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10-15 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate
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*Explained votes only*

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Check in by: 10-14-04 at 01:14 PM

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Soul Sickness has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-14-04 12:28 PM.

Myth has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-14-04 12:31 PM.

u talentless kid simply said ya skills are a MYTH/
he only use mouth to tighten his lips and consume dick/
u tlk madd shyt and say ive been forever duckin shyt/
but like DMX said u really dunno who u fukin wit/
throw punches and grill ya ass like i was george forman/
ya whole shyt built on lies like u the founder of mormans/
whole structure simple in lines and design/
cant have greatness so u tryin steal a piece of my mind/
jus to advanced to inhanced while u keep ya shyt simplistic/
u aint half the man u got guns i drop boms like balistics/

lol y u gotta shrink the font...because u cant flow and u strech...not tryin to tlk shyt jus sayin its kinda weak that u cant even drop a full sized rhyme lol..........and yea i dont want no more beef cuz dat shyt is gay....how u gunna tlk shyt when u can see my face....yall little kids is makin this world a crazzy place lol......

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u a soft nigga, i dont' want beef, lol, u should never started, and bitch i always shrink my font but i did it for u this time, the reason i did it for u is so it can match the size of ya dick, lol, i know u gonna ask how i know, ya girl told me, lol, let's let the people vote on this, we uppin muthafuckas

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-NET RECORD-
17 wins-8 losses-2 dq's- 9 K.O'S

im white so "nigga" ya way off.....and my girl told u..wow thats corny...u sayin shyt like that u aint startin beef u embarasin urself....wisemen got kids that tlk like they outta the fukin whomb...jus because u like to be tuff on the web dont mean shyt if u wanna tlk shyt go ahead...u wastin ya life though peace ~1~

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lol, damn u lost another battle, whew up ya game kid, now like i said let's let the peeps vote on this so just shut up and let the voting commence, for someone who don't want beef u still running ya mouth, lol

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-NET RECORD-
17 wins-8 losses-2 dq's- 9 K.O'S

as u all know by now i don't like soul sickness and never will cause he pissed me off but he thought he was tough when he was talking so much shit but look at this shit, lol, an apology, open sesame


Soul Sickness' apology, lol
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=155122


i've been in alot of beef lately, i think i got empire syndrome, lol, hopefully not

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-NET RECORD-
17 wins-8 losses-2 dq's- 9 K.O'S

oh yea, we uppin in this bitch

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-NET RECORD-
17 wins-8 losses-2 dq's- 9 K.O'S

Voted For: Myth

ok~
myth~good verse overall, flowed well, you had stronger punches then your opponent here, they hit harder, i liked your opener, some decent personals on the name and the thread, my favorite part tho, was your closer, the last two bars were fire, and funny...nice job
soul sickness~your verse was good too, nice struc and flow,,but i think you could have come a little stronger here, with more punches, personals, i liked the forman line and the morman line, but you could have geared this towards your opponent more...but nice job both overall......1

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*Poetic Scriptures Moderator*

Voted For: Myth

Myth Got This Hands Down

This Couldnt Be More One Sided IN My Point Of View

Myth-You Came Hard With Your Punches.
Personals were Aight. Metas and Multis along with your
wordplay was killin him.Opener And Closer Were Also Hot.
Structure Was Right ON And You Had A Hot Verse.

Souls Sickness-Your Verse Was Aight. Ive Seen You Write
Better. You Flow Was On But Your Punches Were Not Complex
You Structure Was Good And Shit But You Just Wrote Shit Son.. No Hate -1

Opener-Myth
Closer-Myth
Wordplay-Myth
Vocab-Myth
Structure-Myth
Flow-Myth
Metas-Myth
Multis-Myth

Overall Vote- Myth

Hot Verse Myth

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Voted For: Myth

ok
this vote was brought to
you in part by:

"B.L.A.'s open mics!!!
if you aint crit it,you aint with it"

ok heres my vote

Myth you win...duh

you have nice metafores
and wordplay,and this time ur
verse was funny,and kept me entertained
flow is standard for you too

only thing wrong is the word size


S.S....the opener has been
used against Myth 1000000000000000000000 times
its playd to death

and your metas need to be setup in a more
orignal way

"but like DMX said u really dunno who u fukin wit"

set it up like this

"you unaware of who you fucking with like DMX"

be different

Myth wins

*this is soooooooooooooooo explained*


Close captioning to BLA's vote
brouth to you in part by:

"B.L.A.'s open mic!!!!

if you aint crit it
then you aint with it"

pc

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