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Wreckage 1 16.67%
sHoTTaBoY 5 83.33%
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Old 09-13-04, 10:29 AM   #1
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Wreckage vs sHoTTaBoY

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Old 09-13-04, 10:31 AM   #2
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Old 09-13-04, 10:39 AM   #3
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Nigguh On A Scale Of 1-To-10 Ya Skill Rates A ''Zero''..
..U Couldnt Drop A ''Good (Rhyme) Fella'' If Ya Names Was ''De Niro''..
With These Lyrical Disses U Need More Than Just A ''hero''...
..If U Ever Made InTo The Rap Game I'd ''Burn'' Ya' ''Cd'' Like ''Nero''...

..Nigguh I ''Laugh'' At Ya Rhymes Then (Lyrically) ''Murder'' You Like ''Dr.Giggles''...
..When I Spit Complexcitie, Ya Left ''Clueless'' Like A ''Riddle''...

I'ma Cause Some Verbal ''Wreckage'' An Dispose Ya Body After The ''Carnage''...
..I'm Ya Daddy n Ashamed U Was Born, So Now U Know Why U Was In The ''Orphanage''..!
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Old 09-13-04, 05:00 PM   #4
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Old 09-13-04, 05:01 PM   #5
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Your Interests are Hoops, Rhymin, Drinkin n Skee-Skee-Skeezers?//1
Girls bust out-tweezer's at the thoughta seen your "shot-a-boy"Peter//2

U wouldnt beleieve me if I ko'd U so Lemme drop this tragic-Truth'//3
I'll "Plant" You in "ORLANDO", and u still couldnt "Throw magic'Roots"//4

Jus' Look at your profile "2'guns'touchin mixing'"//5
What kinda' faggot's like there dick's 2 be hitting'//6

Says he's gettin signed,the only thing"signed"Is by his mom,for his D+"home-work"//7
"I'm Young, Black, Arrogant", do u dig holes 2, U just described a"gopher"//8






(Finishers)

Your names meaning "shot-a-boy" Make u sound like a petifile gay-guy'//9
When u rap "offline" U sould like pee-wee-herman on a power-trip', Gettin vocal's touched by guys'//10


Uppin


*Hes from orlando*
*Orlando magics basketball"
"Still in school'"his mom signs his homework"
*Profile 2 guns touching eachother under 2 names of him and his "friend/lover"*

The 1st line off mine is off his profile
 
Old 09-13-04, 05:04 PM   #6
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Old 09-13-04, 05:37 PM   #7
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Old 09-13-04, 05:53 PM   #8
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Voted For: Wreckage

Your Interests are Hoops, Rhymin, Drinkin n Skee-Skee-Skeezers?//1
Girls bust out-tweezer's at the thoughta seen your "shot-a-boy"Peter//2
^^^^^^^^^^^^ ha nice opener mayne

U wouldnt beleieve me if I ko'd U so Lemme drop this tragic-Truth'//3
I'll "Plant" You in "ORLANDO", and u still couldnt "Throw magic'Roots"//
^^^^^^^^^ personal and a punch mayne nice

Says he's gettin signed,the only thing"signed"Is by his mom,for his D+"home-work"//7
"I'm Young, Black, Arrogant", do u dig holes 2, U just described a"gopher"//8
^^^^^^^^^^^^ ok nice personal and a punch plus

Your names meaning "shot-a-boy" Make u sound like a petifile gay-guy'//9
When u rap "offline" U sould like pee-wee-herman on a power-trip', Gettin vocal's touched by guys'//10
^^^^^^^ ooooooooooooo nice closa mayne word


Nigguh On A Scale Of 1-To-10 Ya Skill Rates A ''Zero''..
..U Couldnt Drop A ''Good (Rhyme) Fella'' If Ya Names Was ''De Niro''..
With These Lyrical Disses U Need More Than Just A ''hero''...
..If U Ever Made InTo The Rap Game I'd ''Burn'' Ya' ''Cd'' Like ''Nero''...
^^^^^^^^^ aight mayne nice multi'z and a punch lookin for some personals


..Nigguh I ''Laugh'' At Ya Rhymes Then (Lyrically) ''Murder'' You Like ''Dr.Giggles''...
..When I Spit Complexcitie, Ya Left ''Clueless'' Like A ''Riddle''...
^^^^^^^^^^^ aight good punch mayne word

I'ma Cause Some Verbal ''Wreckage'' An Dispose Ya Body After The ''Carnage''...
..I'm Ya Daddy n Ashamed U Was Born, So Now U Know Why U Was In The ''Orphanage''..!
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ aight bomb ass closa personals i dont see none punches were great


wreckage edge it a lil with personals and punches

shotta ur good mayne no doubt but i was eagar to find some punches and personals (didnt see none)

so wreckage gets my vote cuz of punches and personals

v-wreckage

~peace~
 
Old 09-13-04, 07:00 PM   #9
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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

shotta boy you got my vote on dis one
harder hittin punches and better flow i like dat good (rhyme) fella bit lol good opening

wreckage no h8 and i aint just voting shottaboy coz im battling you i honnestly do think he was better in this

boost your punches and vocab a bit and supprise ppl with lines dont just write da 1st fing dat comes into ya hed

work on it
safe ppl
 
Old 09-13-04, 07:02 PM   #10
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uppin it 4 shottaboy brilliant opener!!! and much better punches but thats the best opener ive seen in a while!
 
Old 09-13-04, 07:36 PM   #11
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This was feedback posted for sHoTTaBoY

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checkin it out
both were good but wrecker had the punches and the personals
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Old 09-13-04, 07:59 PM   #12
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Old 09-13-04, 10:01 PM   #13
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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

nice drop from both.......shotta..nice verse g...nice opener....some good wordplay....some nice multies...i was feelin ya punches too...overall decent verse...

wreckage...u came close..cos u had the multies..but ya punches just didnt hit as hard...u had some good wordplay too....make ya punches connect wit them personals and ull be better...decent verse

nice batte..but...

my vote=shottaboy
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Old 09-13-04, 10:02 PM   #14
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Old 09-13-04, 10:48 PM   #15
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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

man this was a stucture battle but shotta took it he had better flow and better stucture and wordplay:
punches:shotta
flow: no need for flow in text
metas: shotta
multi's: shotta
vocab: shotta
wordplay: wreckage
vote and most enjoyed verse: shottaboy
yo man return the favour in my battle verse turban the links in mys ig thanks peace
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