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Elemental Soul | 5 | 83.33% | |
Tainted | 1 | 16.67% | |
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11-06-04, 10:04 PM | #1 | |
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Tainted vs Elemental Soul
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6 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 11-06-04 at 11:04 PM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. |
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11-06-04, 10:05 PM | #2 | |
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Tainted has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-06-04 10:05 PM.
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11-06-04, 10:08 PM | #3 | |
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IP: AD30 A0F8
Elemental Soul has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-06-04 10:08 PM.
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11-06-04, 10:15 PM | #4 | |
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Now who does this jerk-off think he is, he's a joke,
Before self-oral he was amazed with the wonders of deepthroat Down on his knees lickin' his fingers between gulps And he plays with his gun, can't keep his mouth off the nozzle Seen him walkin' from Jim McGreavy's house, forgetting to gargle And why is he here, he has no business in rap, Should be in a masturbation circle, fondling his jockstrap Think you fall in to the straight group, your in the wrong margin The rhymes so complex that they leave you lathargic Look peeps,Never knew Slim Shady had got breast enlargements |
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11-06-04, 10:50 PM | #5 | |
Crossing the Phyco's Path
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IP: AD30 A0F8
Brooklyn kid reppin Nas,only online tho,pussy betta pause,
Ya only chance to wrap,is if u worked for santa clause, Ya rhymes are infected,yet not sick while tainting, Cuz ya bein torn to peices,like picaso paintings, I see the bitch in you thru my computer,little like a splinter, This soft tittie can only get as hard as nipples in the winter, Ya flow's as bad as a broken faucet,u need a plumber, You wouldn't shine if u wore a golden helmet in the summer, I know your the stereo type,a bitch who thinks he's ghetto, Well ya blocks wouldn't be hot,even if u burned legos, |
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11-07-04, 01:54 AM | #6 |
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IP: 926C 118D
Voted For: Elemental Soul
elemental soul came harder and had good flow needs work on punches just a little. needs to use bugger words. tainted you had punches that were good but not hard. work on them and you'll do good. vote=Elemental Soul.
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11-07-04, 01:54 AM | #7 |
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return da favor in my sig. its justify. thanx and peace.
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11-07-04, 02:06 AM | #8 |
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IP: 5867 FD83
Voted For: Elemental Soul
Tainted Now who does this jerk-off think he is, he's a joke, Before self-oral he was amazed with the wonders of deepthroat wasnt feeling the opener. Down on his knees lickin' his fingers between gulps And he plays with his gun, can't keep his mouth off the nozzle Seen him walkin' from Jim McGreavy's house, forgetting to gargle that third meta/multi throws the flow way off And why is he here, he has no business in rap, Should be in a masturbation circle, fondling his jockstrap not played, but not good either Think you fall in to the straight group, your in the wrong margin The rhymes so complex that they leave you lathargic at least if had a punch to it, ill give you that Look peeps,Never knew Slim Shady had got breast enlargements again, the third line thing isnt working Elemental Soul Brooklyn kid reppin Nas,only online tho,pussy betta pause, Ya only chance to wrap,is if u worked for santa clause, ya got a smirk, decent opener Ya rhymes are infected,yet not sick while tainting, Cuz ya bein torn to peices,like picaso paintings, set up line was good I see the bitch in you thru my computer,little like a splinter, This soft tittie can only get as hard as nipples in the winter, trying to compare him using HARD analogies, played Ya flow's as bad as a broken faucet,u need a plumber, You wouldn't shine if u wore a golden helmet in the summer, these two lines were talking about somthing completely different. stick to a rhyme scheme, (plot) I know your the stereo type,a bitch who thinks he's ghetto, Well ya blocks wouldn't be hot,even if u burned legos, closure was decent as well, if the last line was a little more lengthened this would have been good vote: elemental soul return the favor, seriously. then leave a link to another one of your battles. http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=147152
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11-07-04, 02:23 AM | #9 | |
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IP: 6804 D41F
Voted For: Elemental Soul
elementry got this one good wordplay structre kinda weak rhymin but aight had preety flow tight structre best line-I know your the stereo type,a bitch who thinks he's ghetto, Well ya blocks wouldn't be hot,even if u burned legos, tainted had bad rhymin aight wordplay not so good structre but wordplay was aight best line-And why is he here, he has no business in rap, Should be in a masturbation circle, fondling his jockstrap
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11-07-04, 06:17 AM | #10 | |
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uppin 1.............leave links............................................. ......................
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11-07-04, 06:40 AM | #11 | |
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IP: 8983 E628
Voted For: Tainted
it was a tight battle and hard to decide but the sex jokes was hot even though kinda old and the flow wasn't that bad. but dawg didn't you no that this was actually true: Look peeps,Never knew Slim Shady had got breast enlargements. soul you had a flow but lost on everything else
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11-07-04, 11:33 AM | #12 | |
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IP: 28D6 AD76
Voted For: Elemental Soul
aight, Elemental, decent verse from u here....didnt see any personals, but u had decent punches n u were consistent eit them...nothin that made me say 'dayum!' but i liked seein that u had a different approach wit some concepts....structure was on point too... Tainted, u had a meh verse....structure was prolly the only thing goin for u here, dawg....u had punches n u were consistent, but they were basically all sex/gay jokes n shit...if u had been more creative u prolly woulda gotten my vote here... V/ Elemental, for more overall creativity... |
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11-07-04, 05:33 PM | #13 | |
Crossing the Phyco's Path
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IP: AD30 A0F8
uppin 2.....leave links
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11-07-04, 07:43 PM | #14 | |
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IP: 4550 84E0
Voted For: Elemental Soul
Elemental-what can i say...you got this one easy..nice punches...wordplay..didnt notice any multis...no hard hittin personals...but a good drop Tainted-uhh...first 5 lines...concept is overplayed...get original man..what can i say about your verse....no hard hittin punches...personals...wordplay...anything...just full of overplayed concepts, elevate and try to be unique V/Elemental return the favor...in my sig against legend
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