “The Day After Tomorrow” when you get hit wit this wave -not a good punch overall smokescreen won this for better structure,sense,punches and better personal vote-Smokescreen |
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Run Bitch......Ruunn!!!!!
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Scriptive battles SMOKE dogg what the hell are you thinkin’
You couldn’t “Navigate” a win if you was drivin’ a “Lincoln” Made me laught vote Smoke for better punches and a less stretched verse
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uppin for votes in here...........................
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IP:
smoke screen came with better punchlines
n scriptives werent that shit hot n was pretty childish felt smokescreens more vote/ smokescreen |
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up up uppin........................................
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IP:
smokescreen took this cuz of punches
thats wut wins battles vote=$mokeskreen plz return the favor $$ Money $$ vs Lyondreds |
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
vote on da prodigy vs mixed toxinz an i'll return the favor
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As Seen On T.V.
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IP:
scriptive:
punches:5/10 personals:4/10 creativity:3/10 comedy:0/10 opener:4/10 colsure:4/10 wordplay:5/10 vocab:4/10 smoke: punches:7/10 personals:6/10 creativity:5/10 comedy:2/10 opener:6/10 closure:7/10 wordplay:6/10 vocab:5/10 its obvious who came harder... vote: smokeskreen
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