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For$akeN | 5 | 83.33% | |
phatinum | 1 | 16.67% | |
Voters: 6. You may not vote on this poll |
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07-28-04, 07:40 PM | #1 | |
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For$akeN vs phatinum
IP: 3BE3 3095
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 07-31-04 at 07:40 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
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07-28-04, 07:41 PM | #2 | |
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IP: 3BE3 3095
phatinum has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 07:41 PM.
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07-28-04, 07:42 PM | #3 | |
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IP: DFD5 B866
For$akeN has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 07:42 PM.
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07-28-04, 07:49 PM | #4 | |
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IP: 3BE3 3095
yo punk ill eat you 4 lunch fell the crunch yuor dat wossy on da side line wid a 4 inch pussy ill crumble you like a cookie i might still b a rookie but im still that leathal kid on the block and ya times runnin out yourll b gone in sixty seconds tick tock ill put 9 shots like tupac but straight to your jaw im gonna take da left to the exit door understand you lost this battle stunned i take a gulp of air wen i spit just before i run look around this aint no fun you betta think twice before i get a gun
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07-28-04, 07:53 PM | #5 |
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IP: DFD5 B866
self-glorification lines is how this damn kid was a made...
this boy couldn't blow up on the scene if he was a grenade... phatinum....you ain't phat you couldn't rap if you tried... you rhymes couldn't be in my "division" if you could divide... wouldn't let you re-cord in a studio if he remade a string... you can't add up to me even if you were fuckin' "A-Ccount-Ing"... *a string is a cord fam..... remade a string=re-cord and I hope you are can see my last line was wordplay on counting... |
07-28-04, 08:07 PM | #6 | |
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Voted For: For$akeN
Battle Verse 1: Good Structure Flowed Ok, Punches Hit, The The " " Dont Make Ya Verse Any Better..... Battle Verse 2: Your Structure Was Bad, And You Punches Were Weak And Wordplay Was Played.... Punches: 1 Flow: 1 Wordplay: 1 Metaz: Tie Multis: Niether Originality: 1 Structure: 1 Final Vote: Battle Verse 1 Return Favor With Honest Vote Tourn Vs KroNuz (2 Bar Punchline)
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07-28-04, 08:22 PM | #7 | |
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This was feedback posted for For$akeN
IP: BDA3 2D11
Who is Who how am i suppose to tell!!!!!!
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Im not bad shit....n y ya missin me bastids Leave nigga's in da past like history-classes |
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07-28-04, 08:31 PM | #8 |
Umm...Yeah
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IP: DFD5 B866
you are supposed to vote for the person you think did better
and you can tell if you saw my structure before................
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07-29-04, 12:16 AM | #9 |
Umm...Yeah
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IP: DFD5 B866
uppin 4 votes............................................. ......................................
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07-29-04, 04:44 PM | #10 | |
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IP: FDD1 4DA3
Voted For: For$akeN
fors$aken had this one cuz he came wit harder punches. thats all Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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07-31-04, 12:50 PM | #11 |
Umm...Yeah
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IP: 5C53 9EAB
uppin sleepers im getting pissed mayn............................................
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08-01-04, 08:45 PM | #12 |
Umm...Yeah
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IP: DFD5 B866
uppin 4 votes again............................................. ..........
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08-01-04, 10:32 PM | #13 |
Umm...Yeah
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IP: DFD5 B866
Uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp!! !!!!!!!
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08-02-04, 09:01 PM | #14 |
Umm...Yeah
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IP: DFD5 B866
uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp pppp
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08-02-04, 09:14 PM | #15 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: F204 4419
Voted For: For$akeN
Dis battle is straght up obvious For$aken took this one beacause of wordplay,punchlines,structure, and flow All of which phat did not have or at least not visible itcould have been a little longer though 8/10 (no offense ofcourse) Phat ur structure was messed up Im just sayin dat it would have been a pretty good verse if u had a good enough structure STRUCTURE MEANS ALOT!!! 4/10 A could yall hook me up wit a vote da website is in my sig or else its on the first page of Font Lines Black Pantha vs. Toon |
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