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06-11-05, 09:52 AM
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Dark Disguise
IP: 927A 13BE
Dark Disguise
Dark disguise...camouflaged...but promulgated with rays of light... Dark disguise...camouflaged...but still shines just as bright... Dark disguise...camouflaged...but consecrated with rights to life... Dark disguise...camouflaged...but still stricken with strife... Pretentiousness...colours cultimated from earths primordial existence... Dreams materialized slowly from humanitys acquisitive persistance... Whats seen on the inside disguised...befuddled from outer appearance... But the true beauty within can be shown with decisive perseverance... Mankinds substandard spectacle... abundent with obstinate views... Not seeing the distant delicacy with the naked eye...like forensic clues... Like looking in the mirror...but what looks back is darker than white... Therefore the blood that flows clearly deserves less quality of life?... Skin disguised...but colour shouldnt be diverse through mans eyes... Because the feelins under the skin feel the same pain when man crys... Dark disguise...camouflaged...but promulgated with rays of light... Dark disguise...camouflaged...but still shines just as bright... Dark disguise...camouflaged...but consecrated with rights to life... Dark disguise...camouflaged...but still stricken with strife... Frustrated...what seems assured is far from being ascertained... Poverty filled countries...no food...no water...every society the same... Blined by dark lights...dark clours...struck with back-biting schemes... Burstin inner souls fighting to free themselves from blackened out dreams... Beliefs of brighter futures...children not seeing colour in there peers... Black youth not acting out of character due to racially drove fears... Careers not haulted...white and black leaders truely united... Familys of different raced couples happy...come together delighted... No need for diguises...you cant hide,everybodys heart looks the same... Ideas embedded in brains...faulseified...i say its wrong teachings to blame... Dark disguise...camouflaged...but promulgated with rays of light... Dark disguise...camouflaged...but still shines just as bright... Dark disguise...camouflaged...but consecrated with rights to life... Dark disguise...camouflaged...but still stricken with strife...
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06-11-05, 10:09 AM
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IP: 927A 13BE
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06-11-05, 01:37 PM
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IP: 34DA 2C83
upppppp......8 views and no feed........fuckin leave feed bitchez.........
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06-11-05, 07:25 PM
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IP: 927A 13BE
uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp.................. ............
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06-11-05, 08:10 PM
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IP: E8BB 7377
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this is vocabed up as fuck hot peice all those lines were nice man "No need for diguises...you cant hide,everybodys heart looks the same... Ideas embedded in brains...faulseified...i say its wrong teachings to blame..." iLL^ liked this...nice concept ~1
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06-12-05, 06:51 AM
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IP: D067 ABDC
^^^thanx man...uppin............
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06-14-05, 03:11 PM
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IP: EE5E AD71
uppin............................................. ...................
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06-15-05, 06:44 PM
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IP: 7236 47FA
bump....feed is fuckin slower than ever...favours will be returned.....
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06-15-05, 07:12 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 0825 899A
hey man, this was an extremely strong drop....10/10 for vocab lol nice it had everything to make me enjoy it i cant antagonize u about anything.....ur just a good topical writer mayne u truly showed it in this piece....dont stop written, keep progressin RTF....on either of my o/m's they on all pages they are the ones wit no feed/back lol.......iight nice drop overall 9/10 peace
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06-16-05, 01:25 PM
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IP: 8ADA 1166
thanx mayne...leave me a link and ill be sure to RTF.
Uppin this....leave your links...
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06-17-05, 08:32 AM
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Odi et Amo
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IP: 1EAF 3328
Excellent piece, I absolutely love the hook you worked in there, it became like the essence of the drop. Your writing style contains a lot of high vocab but the thing with you is, it never affects the content of your piece in a negative way. You keep your flow good despite big words used, emotion was very raw as well as imagery. Overall just a very enjoyable read, like how you worked the topic out too
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06-17-05, 10:09 AM
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IP: 294D 599D
thanx mah...uppin...........
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06-18-05, 09:44 PM
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IP: 927A 13BE
uppin............
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06-18-05, 10:20 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
I was REALLY feelin this.I mean for honestly I didn't think
RV had many dope cats on the board.Your vocab was competitve with atticus shit and thats really good lol it wasn't pointless vocab it served a purpous and you really got your point through. We really gotta collab like you said.I'm feelin this.Sorry for lack of feed. AIM:Indeph11 |
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06-18-05, 11:24 PM
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IP: 927A 13BE
thnx man...aint got aim..pm me or somethin for a collab...i heard you u just joined us at R.A.W anyway...so its all good..
bump...
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