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illuson | 1 | 16.67% | |
Thousand Miles | 5 | 83.33% | |
Voters: 6. You may not vote on this poll |
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10-29-04, 08:04 PM | #1 | |
This is my first post!
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illuson vs Thousand Miles
IP: B67D 2BE8
Battle Rules:
10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting etc rules.... good luck! Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-29-04 at 08:34 PM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. Old / Expired battle close - win |
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10-29-04, 08:04 PM | #2 | |
This is my first post!
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IP: B67D 2BE8
yo accept this kid................................
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10-29-04, 08:08 PM | #3 | |
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IP: 6804 D41F
illuson has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-29-04 08:08 PM.
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10-29-04, 08:10 PM | #4 | |
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IP: B67D 2BE8
Thousand Miles has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-29-04 08:10 PM.
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10-29-04, 08:18 PM | #5 | |
This is my first post!
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IP: B67D 2BE8
here is 10 lines:
fuck this bitch......i'll eat up this pussy like a apple This kid is useful...I can use you as a bad example fuck it...i'll abuse this bitch like he is fucking used If you sold winning streaks...no one would ever lose I'll beat this kid with ease...but it don't really matter You pack less punch than a retard throwing feathers this kid's fucked...on the arena there'd be no friendship your punches less useful than a parachute on a spaceship |
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10-29-04, 08:19 PM | #6 | |
This is my first post!
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IP: B67D 2BE8
whooops, I only did 8 lines.......................sorry............
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10-29-04, 08:23 PM | #7 | |
www.militantmusic.com
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IP: 6804 D41F
when im done with u ull be in the hospital
ure rhymes are old like a dinsour fossil but ull be set when u get ure realse hey since ure broke rent the space between ure teeth u really must be trippin if this bitch belives hes spittin u say on the grind u covinced u can rhyme?U? ill out rhyme u then out grind u |
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10-29-04, 08:25 PM | #8 | |
www.militantmusic.com
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IP: 6804 D41F
i only did 8 line 2
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10-29-04, 08:30 PM | #9 | |
This is my first post!
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IP: B67D 2BE8
^^^^it's cool.
aight now, uppin for some votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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10-29-04, 11:51 PM | #10 | |
This is my first post!
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IP: 7189 3E18
uppin for more votes....................................
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10-31-04, 12:53 AM | #11 | |
www.militantmusic.com
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IP: 403D 72A8
uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp ppppppinn for votes
VOTE OR DIE
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10-31-04, 02:32 AM | #12 | |
Puttin MD On The Map
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IP: 408D D2A2
Voted For: illuson
aight my vote barely goes to illusion here's why thousand-fuck this bitch......i'll eat up this pussy like a apple This kid is useful...I can use you as a bad example ^^eh alright opener..okay punch coulda hit harder fuck it...i'll abuse this bitch like he is fucking used If you sold winning streaks...no one would ever lose ^^weak punch didnt hit I'll beat this kid with ease...but it don't really matter You pack less punch than a retard throwing feathers ^^self glorify and it didnt realy rhyme to well weak punch this kid's fucked...on the arena there'd be no friendship your punches less useful than a parachute on a spaceship ^^kinda funny punch okay closer best punch of all over all 4/10 you came weak with punches no personals and they only thing good was structure flow was okay illusion-when im done with u ull be in the hospital ure rhymes are old like a dinsour fossil ^^weak opener punch missed but ull be set when u get ure realse hey since ure broke rent the space between ure teeth ^^haha funny punch woulda been easier to understand if ya added a comma and didnt have ure as ur u really must be trippin if this bitch belives hes spittin ^^okay punch not too good coulda been harder u say on the grind u covinced u can rhyme?U? ill out rhyme u then out grind u ^^eh weak closer rhymed u with you coulda been better overall 5/10 punches=ill flow=tho structure=tho vocab=ill worplay=ill personals=neither v/illusion peace~1
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10-31-04, 06:32 AM | #13 | |
I just don't give a fuck!
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IP: 9588 E886
Voted For: Thousand Miles
Thousand got this. illusion: first of all ya structure wasn't too great. punches were weak. U had some metas, weak, but still u had some. Try and work on ya structure and add some more wittier lines with wordplay and improved metas. elevate. Thousand Miles: Nice verse. structure was neatly structured. had some nice metas. I liked the meta in ya first bar. punches were alright. i think u got this battle with better structure and punches. vote: Thousand Miles |
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11-01-04, 04:00 AM | #14 | ||
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This was feedback posted for illuson
IP: 3971 6458
hahahahahaha!!! you have elevated, finally. checking polls, illusion, you had one funny punch and that was it, thousand miles, DOPE FLOW
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11-01-04, 12:25 PM | #15 |
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IP: 7517 1E63
Voted For: Thousand Miles
Damn plain wack battle....but let's see Thousand Miles i gotta say took this one though it was a close battle... Openin verse-Thousand Miles Punchlines-not much but T.M Structure- Tied Personals- T.M. OverAll-T.M. try 2 return da vote if u can T.M. no hate or notin on this vote Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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