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02-02-05, 09:20 PM | #1 |
Peace, Love, Unity
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Assas-Sin vs OneStepBeyond
IP: D5E9 EBCF
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 02-05-05 at 09:20 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. Closed - Expired / old battle |
02-02-05, 11:34 PM | #2 | |
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IP: D5E9 EBCF
OneStepBeyond has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-02-05 11:34 PM.
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02-02-05, 11:42 PM | #3 |
Peace, Love, Unity
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IP: D5E9 EBCF
Its NOK... Won't start nothin... won't be nothin...
But you started somethin... Its gon' be somethin... Before I start just know that I ain't sayin this all for health, Im so sick its gotten to the point im 'two-steps-beyond' myself, Your bars ain't sick, so im sure that my ass is lastin a couple, But I got you studderin... like "My 'ass-ass' is in trouble!" I seen a few of your past battles... too bad half was borin, Plus you stretch your lines like my clothes if fat albert wore em', One-Step's dick in ya mouth so don't 'spit' if ya hopin to swallow, My flow will leave you 'washed up' like a note in a bottle, Ya'll battlin my homeboys.. and I noticed you screamin help, Im 'untanglin' this 'twisted' goverment then chokin them with themselves, Yo JDot! Why you makin me battle this shit for brains, The only things thats more 'ass' than his skill is his name, And your right controverzy sells, so only way you sellin a tape,* Is lettin the truth be known... and tell them your gay! I shouldn't need any more than this.. Even if my vocab.'s butt, But that wouldn't be a problem considerin your whole rap sucks... *Look in his sig. It's over |
02-03-05, 06:16 PM | #4 | |
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IP: 0825 899A
Assas-Sin has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-03-05 06:16 PM.
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02-03-05, 06:53 PM | #5 |
Yeah,This Account = Alias
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IP: 0825 899A
C'mon homeboi,You alright but im *OneStepBeyond* Dope
You a fag,So ya wouldnt mine catchin da nyne to ya throat FuckN with me and catch ya in THE ground BURY(Burried) Teks rep ya dude,Like da nets gettin shot at by Larry Ill put ya ta sleep for all dat bullshit talking but no walking So peeps see how its looks when*OneStep*sleep walking Ima merk ya,Watch yaself b4 ya take one to many steps Fam,Lookin my way get ya face heated from da tek You lame,Wack hmm..naw i think ya skills is way beyond While ya bangin my songs,Im at ya house bangin ya momz Get ya heat straighted up before ya merk ya azz Ill put more plotted dots in ya system than Geomotry Class Yeah got 1 win,How did ya manage that everyone ask? Response from OSB:Well i battle viper he's a no show ass.. OSB=OneStepBeyond look at it carefully or dont vote at all...make sure ya know what im sayin before voting...~1~ |
02-03-05, 09:44 PM | #6 |
Peace, Love, Unity
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IP: D5E9 EBCF
heh... uppin for votes.... reppin NOK like a mother fucker
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02-03-05, 09:46 PM | #7 |
freeze
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IP: 58E6 C588
Voted For: OneStepBeyond
V/Onestepbeyond....this was a good battle one came wit the diss's wit good structure an vocad wit personals.....assas-sin...u had sum good punchs but they weren't hittin hard like one u had sum inconsistent spots that i didn't feel an sum basic lines....no hate...jus elavate... punchs=one vocab=one structure=tie opener=one closer=one overall=Onestepbeyond *RETURN THE FAVOR* Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
02-03-05, 09:51 PM | #8 |
Peace, Love, Unity
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IP: D5E9 EBCF
uh oh... thanks son... if you want me to return it leaev a link, or i'll try to find one
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02-03-05, 09:56 PM | #9 |
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This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
IP: 10E3 79E5
i was definitly feelin this one.. it all flowed together pretty well..
Before I start just know that I ain't sayin this all for health, Im so sick its gotten to the point im 'two-steps-beyond' myself, ^ i liked how this was started off.. good begining 8/10 Your bars ain't sick, so im sure that my ass is lastin a couple, But I got you studderin... like "My 'ass-ass' is in trouble!" ^ it was a good diss on his name it flowed good 8/10 I seen a few of your past battles... too bad half was borin, Plus you stretch your lines like my clothes if fat albert wore em', ^ehh this wasnt my favorite.. it was alittle forced.. 6.5/10 One-Step's dick in ya mouth so don't 'spit' if ya hopin to swallow, My flow will leave you 'washed up' like a note in a bottle, ^I LOVED this one.. definitly my favorite line 9.5/10 Ya'll battlin my homeboys.. and I noticed you screamin help, Im 'untanglin' this 'twisted' goverment then chokin them with themselves, ^another good diss 7.9/10 Yo JDot! Why you makin me battle this shit for brains, The only things thats more 'ass' than his skill is his name, ^i laughed at this one, it was ok 7.5/10 And your right controverzy sells, so only way you sellin a tape,* Is lettin the truth be known... and tell them your gay! ^LMFAO! good bar 9/10 I shouldn't need any more than this.. Even if my vocab.'s butt, But that wouldn't be a problem considerin your whole rap sucks... ^GOT DAMN FAM.. u busted on ya self.. lol 7.5/10 u could up ur vocab. but u already noticed.. lol over all 8.9/10 |
02-03-05, 10:11 PM | #10 |
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IP: 10E3 79E5
this was alright u just were really repetitive on cuttin up on his username.. i think u could do better
C'mon homeboi,You alright but im *OneStepBeyond* Dope You a fag,So ya wouldnt mine catchin da nyne to ya throat ^this was alright i think u coulda entered better.. 6.5/10 FuckN with me and catch ya in THE ground BURY(Burried) Teks rep ya dude,Like da nets gettin shot at by Larry ^this was forced.. didnt like it 5.5/10 Ill put ya ta sleep for all dat bullshit talking but no walking So peeps see how its looks when*OneStep*sleep walking ^i liked this line.. it was alright 7.5/10 Ima merk ya,Watch yaself b4 ya take one to many steps Fam,Lookin my way get ya face heated from da tek ^i think u talked about guns to much personally its played.. 5.5/10 You lame,Wack hmm..naw i think ya skills is way beyond While ya bangin my songs,Im at ya house bangin ya momz ^lol this one was funny.. pretty good 7/10 Get ya heat straighted up before ya merk ya azz Ill put more plotted dots in ya system than Geomotry Class ^guns again.. TOSS IT.. 5/10 Yeah got 1 win,How did ya manage that everyone ask? Response from OSB:Well i battle viper he's a no show ass.. ^best line i must say.. it was a good closing.. i liked how it flowed.. 9/10 over all.. i think u needa up ur vocab and stop talkin bout guns nd stop the repetiveness.. keep it up tho.. overall: 7/10 --->im not use to the new layout nd everything.. and i ment to vote for One Step.. but heres the feed for Assas-Sin.. sorry every one for the mix up |
02-04-05, 05:47 PM | #12 |
Peace, Love, Unity
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IP: D5E9 EBCF
uppin.............................................
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02-04-05, 09:37 PM | #13 |
Back....
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This was feedback posted for Assas-Sin
IP: 49C8 2358
You posed to be uppyn our battle faggot. dayum.. You know you gonna lose. Just get it over with,
Holla
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02-05-05, 12:47 AM | #14 |
Peace, Love, Unity
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IP: D5E9 EBCF
uppin.............................................
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02-05-05, 04:12 PM | #15 | ||
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IP: B7EB 8905
Voted For: OneStepBeyond
OSB came nice had a few nice punches and flow persnals were alright good battle i have to say i think this battle was 1 sided realy both came ok but OSB came hard with his persnals and punches A-s came good not as hard though close battle but it was kind of 1 sided OSB gets my vote Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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