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Old 08-10-04, 04:16 PM   #1
HoPe
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spittinrhymes4u vs ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..

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topic: Dad died

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Check in by: 08-10-04 at 04:46 PM

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Old 08-10-04, 04:17 PM   #2
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Old 08-10-04, 04:27 PM   #3
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Old 08-10-04, 04:29 PM   #4
HoPe
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Topic: dad died

Somethin happend in mah life, somethin thats really horrible...
Mah dad died, his place in this world is unrestorable...
But i hate my self, for the way he had to leave the way he left....
Damn if i had one wish, it would be dat i could destroy death...
You know every sunday im the only one that goes to ur grave...
Cuz i can't help that every day in mah mind i always see ur face...
You should see how lonely mom is now that you are gone forever....
I wish you'd only keep your promise, dat u n mom is always together...
But im here dad! Im alone, u sed u'll always help me n i believed u...
But why did you have to leave at this time wen i really need you...
 
Old 08-10-04, 04:29 PM   #5
spittinrhymes4u
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daymn mah dad just died and i cant help but cry
shiht it hurts so much that mah heart must be fried and tied
fuck this aint happenin i only get one father
and right now i had a good job on being a fucker
i didnt took care of him when he was still here
in this earth that when he first saw me breath and took care
im laughin and cryin at the same time cuz im such a moron
smokin crack while mah father lies down in the coffin
im feelin high now but dont care about the weed im smokin
look at mah dad lyin there wid a glass coverin him in that fuckin box that was made by a machine
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Old 08-10-04, 04:32 PM   #6
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uppin..hahaha...u from the bay area also...good luck
 
Old 08-10-04, 04:34 PM   #7
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yall really suck at topicals do this in open mic and elevate then battle dont do it here.
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Old 08-10-04, 04:37 PM   #8
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lol...dis nigga sed i suck???^^^hahaha...lets battle in a topical battle then...then lest see wut u'll say after i kill u
 
Old 08-10-04, 04:39 PM   #9
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Voted For: ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..

Nice dropz by both. Mind had dis though. His hsit was a lil deeper. Wordplay was better sow was structurre. Was really feelin both. Spittin ok flow last linee was strectched as fuck. STructure ok words kinda basic. Nice drops to both.Feelin it V/ Ingenious mind.

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Old 08-10-04, 04:42 PM   #10
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those were both cool but ingenois gets mine it... taht was rill nice u should continue off dat and drop it at open mic or sumfin my votes to ingenios cuz his was better flow and opener and close no hate ur still was good tho spit but his was better
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Old 08-10-04, 04:42 PM   #11
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ingenius shit flowed better and everything rhymed when spittin didn't even rhyme his last line
ingenius your structure was bomb
ingenius, yours was alright but much room for improvement
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Old 08-10-04, 04:43 PM   #12
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Old 08-10-04, 04:46 PM   #13
HoPe
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uppin
 
Old 08-10-04, 04:54 PM   #14
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uppin
 
Old 08-10-04, 05:00 PM   #15
spittinrhymes4u
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hello
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man im such a newbie here hoping to get better
everytime i spit sum rhymes i feel im being a winner
even though sum say mah rhymes are weak
i know reading it is funner than to take a leak
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