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Check in by: 03-05-05 at 11:48 AM

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AssAsInS-eVolve! has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-03-05 11:50 AM.

This chumped wanted to battle me man....hoo-ray
man i knew he wack thats why i gave him two days
Im aiming for you only so you can call it a solo-shot
not that i hate ya..its thats ya more fake than robo-cop
Ill drop tsunami's on this bitch coz he's plauged wit lies
This battle is over so you may as well WAVE good-bye
you shouldnt u've entered da forum..u shouldve layed of
coz jumping head first in a fire only way youll stay hot
Some should put n end to him n swipe his mic
Coz all of his raps are worthless just like his life!

static has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-03-05 03:31 PM.

Jus like yo name, you're wack, so don't you jump-it
And you blow more than a little kid equipped wit a trumpet
Yo rhymes, we'll never bump-it, cuz in rap, you're jus a rookie
I'm allergic to cats, that means you, you fuckin' pussy
If this battles a game, wit points, I'd win this shit by thirty
Bruise yo body black and blue, like a Duke road game jersey
Yea, it took me 3 days for me to come and drop my verse
I did so you could have false hope, and make the pain worse

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Voted For: static

assasin would have got my vote it was goin good and like da last 4 lines did not rhyme at all i mean wtf the last bar rhymed but u could have been more complex with that....static gets my vote for consistency of punches........1
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dude swipe his mic n like his life rhymes so wtf u tlking bout. so does stayhot n layed off buti guess their audio rhymes more than txt. but thx for voting man

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Voted For: static

static.. nice creative punches.. eh on the personals but over all i liked urs more it was witty at points. you had a much better opener and closer.. nice vocab to ..

Jus like yo name, you're wack, so don't you jump-it
And you blow more than a little kid equipped wit a trumpet
Yo rhymes, we'll never bump-it, cuz in rap, you're jus a rookie
I'm allergic to cats, that means you, you fuckin' pussy
eh alright lil stretched but i like it 4/10
If this battles a game, wit points, I'd win this shit by thirty
Bruise yo body black and blue, like a Duke road game jersey
decent 5/10
Yea, it took me 3 days for me to come and drop my verse
I did so you could have false hope, and make the pain worse
eh coulda been worded better but nice 3/10
12/30






This chumped wanted to battle me man....hoo-ray
man i knew he wack thats why i gave him two days
Im aiming for you only so you can call it a solo-shot
not that i hate ya..its thats ya more fake than robo-cop
Ill drop tsunami's on this bitch coz he's plauged wit lies
This battle is over so you may as well WAVE good-bye
you shouldnt u've entered da forum..u shouldve layed of
coz jumping head first in a fire only way youll stay hot
Some should put n end to him n swipe his mic
Coz all of his raps are worthless just like his life!


ok i won't evaluate this one.. you need to work on your vocab his was short but packed more punch.work on that and learn metaphors better

nice drop on both sides...

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Voted For: static

Vocab: eh, i thought this category was slightly tilted towards static, but not by much... plus the hoo-ray rhyme to start was kinda weak and seemed way too forced

Punches: definitely static in this category... only decent punch from evolve was that wave line, and it was only half-decent, all other punches were wack and played, like the stay hot by fire line... VERY played, static wins this category

Wordplay: this also goes to static pretty handily, was diggin the way you worded that cat line, even though it was kinda played... evolve dog you're creating opportunities to play on words, but i think you're trying too hard with the punch that you're overlooking that part... elevate that and you'll be good

overall: i liked static's flow and structure, and the punches just came off better and harder... i gotta give static my vote here

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Voted For: static

V/static....he gets my vote he came out wit original punchs an some good personals..wit good structure...assasin...u had a good verse but u lacked wit consistent diss's u had some good lines but didnt hit as hard as static...no hate good battle RETURN THE FAVOR....
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Voted For: AssAsInS-eVolve!

Assasin:
This chumped wanted to battle me man....hoo-ray
man i knew he wack thats why i gave him two days
wack punch
Im aiming for you only so you can call it a solo-shot
not that i hate ya..its thats ya more fake than robo-cop
wack meta but better
Ill drop tsunami's on this bitch coz he's plauged wit lies
This battle is over so you may as well WAVE good-bye
don't steal concepts again
you shouldnt u've entered da forum..u shouldve layed of
coz jumping head first in a fire only way youll stay hot
plizayed...
Some should put n end to him n swipe his mic
Coz all of his raps are worthless just like his life!
NO!
Ya the ratings are hard, but I was like this as a noob also, just look at rv's greats and try to elevate, no good punches

Static:
Jus like yo name, you're wack, so don't you jump-it
And you blow more than a little kid equipped wit a trumpet
blah, ok concept
Yo rhymes, we'll never bump-it, cuz in rap, you're jus a rookie
I'm allergic to cats, that means you, you fuckin' pussy
coulda been worded better, bo decent
If this battles a game, wit points, I'd win this shit by thirty
Bruise yo body black and blue, like a Duke road game jersey
plizayed
Yea, it took me 3 days for me to come and drop my verse
I did so you could have false hope, and make the pain worse
ok
ya, you didn't destroy him, but this was pretty one sided, you had some ok lines, the pussy line was ok, shoulda worded it better though, good battle though both.

v/static