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View Poll Results: shadow vs MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
shadow 5 71.43%
MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ 2 28.57%
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Old 01-20-05, 10:51 PM   #1
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shadow vs MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ

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topical= False hopes

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Old 01-20-05, 11:08 PM   #2
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shadow has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-20-05 11:08 PM.
 
Old 01-20-05, 11:10 PM   #3
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Old 01-20-05, 11:21 PM   #4
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lied to or let down..soemtimes i dont kno whats worse..
blind-sided by false excitment the truth really hurts....
hoping for things that never come why should i even try?..
reality is a drop of blood in god's fate that makes u cry.
thought my hopes and dreams were coming..a reason 4 life..
false hopes led to false dreams that made me turn 2 the knife...
with out dreams and reality mixing we all start to mope...
whats worse living life tragically or recieving false hope...
lost between fairy tale and reality heavens meanings are a blurr..
...... dreams were broken like porcalain and murals of glass......

.....broken fractured..my world is stirred....
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Old 01-20-05, 11:27 PM   #5
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I putted an note in your locker, saying I was your secret admire
I’d emit all my feelings to you in that letter ,also added an flower
Your man doesn’t appreciates you, he don’t give you what you desire
He treated you like an puppet under his strings, it was like love for hire
Seeing you in the beautiful dress, god, You was like an rare diamond
Seeing you standing there where I arrange a meeting for you to see my body
Your eyes looking at the beautiful sighting, then appeared another human
You smiled at him, thinking he did this for you, my anger went to fumes
You kissed him. I ran down the road, my tears weeping, with an lost soul
I was hoping me and you can be together, all this time it was just an false hope
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Old 01-21-05, 11:34 PM   #6
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Uppin Nikkah'z..........................................
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Old 01-22-05, 08:50 AM   #7
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dam mista u have came a long way in ur topicals homes I think u won this one becuase I felt ur emotion more and ur flow was a tie both of u had a nice flow but I flet mistas emotions more and as if this has happened to him before his worplay was ok his imagry was good and vocab was iight. But overall u got a 7/10


I putted an note in your locker, saying I was your secret admire
I’d emit all my feelings to you in that letter ,also added an flower
Your man doesn’t appreciates you, he don’t give you what you desire
He treated you like an puppet under his strings, it was like love for hire
Seeing you in the beautiful dress, god, You was like an rare diamond

some good shit keep it up and hey hit up on my links peace
 
Old 01-22-05, 06:50 PM   #8
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Cool, uppin for some more votes. Holla at cha boi.
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Old 01-22-05, 10:38 PM   #9
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Old 01-23-05, 01:57 AM   #10
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mista: shit was nice. Had mad feelin n plot. Some shit most cats can relate to. lines were a liiittle stretched... but still cool. vocabulary could have been used better. But other than that nice verse. structure was good.

shadow: vocab was better than mistas. A more general way to approach the topic, but it was done in a nice emotional tone. I was kinda feelin this more for some reason. Just seemed a little more polished and professional.
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Old 01-23-05, 06:54 PM   #11
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W/e uppin for some more votes holla at cha boi.........
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Old 01-23-05, 09:12 PM   #12
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shadow:
man no hate but i think you didnt try here iv eseen so much better from you...you didnt have any good vocab here it lacked creativty a bit there was a few good emtaphores but nothign so creative you know i jsut felt it lacke dthat..but you did have a good stucutre and flow thats good...no hate man

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that was pretty good man you elevated alot your vocab was alot bettter then shadows and your stucture and flow is alot better now..the creativty and metas were there seen alot of imagery there was very good verse from you i shoulda been looking alot mroe cause your gettin better...damn good job...

opener: Mista
closer: shadow
metas: Mista
Imagery: Mista
flow: Shadow
stucture: shadow
creativty: Mista
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Old 01-24-05, 12:08 AM   #13
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O thanks homie.........uppin for some votes holla at cha boi.................
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Old 01-24-05, 06:04 PM   #14
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Uppin For Some Votes C'mon Uppin...................
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Old 01-25-05, 10:26 PM   #15
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Uppin For Some Damn Votes.............shit............
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