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The Kid P-Dizzle | 5 | 71.43% | |
Vicious Beast | 2 | 28.57% | |
Voters: 7. You may not vote on this poll |
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08-13-04, 09:37 PM | #1 | |
Banned: Cheating
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The Kid P-Dizzle vs Vicious Beast
IP: 0ABC 464B
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-14-04 at 02:17 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
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08-13-04, 10:13 PM | #2 | |
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IP: 39C2 8F9E
The Kid P-Dizzle has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-04 10:13 PM.
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08-13-04, 10:39 PM | #3 |
In ya area.
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IP: 39C2 8F9E
Ok, let Dizzle speak on Vicious Beast, this bitch is weak
6 and 3? You will increase, your losses, you about to feel defeat You a real MC? Bring your skill to me Even if you rapped 'bout STD's you couldn't spit as ill as P I kill MC's with obvious skill, no need to be askin' why You was Panther 'cuz you pussy, now I'm bout to Black ya eye You rap 'bout as graphic as Atari, phase me? Hardly And I'm sorry but this "cat's" even too wack for the safari If you sad 'bout this battle go to Maury Povich, you po' bitch I got some "grave" news - battlin' me? You diggin' your own ditch Listen you homeless, punkass, don't spit none of your dumb trash I must've nutted on UPS, it's amazing how my punch lines "cum" fast You don't want that, new loss, you gone tell me to stop it You a Vicious Beast? Like a monster? Oh, I get it - you came out the closet You lost this, practice next time before you bring it to The Kid You got raped like Tupac allegedly did while he was doin' his bid (For those of you who don't know, Vicious Beast was formerly Black Panther, then he got kicked off the site) |
08-13-04, 10:40 PM | #4 | |
In ya area.
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IP: 39C2 8F9E
And also, when he was Black Panther his record was 6-3.
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08-14-04, 11:23 AM | #5 | |
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IP: 3240 794D
Vicious Beast has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-14-04 11:23 AM.
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08-14-04, 11:26 AM | #6 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3240 794D
Ok so ur da Kid dey call P-Dizzle, fo shizzle my nizzle,
Ur raps r floatin around like da magic school bus wit Ms. Frizzle, forshizzle shut ur wannabe Snoop Dog ass up in dis battle u gettin denied, If ur pimp u cant be gay and its no lie ur automatically disqualified If u a kid and dats wat u plead...u should stick to fairytales and fiction, Ur a punk ass bitch u can not step in my jurus diction for ur conviction Why r u even battlin me cause ur soft and gushy like a wussy After dis battle Imma make dat P in ur name stand for a pussy |
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08-14-04, 11:30 AM | #7 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3240 794D
had to rush cause I was runnin out of time
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08-14-04, 11:34 AM | #8 | |
atlas the vagabond
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IP: 3E7F 0790
Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle
nice nice, here it is. vicious beast-lacked seriousness, the izzle abuse really kilt this for you, and knowledge of character names on magic school bus? wow that really kilt it, i was like, "How corny is this guy." that was your downfall, was the corniness of your verse. But i respect the personal on his name. That was a good effort. Just a very corny verse. And p dizzle-nice verse, great use of multi's, and nice flowing structure, a good read from start to finish. Moderate punchlines, but i think we both know it doesn't take much for this guy. I liked your verse, you had superior flow, structure, content, so i gave you this one. hit me back with an honest vote on my battle. =1= |
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08-14-04, 12:06 PM | #9 | |
Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP: 9DE9 8D24
Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle
wack battle at least vicious tried to make his goos even though he had some played rhymes dizzle gets this win becasue has better punches and personals had ok structure too
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08-14-04, 01:17 PM | #10 |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: Vicious Beast
Aight dis is how it is Kid Pdizzle had some great lines ok opener good structure and nice wordplay Vicious had an ok verse too Like dat snoop dog line nice one It was kinda short compared to P-Dizzles though Next time dont put spaces in between ur lines even though it was a short drop I still saw some good punchlines Im gonna give dis to Beast I was bout to vote for P-Dizzle but I liked Beast punchlines no beef though |
08-14-04, 02:01 PM | #11 |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: Vicious Beast
Nice battle Kid P-DIZZLE was hittin him hard Nice multis and over all flow Ur structure was also good too U had a long verse but u were syin pretty much the same stuff Beast I was likin ur vers too Good structure and nice wordplay I also saw some punchlines but ur verse was a little short But it was still good v/Beast |
08-14-04, 02:47 PM | #12 | |
In ya area.
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IP: 39C2 8F9E
Aight, uppin' for more votes people, don't be shy.
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08-14-04, 03:21 PM | #13 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 95EB 880F
Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle
oooo shit dizzle stomped him haha jeeeeez i'm sittin here laughing , thats amazing , the word play " you a vicious beast? like a monster? oh i get it - you came out of the closet" that has the makings of one of the funniest lines i have heard in a while , you took his name and played off of it and used things that went along with the vibe of the rhyme , nice length, :vicious beast: you need to lengthen your raps and get a little bit more personal but all it all i'm gonna go with dizzle vote// dizzle :sniper: turban |
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08-14-04, 03:29 PM | #14 | |
IP: 892E 81E1
Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle
P-Dizzle - you had some pretty good shit in there...some forced rhyming but I saw good concepts you just didnt form some of them well. you had some nice multis that actually flowed instead of sounding like you forced them out. Nothing really stunning but you had a nice flow to it and it was a good battle verse Vicious Beast - after I read the first bar I knew you were gonna lose...mad basic...forced rhyming... this is not hate at all so I dont wanna see you go hate vote on one of my battles out of spite or some shit Im jsut saying...nothing in there that was good...read the tutorials and keep elevating. youll get better.
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08-14-04, 03:53 PM | #15 |
Banned: Biting
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IP: FA33 53C0
Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle
Vote:The kid longer verse ,good structure and rhymez and dat line "And im sorry but this cats even too wack for the safari" That shit b tite Return tha favor UzI vs mc rabbit |
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