Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-07-04 at 05:17 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Tainted has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-04-04 05:18 PM.

Look at the homo who tries to make a comeback,
Look as his hands, even the cum got on his throwback
And that's not from fucking, just his masturbation
Only stopped to get murked, then back to his lubrication
See I let dem hammers blow, rip off a kidney
Looks like you the only one wearing Baby Phat besides Remy.
And my rhymes are fire and keep you on check
Send this pervert back to his house to play wit his Pokemon Deck.
Your rhymes are garbage, they belong in a bin
Got more breast enlargements than Lil' Kim.

JoeyDrugsta has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-04-04 08:06 PM.

man im all about fist fights and city lights
trying to keep my mind right, arigh?
but i cant with jokes like you around
yer the biggest joke i seen but yer punchline aint laid down
you funny as hell trying spit-n-shit
but you best believe you better shut yer lip
yer about to get yer scheme split
my rhymes are tainted with the blood of yer girl
the guts of yer dad and yer lil sisters pube curls
so i called you out, you thought i was a beginner
after this battle shit tho, turns out i'm the winner

Uppin dis shit dun. Go and vote this shit. Its mad hott.

No one has voted yet. Uppin dis shit. Come on and vote yall.

Voted For: Tainted

all around weak. both of yall some shit. i think tainted had tha better verse though. he had more punchlines and a better flow. both of you keep elevating. NO Hate. just an honest vote.

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I respect da honest votes people. Uppin dis shit.

Voted For: Tainted

this was kinda a stupid battle, joey does the same thing every battle tries to get multiz yet it dont work

joey
punches were corny as hell
multiz i said it already
flow was ok nuttin special

tainted wow how are u 0-3 ROFL
punches decent 8/10
flow good8/10
multiz none

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Uppin this battle for votes. Keep da feedback comin'.

Voted For: Tainted

^aight i just voted on joey's last battle-- this battle was not too good comin' from u, joey.. u started off bad, and u stated things but didn't actually punch ur opponent u have to stick to personals and punches and keep them consistent.. Tainted was str8 with his verse, the vocab was over done in a few places.. u had a harder verse put yet, u had a few jokes here and there which helped too.. lol.. nice job.. and ur closer was okay.. battle wasn't too bad but both y'all got things to work on basically.. so i'm lookin' forward to seeing that..

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Voted For: Tainted

i wonder do yall be really serious...

JOEY:yo lines were too simple, and stretched...and alot of em, u never completed ur barz...i think u need to work on alotta things b4 u enter ur next battle, mainly structure, because this is text, and people gotta read it correct, or they wont get that punch...i didnt really see any amazing punches in yo verse, and yo personals werent there either...this was a wack verse, but no hate...i just think u should work on creativitie, switch up yo style homie

tainted: u had a nice verse...wut really made me haf'to give u tha vote was yo rhyming patterns...i like how they werent predictable, and a lil creative...u also had some nice punches, but allota them were simple...yo structure was certainly better, so u dont gotta worry bout that. this was a good verse for tha person u battled, but if u battle someone more elevated than this, u might get merk'd(but no hate), just work on this positive and negative feedbac...yo personals were coo, but couldve been directed to any1...but all around a good verse, that gave u my vote

overall- i think yal should both focus on tha feedbac, and use it for yall next battle, yall both got skillz, but only 1 person could come out on top...tainted, because he had a better all around flow and structure...

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