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$MOKESKREEN | 5 | 100.00% | |
Scriptive | 0 | 0% | |
Voters: 5. You may not vote on this poll |
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07-16-04, 08:47 AM | #1 |
Flyweight
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Scriptive vs. $MOKESKREEN
IP: 6E73 1F7B
ok you know the rules, house rules any way.
10 lines max, you post within 10 mins after me, if not then will class as no show.. good luck |
07-16-04, 08:51 AM | #2 | |
^ War Sergeant ^
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IP: 620A 971B
bet...checkin' in.....................................
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07-16-04, 09:00 AM | #3 |
Flyweight
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IP: 6E73 1F7B
ok this is it, your going to get merked smokescreen,
notice his age is undisclosed, it's because he's thirteen, this guy gets his name of poke'mon what a fool, he's a choke artist, someone send him to rap school, plus one to your beaten record, that makes it two, i don't know why your on this site, you still wear baby shoes, your probably a white boy with a laptop, thinkin you a thug, while your mum, is in the kitchen popping prescription drugs, slimey and smell imma squash this guy like a slug, his laptop has broken down, ive just pulled the plug, |
07-16-04, 09:01 AM | #4 |
Flyweight
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IP: 6E73 1F7B
NOTE: where it says "smell"it's ment to say "small" sorry for the spellin.
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07-16-04, 09:08 AM | #5 | |
^ War Sergeant ^
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IP: 620A 971B
Like Raiden, I’m sendin’ you “flows” of an electricity shock
Scriptive wouldn’t be a “Icon” if you was on a computer “desk~top You covered in blackness “Script” you lack the realness so practice In-fact-this nigga excels in one skill and that’s wackness Scriptive battles SMOKE dogg what the hell are you thinkin’ You couldn’t “Navigate” a win if you was drivin’ a “Lincoln” Don’t you know that stealin is wrong you’ll be locked up doing some time If you did then why you stealin Eminem’s mom’s prescription drug lines I’ll put a stop to you like a period at the end of a phrase You’ll think its “The Day After Tomorrow” when you get hit wit this wave
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07-16-04, 09:21 AM | #6 |
Flyweight
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IP: 6E73 1F7B
damn that was good aight upppin lets ge this over with
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07-16-04, 09:30 AM | #7 | |
Lyrical Assassin Who Want It
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IP: 972E 491B
smokescreen got this one he seeemed to have come harder he got it with the
eminem line but yo scriptive i wanna battle you
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07-16-04, 10:37 AM | #8 | |
Me my pencil n pad
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IP: BA66 0C9C
Scriptive
ok this is it, your going to get merked smokescreen, notice his age is undisclosed, it's because he's thirteen, -not a good personal this guy gets his name of poke'mon what a fool, he's a choke artist, someone send him to rap school, -bad punch plus one to your beaten record, that makes it two, i don't know why your on this site, you still wear baby shoes, -if hes 13 how is he wearin baby shoes your probably a white boy with a laptop, thinkin you a thug, while your mum, is in the kitchen popping prescription drugs, -whats wrong wit a laptop and the last line is played slimey and smell imma squash this guy like a slug, his laptop has broken down, ive just pulled the plug, -really bad punch not all cats squash slugs Smokescreen Like Raiden, I’m sendin’ you “flows” of an electricity shock Scriptive wouldn’t be a “Icon” if you was on a computer “desk~top -that was pretty good punch You covered in blackness “Script” you lack the realness so practice In-fact-this nigga excels in one skill and that’s wackness -need to word it better Scriptive battles SMOKE dogg what the hell are you thinkin’ You couldn’t “Navigate” a win if you was drivin’ a “Lincoln” -bad punch Don’t you know that stealin is wrong you’ll be locked up doing some time If you did then why you stealin Eminem’s mom’s prescription drug lines -good personal I’ll put a stop to you like a period at the end of a phrase You’ll think its “The Day After Tomorrow” when you get hit wit this wave -not a good punch overall smokescreen won this for better structure,sense,punches and better personal vote-Smokescreen |
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07-16-04, 06:46 PM | #9 | |
Run Bitch......Ruunn!!!!!
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IP: EE7A 8918
Scriptive battles SMOKE dogg what the hell are you thinkin’
You couldn’t “Navigate” a win if you was drivin’ a “Lincoln” Made me laught vote Smoke for better punches and a less stretched verse
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07-17-04, 10:20 AM | #10 | |
^ War Sergeant ^
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IP: 620A 971B
uppin for votes in here...........................
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07-17-04, 10:28 AM | #11 |
New to RB
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IP: 0345 2F18
smoke screen came with better punchlines
n scriptives werent that shit hot n was pretty childish felt smokescreens more vote/ smokescreen |
07-17-04, 05:14 PM | #12 | |
^ War Sergeant ^
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IP: 620A 971B
up up uppin........................................
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07-17-04, 05:19 PM | #13 | |
New to RB
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IP: 4289 77F4
smokescreen took this cuz of punches
thats wut wins battles vote=$mokeskreen plz return the favor $$ Money $$ vs Lyondreds |
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07-17-04, 05:48 PM | #14 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: E990 3928
vote on da prodigy vs mixed toxinz an i'll return the favor
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07-17-04, 06:45 PM | #15 |
As Seen On T.V.
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IP: 5867 FD83
scriptive:
punches:5/10 personals:4/10 creativity:3/10 comedy:0/10 opener:4/10 colsure:4/10 wordplay:5/10 vocab:4/10 smoke: punches:7/10 personals:6/10 creativity:5/10 comedy:2/10 opener:6/10 closure:7/10 wordplay:6/10 vocab:5/10 its obvious who came harder... vote: smokeskreen
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