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Old 08-20-04, 08:59 AM   #1
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RazorRudebwoy vs Poet

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lets do this quick cuz im drunk and i hate waiting when im drunk..

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Old 08-20-04, 09:00 AM   #2
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Poet has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-20-04 09:00 AM.
 
Old 08-20-04, 09:05 AM   #3
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RazorRudebwoy has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-20-04 09:05 AM.
 
Old 08-20-04, 09:08 AM   #4
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look as dis nigga poets av he couldnt even beat my rapper DawnCre/
idk when he hopped on mad dog nasty "tree"/
nigga i think u better to a docter i think u got a couple fleas/
you so ugly i fucked yo mama and made ehr talk chiniese.
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Old 08-20-04, 09:12 AM   #5
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word, im gonna come weak on this one just for fun..

battle this kid? shit, its mentally draining how borin he is.. id rather split my own wig..
got blunt 'razor' lickin my dick.. n 'boy'.. its 'rude' how i merk newbs that talk tough..
........but fuken act this bitch... im droppin factual disses on tricks that suck n d/r herbs..
im fuken merkin this nurse.. n whats worse... hes suckin donnald 'duck' n hangin off his bitch words..


aiight quick exp..
he rides sinners dick VERY HARD
hes boring
hes a fag...
donnald duck is what we call sinner cuz he ducks people so much...
sinners a herb (he D/R's him)
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Old 08-20-04, 09:16 AM   #6
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Razor what the fuck was that??? 1st line was shit as a mutha fucka which had no link to the 2nd line (which dissed me) therefore went off point! 3rd line blah big time and the punch on the closer how the fuck does that work?!? wack go and die u'll do rap a favour.
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Old 08-20-04, 09:16 AM   #7
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aiight now lets get some whores to vote............
drop links when ya voted
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Old 08-20-04, 09:23 AM   #8
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Sup with you playas I'm da new coma I'm rideing up here in my new humma of course nigga i got da shit dis summa but aint dat a bumma shit aint no road runna but still the shit is soo damn sweet i can fit like 20 hoes in my back seat i see all dem niggaz lookin on da street if u cant take the heat u might as well retreat.. i am complete and i will never mistreat but dont ever fuck with me cause I am the Don elite.
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Old 08-20-04, 10:39 AM   #9
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Voted For: Poet

razor: uhh.... what the fuck? ....... first off, Poet aint black, so sayin nigga is weak as shit n makes ya look stupid. Your punches were random as shit and barely made sense. You know when vets fuck around in the cyphers n shit n spit a wack verse on purpose? Your verse was worse than that.

Poet: You could tell you were drunk by ya flow... lmao... but at least ya punches hit n were personal...

word... and dont hate on me razor, just cos I gave bad comments... its just an opinion... If you really feel raw about it ill battle you...

one, stay up both a ya
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Old 08-20-04, 10:45 AM   #10
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Voted For: Poet

I feel that Poets verses were a lot stronger and more effective than Razors because he had good vocab, hard punches, personals, and multies. Only thing I can suggest it fix the structer cause I personally didnt like it.

Razor came off kinda weak and I wasnt really feling his punches hitting hard. I hate those mama punches where you talk about banging them, cause its fake and aint never gunna happen...spit about either real or creative stuff, dont make shit up...
 
Old 08-20-04, 10:45 AM   #11
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Please Return the favor with an honest vote/feed...

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...96&page=2&pp=15
 
Old 08-20-04, 12:15 PM   #12
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uppin for more votes...............................
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Old 08-20-04, 04:59 PM   #13
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yea i have a person to blame for that.. "SAND MAN" he challenged me this mornin.. shit i was sleepy it all good i jus i lost 1 battle.. and i need to elavate ESPCIALLY with my structures.. thanks for honest votes.
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Old 08-20-04, 05:08 PM   #14
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look as dis nigga poets av he couldnt even beat my rapper DawnCre/
idk when he hopped on mad dog nasty "tree"/
4/10
nigga i think u better to a docter i think u got a couple fleas/
you so ugly i fucked yo mama and made ehr talk chiniese.
4/10

battle this kid? shit, its mentally draining how borin he is.. id rather split my own wig..
got blunt 'razor' lickin my dick.. n 'boy'.. its 'rude' how i merk newbs that talk tough..
........but fuken act this bitch..
6/10
. im droppin factual disses on tricks that suck n d/r herbs..
im fuken merkin this nurse.. n whats worse... hes suckin donnald 'duck' n hangin off his bitch words..
5/10

This battle was kinda weak but it came down 2 harder punches and better worpdlay
u both could elevate some and get ya vocab up and come with harder punches
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Old 08-20-04, 05:19 PM   #15
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both were weak as fuck, but u had better flow tho not much else but I ain't hatin just givin my critique, nahmean!
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