VERSES DUE BY FRIDAY, TRY AND GET THEM UP BY WEDNESDAY IF YOU CAN.


15 LINE MAX FOR EACH


VOTE ON AT LEAST 3 OTHER BATTLES,OR 3 VOTES DEDUCTED FROM YOUR BATTLE..


MAKE THIS HOT!!

checkin in

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1st Battle In Legends
Bars Of War - Champ
L.L.L. - Former HWeight Champ
S.S. - Hall Of Fame

The Eclipse...

checkin in

yo go ahead and spit when you're ready

__________________
1st Battle In Legends
Bars Of War - Champ
L.L.L. - Former HWeight Champ
S.S. - Hall Of Fame

The Eclipse...

shit kid it's only monday, i got till friday...

tell you what i'll drop mah ish tomorrow.

lol, gotta write it first.

i guess im checkin in ill have mine in by friday 2

Yo…

Dallas a lil state in my world, an a star just a big ball of gas/
Y’all be all in my ass cause y’all be failing to get past /
Either you diss me back an you’ll be givin head to a glock/
I cock and shoot quick, grab da loot, shoot up tha block/
Your insults come out like calling me a son of a mother/
They discover if they had sense they’d be runnin for cover/
Son, you better run, can’t shoot cause you can’t cock a gun/
Another win for me, baggin two for tha price of one /
Its fun, to see you try beat me, you both beneath me/
Try to beef with me, you realise ya can’t defeat me/
just meet me on the streets, I’ll kill all your peeps/
the internet, it aint a video game, there aint no cheats/
cause even if ya biting, Im fighting you off with my shit/
If it was like it was bent of a skit of some classic rap hit/
When I spit my verse it comes first cause its sick…

Comin at S.T.A.R. first

The fire I emit on this keyboard is gonna burn your hands//
Repitwa's fault, I know this battle was not in your plans//
And S.T.A.R. like a bitch I'll slap you into the corner, when you wake, you gonna find yo moms done disowned ya'//
cuz now you got a brotha', Lil D' in the creep, while you sleep done boned her//
I split you, hit you so hard this shit is a sin//
I change ya fate, across ya chin comes the strength of ten men//
smack both of y'a'll so hard it'll disfigure your face//
dissappearin without a trace, both of y'a'll, in an unmarked coffin//
See what you thinkin, but it'll be too late when they hear you coughin, on Guillotine's cum//
What type of name is Guillotine, you musta couldn't wait to sound cheap//
Lick wit ya tongue, swallow wit ya throat and take heads wit ya teeth??//
Fuckin faggot, suck dick, suck dick right//
lick and swallow but no bites//
nigga' comin at me wit Nintendo lines, betta get to school, get some knowledge, enhance yo mind//
I could hit you wit way more lines, but I'm bouncin cuz on the real battlin some bitches ain't worth my time//

yo i had to edit this to cut it down but i ain't change no words.

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1st Battle In Legends
Bars Of War - Champ
L.L.L. - Former HWeight Champ
S.S. - Hall Of Fame

The Eclipse...

yo was it 15 towards each person or 15 total? I thought I got 15 at Guillotine and then 15 at S.T.A.R.

__________________
1st Battle In Legends
Bars Of War - Champ
L.L.L. - Former HWeight Champ
S.S. - Hall Of Fame

The Eclipse...

^15 in total, and your shit was 24 lines long...you need to edit lines out.

Hit Me up on votes and feedback on verse...
This Is My Lyrics for this week...

Freedom or death? , I give niggas a reason to sweat//
It's no test, lyrically its like I'm seen as the best//
Read between the lines, ya'll cant rhyme like Wyclef//
I spit shit quick,rip off fat lips that got hot-breath//
Bad luck,keep it up flamin bars givin yall a hot-flash//
Only time I do wack anything is when smackin ya moms ass//
Dealin' a lyrical killin to lil'dallas like the NBA's Mavericks//
Got rap AIDS,change ya name from lil' dallas to lil'have-in-it//
Then bring pain to haters like a dying dyke in labor//
Born a natural disaster they should call me ill nature//
It's no fun if ya'll try'na run from my lyrics with no legs//
Ya weak rhymes f/ will smith couldnt make me "nod my head"//

up lemme see some votes now

__________________
1st Battle In Legends
Bars Of War - Champ
L.L.L. - Former HWeight Champ
S.S. - Hall Of Fame

The Eclipse...

up for votes

__________________
1st Battle In Legends
Bars Of War - Champ
L.L.L. - Former HWeight Champ
S.S. - Hall Of Fame

The Eclipse...

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