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JoeyDrugsta | 0 | 0% | |
Tainted | 5 | 100.00% | |
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11-04-04, 05:17 PM | #1 | |
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Tainted vs JoeyDrugsta
IP: 28AD 5545
Battle Rules:
6 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 11-07-04 at 05:17 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
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11-04-04, 05:18 PM | #2 | |
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Tainted has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-04-04 05:18 PM.
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11-04-04, 05:29 PM | #3 | |
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Look at the homo who tries to make a comeback,
Look as his hands, even the cum got on his throwback And that's not from fucking, just his masturbation Only stopped to get murked, then back to his lubrication See I let dem hammers blow, rip off a kidney Looks like you the only one wearing Baby Phat besides Remy. And my rhymes are fire and keep you on check Send this pervert back to his house to play wit his Pokemon Deck. Your rhymes are garbage, they belong in a bin Got more breast enlargements than Lil' Kim. |
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11-04-04, 08:06 PM | #4 | |
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IP: C3F4 79C6
JoeyDrugsta has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-04-04 08:06 PM.
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11-04-04, 10:28 PM | #5 | |
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IP: C3F4 79C6
man im all about fist fights and city lights
trying to keep my mind right, arigh? but i cant with jokes like you around yer the biggest joke i seen but yer punchline aint laid down you funny as hell trying spit-n-shit but you best believe you better shut yer lip yer about to get yer scheme split my rhymes are tainted with the blood of yer girl the guts of yer dad and yer lil sisters pube curls so i called you out, you thought i was a beginner after this battle shit tho, turns out i'm the winner |
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11-05-04, 07:03 AM | #6 | |
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IP: 3240 794D
Uppin dis shit dun. Go and vote this shit. Its mad hott.
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11-05-04, 04:17 PM | #7 | |
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IP: DDF2 7C41
No one has voted yet. Uppin dis shit. Come on and vote yall.
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11-05-04, 06:07 PM | #8 | |
just a rapper
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IP: 0D2F 5926
Voted For: Tainted
all around weak. both of yall some shit. i think tainted had tha better verse though. he had more punchlines and a better flow. both of you keep elevating. NO Hate. just an honest vote.
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11-05-04, 07:06 PM | #9 | |
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IP: 2168 98AB
I respect da honest votes people. Uppin dis shit.
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11-05-04, 11:25 PM | #10 | |
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IP: 0825 899A
Voted For: Tainted
this was kinda a stupid battle, joey does the same thing every battle tries to get multiz yet it dont work joey punches were corny as hell multiz i said it already flow was ok nuttin special tainted wow how are u 0-3 ROFL punches decent 8/10 flow good8/10 multiz none |
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11-10-04, 08:11 PM | #11 | |
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IP: 3240 794D
Uppin this battle for votes. Keep da feedback comin'.
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11-13-04, 01:27 AM | #12 | |
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IP: 0825 899A
Voted For: Tainted
^aight i just voted on joey's last battle-- this battle was not too good comin' from u, joey.. u started off bad, and u stated things but didn't actually punch ur opponent u have to stick to personals and punches and keep them consistent.. Tainted was str8 with his verse, the vocab was over done in a few places.. u had a harder verse put yet, u had a few jokes here and there which helped too.. lol.. nice job.. and ur closer was okay.. battle wasn't too bad but both y'all got things to work on basically.. so i'm lookin' forward to seeing that..
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11-20-04, 04:24 PM | #13 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 31E1 91F6
Voted For: Tainted
i wonder do yall be really serious... JOEY:yo lines were too simple, and stretched...and alot of em, u never completed ur barz...i think u need to work on alotta things b4 u enter ur next battle, mainly structure, because this is text, and people gotta read it correct, or they wont get that punch...i didnt really see any amazing punches in yo verse, and yo personals werent there either...this was a wack verse, but no hate...i just think u should work on creativitie, switch up yo style homie tainted: u had a nice verse...wut really made me haf'to give u tha vote was yo rhyming patterns...i like how they werent predictable, and a lil creative...u also had some nice punches, but allota them were simple...yo structure was certainly better, so u dont gotta worry bout that. this was a good verse for tha person u battled, but if u battle someone more elevated than this, u might get merk'd(but no hate), just work on this positive and negative feedbac...yo personals were coo, but couldve been directed to any1...but all around a good verse, that gave u my vote overall- i think yal should both focus on tha feedbac, and use it for yall next battle, yall both got skillz, but only 1 person could come out on top...tainted, because he had a better all around flow and structure... return tha vote HONESTLY: in sig... |
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11-21-04, 06:14 PM | #14 | |
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IP: 258C A279
Voted For: Tainted
Tainted yo drop was pretty decent tha flow was aight, tha structure wasn't all stretched out, tha vocab was pretty decent, & tha punches were hard & connected...but overall u had a pretty decent drop keep elevatin'.. Joey..no offense but ur drop was wack.. tha flow was to short to actually have a punch in there...tha structure was okay, the punches were kinda weak, and the vocab was okay but overall u need to elevate more too get better tho... Pz.
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