Battle Rules:

10-16 lines...
3 votes=tko
no swayin
No Crew or hate Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

lets go fam

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BLACK has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-24-05 11:27 AM.

im bout to murk u too, dis battle is easy, im focused
takin out ya "vets" like a mad dog was lurkin
u should learn some respect for dis kid
got u limp walkin round like u jus did a suicide attimp
u dont wanna battle? okay its ur loss
im slim thug jr, im a national boss
no coin toss cuz i get tha first drop, first win
dis gone be a tko, brought onto anotha nigga again

*hold up, let me think

okay, im comin of da dome like porn stars do before they fuck
honestly i didnt think u would wanna battle, thought u was a duck
im destine to take out every emcees and lastly leave nothin but me
for battle tips, i could let u see but i'll charge u a hefty fee
u scared of me, jus like dolla-bill is
dis kid named jay is a starved kid, give him some food
im stompin all over u like timbos do
strap up and get prepared for ur 10th time to lose

*i murked him. im tha best. no otha way to put it!

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MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-24-05 11:42 AM.

look.....

i all figured dis cat style...he's a pussy but still act wild....
if he had a "kid" call me "50 cent" cuzz ima wan kill "black-child"
shook u cant stand da be still like some1 gave dis man a E-pill
yeah u'll probly land a weak deal,afta dat u'll b a fan of me still
u winnin dis?...can it be? nope! marvjay i damage weak skillz...
if "eminem" aint say it on a record i would of neva heard of aMyTViLLE
datz sad...he's a noob rv dis bitch lier aint neva spit fire....
black said he aint gay but did a open mic 4 tha dickridaz
i know u hatin me now all da talk tuff talk aint fazin me clown
ya flow known da get more than lazy a round.....................
cuzz nigga ur "garbage" like where "brenda's baby was found"
da establishment,dis fag a be ova joyed just da say he was down
im keyin dis up laughin....at ya rappin u'll neva get betta cuzz
can u recall ya last win? no! ur not has been cuzz u neva was
i aint cool guy i'll pull da mac out blow ya back out so wild!...
throw ya raps out u'll neva get "light" ima call u "black-out" 4 now


explinations...

3rd bar-he's from amytville...and remember dat EM track when he was talkin bout amytville datz da only time i heard of dat shit

4thbar-just click da link..he did a open mic 4 tha dickridaz

6th bar-remember pac song brenda's gota baby..u'll get it

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

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^^he's scared.lol

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

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^^he's scared.lol

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Jay-had good structure very good punches sometime your flow waz off but you put effort into dis on
Black-it waz good at first den it feel off and you shud fix your structure try to make every line the same length it makes it easier to read

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

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^^he's scared.lol

stop writtin pre-writtens nigga. spit off tha dome like i did. dats tha only reason u might win nigga, u prewrittin bastard of a bitch

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^^^why would i write a bar 4 ya corny ass lmaooo...datz all off da top famron u madd cuzz ya shit was extra trash

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

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^^he's scared.lol

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

marv won this based on punches, personals, wordplay and vocab, the structure and flow went to black yo..

fav lines- datz sad...he's a noob rv dis bitch lier aint neva spit fire....
black said he aint gay but did a open mic 4 tha dickridaz

vote- marv jay based on punches and personals

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lol, how come Technical is ridin you Marv? i'm not saying i beat you, an he did explain the vote, but uhmmm, its a little weird how he is choosing ta vote on just your battles huh

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y r u watchin niggaz like dat....i voted on his battle and asked him 2 return da honest vote and he did so pleez fall back

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

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^^he's scared.lol