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OneStepBeyond has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-02-05 11:34 PM.

Its NOK... Won't start nothin... won't be nothin...
But you started somethin... Its gon' be somethin...



Before I start just know that I ain't sayin this all for health,
Im so sick its gotten to the point im 'two-steps-beyond' myself,
Your bars ain't sick, so im sure that my ass is lastin a couple,
But I got you studderin... like "My 'ass-ass' is in trouble!"
I seen a few of your past battles... too bad half was borin,
Plus you stretch your lines like my clothes if fat albert wore em',
One-Step's dick in ya mouth so don't 'spit' if ya hopin to swallow,
My flow will leave you 'washed up' like a note in a bottle,
Ya'll battlin my homeboys.. and I noticed you screamin help,
Im 'untanglin' this 'twisted' goverment then chokin them with themselves,
Yo JDot! Why you makin me battle this shit for brains,
The only things thats more 'ass' than his skill is his name,
And your right controverzy sells, so only way you sellin a tape,*
Is lettin the truth be known... and tell them your gay!
I shouldn't need any more than this.. Even if my vocab.'s butt,
But that wouldn't be a problem considerin your whole rap sucks...

*Look in his sig.


It's over

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Assas-Sin has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-03-05 06:16 PM.

C'mon homeboi,You alright but im *OneStepBeyond* Dope
You a fag,So ya wouldnt mine catchin da nyne to ya throat
FuckN with me and catch ya in THE ground BURY(Burried)
Teks rep ya dude,Like da nets gettin shot at by Larry
Ill put ya ta sleep for all dat bullshit talking but no walking
So peeps see how its looks when*OneStep*sleep walking
Ima merk ya,Watch yaself b4 ya take one to many steps
Fam,Lookin my way get ya face heated from da tek
You lame,Wack hmm..naw i think ya skills is way beyond
While ya bangin my songs,Im at ya house bangin ya momz
Get ya heat straighted up before ya merk ya azz
Ill put more plotted dots in ya system than Geomotry Class
Yeah got 1 win,How did ya manage that everyone ask?
Response from OSB:Well i battle viper he's a no show ass..


OSB=OneStepBeyond

look at it carefully or dont vote at all...make sure ya know what im sayin before voting...~1~

heh... uppin for votes.... reppin NOK like a mother fucker

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

V/Onestepbeyond....this was a good battle one came wit the diss's wit good structure an vocad wit personals.....assas-sin...u had sum good punchs but they weren't hittin hard like one u had sum inconsistent spots that i didn't feel an sum basic lines....no hate...jus elavate...
punchs=one
vocab=one
structure=tie
opener=one
closer=one
overall=Onestepbeyond
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uh oh... thanks son... if you want me to return it leaev a link, or i'll try to find one

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i was definitly feelin this one.. it all flowed together pretty well..
Before I start just know that I ain't sayin this all for health,
Im so sick its gotten to the point im 'two-steps-beyond' myself,
^ i liked how this was started off.. good begining 8/10

Your bars ain't sick, so im sure that my ass is lastin a couple,
But I got you studderin... like "My 'ass-ass' is in trouble!"
^ it was a good diss on his name it flowed good 8/10

I seen a few of your past battles... too bad half was borin,
Plus you stretch your lines like my clothes if fat albert wore em',
^ehh this wasnt my favorite.. it was alittle forced.. 6.5/10

One-Step's dick in ya mouth so don't 'spit' if ya hopin to swallow,
My flow will leave you 'washed up' like a note in a bottle,
^I LOVED this one.. definitly my favorite line 9.5/10

Ya'll battlin my homeboys.. and I noticed you screamin help,
Im 'untanglin' this 'twisted' goverment then chokin them with themselves,
^another good diss 7.9/10


Yo JDot! Why you makin me battle this shit for brains,
The only things thats more 'ass' than his skill is his name,
^i laughed at this one, it was ok 7.5/10

And your right controverzy sells, so only way you sellin a tape,*
Is lettin the truth be known... and tell them your gay!
^LMFAO! good bar 9/10

I shouldn't need any more than this.. Even if my vocab.'s butt,
But that wouldn't be a problem considerin your whole rap sucks...
^GOT DAMN FAM.. u busted on ya self.. lol 7.5/10

u could up ur vocab. but u already noticed.. lol
over all 8.9/10

this was alright u just were really repetitive on cuttin up on his username.. i think u could do better



C'mon homeboi,You alright but im *OneStepBeyond* Dope
You a fag,So ya wouldnt mine catchin da nyne to ya throat
^this was alright i think u coulda entered better.. 6.5/10

FuckN with me and catch ya in THE ground BURY(Burried)
Teks rep ya dude,Like da nets gettin shot at by Larry
^this was forced.. didnt like it 5.5/10

Ill put ya ta sleep for all dat bullshit talking but no walking
So peeps see how its looks when*OneStep*sleep walking
^i liked this line.. it was alright 7.5/10

Ima merk ya,Watch yaself b4 ya take one to many steps
Fam,Lookin my way get ya face heated from da tek
^i think u talked about guns to much personally its played.. 5.5/10

You lame,Wack hmm..naw i think ya skills is way beyond
While ya bangin my songs,Im at ya house bangin ya momz
^lol this one was funny.. pretty good 7/10

Get ya heat straighted up before ya merk ya azz
Ill put more plotted dots in ya system than Geomotry Class
^guns again.. TOSS IT.. 5/10

Yeah got 1 win,How did ya manage that everyone ask?
Response from OSB:Well i battle viper he's a no show ass..
^best line i must say.. it was a good closing.. i liked how it flowed.. 9/10

over all.. i think u needa up ur vocab and stop talkin bout guns nd stop the repetiveness.. keep it up tho..

overall: 7/10









--->im not use to the new layout nd everything.. and i ment to vote for One Step.. but heres the feed for Assas-Sin.. sorry every one for the mix up

this was an ok battle, yall both showed ur skills, we'll see who comes out wit the W.

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You posed to be uppyn our battle faggot. dayum.. You know you gonna lose. Just get it over with,
Holla

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