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AssAsInS-eVolve! | 4 | 44.44% | |
SpeatsBeats | 5 | 55.56% | |
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03-14-05, 05:44 PM | #1 |
Hell yeah
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AssAsInS-eVolve! vs SpeatsBeats
IP: 3D49 422E
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03-14-05, 05:46 PM | #2 | |
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IP: 3D49 422E
SpeatsBeats has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-14-05 05:46 PM.
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03-14-05, 06:56 PM | #3 |
Hell yeah
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IP: E7A1 D96E
Considare this a movie,im the good,your the ennemie
Like always,the good wins and then everybody's happy The monster had been created on april 27 1988* its why March 14th is the date,this is your last day I didnt use a beat for this,i closed my eyes for this** You so none important,youd be featured last in a generic I saw some battles from this dude,battlin him is almost rude Dont battle me if your wack,stick with your wack ass crew*** Murder Mook would murder himself knowing you know him* U wished as christmas gift a pac full of good lyrics The only one evolve in assassin's death would be me bitch |
03-15-05, 12:00 PM | #4 | |
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IP: B3B9 F44A
AssAsInS-eVolve! has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-15-05 12:00 PM.
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03-16-05, 07:59 AM | #5 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: CD98 49E3
I'll singe this child..coz his skills r like bodies being dumped in da river coz when it cums 2 wackness his "In denial"(in da nile)
I "knock-ya", dude aint a rapper his n "imposter"... his profile says his a fighter..shit injecting canine genes in ya body only way you'll be a "boxer"!!!! Rhymes? he bites all...claims he fights brawls Hows he a gangster?? kids still at high-school Thought he could win...shit I played him Needs god ta save him!!...coz this battles like his school years coz ill fucking "Degrade-(de-grade) him" |
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03-16-05, 09:54 AM | #6 |
..::shut the fuck up::..
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IP: 9395 3890
Voted For: AssAsInS-eVolve!
this verse was alot better more hard hitting punchlines and alot better structure the other verse fell off a little it was consistant enough to win on punchlines this verse was the better one... |
03-16-05, 11:55 AM | #7 |
Hell yeah
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IP: EE7B 918D
u jokin about the structure right? lol............
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03-16-05, 02:48 PM | #8 | |
www.militantmusic.com
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IP: 403D 72A8
Voted For: SpeatsBeats
speats won this not a very good battle but his shit actually made sense punches were ight rhymes were okay structre was pretty good good flow too wordplay was ight best line---I saw some battles from this dude,battlin him is almost rude Dont battle me if your wack,stick with your wack ass crew*** please return the favor in my battle link in my sig
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03-16-05, 04:45 PM | #9 |
Hell yeah
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IP: 3BB6 58E0
thx i guess...........................................
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03-16-05, 05:41 PM | #10 | |
in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
Voted For: AssAsInS-eVolve!
wow, i think you guys need only one word........ELEVATION, not to be harsh or anything, but this was really bad structure....speats, you had a decent one, but your flow sucked ass cause your wordplay was garbage, gotta get more creative with your shit, none of your punches hit, seemed like they were all fillers, sorry, you had the right idea for personals, but your vocab and wordplay was poorly done, and you just couldnt connect them, sorry man, but you gotta elevate.....you did have good structure, so play off that....dont worry, only way to go is up....word assassin, your structure...where was it, and your lines were huge, then small, then huge again, dont do that.....it flowed decent, but work on structure, alot.....im giving you this vote because you had punches that landed, they were stretched and worded poorly, but you had the only effective ones.....but you still need to elevate alot v/assassins evolve.....no hating here, this was honest....rtf if you could with an honest explained vote
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03-16-05, 06:09 PM | #11 | |
.:Lyrically Unbeatable:.
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This was feedback posted for SpeatsBeats
IP: 0793 7608
SpeatsBeats
Considare this a movie,im the good,your the ennemie Like always,the good wins and then everybody's happy/ WEAK OPENER The monster had been created on april 27 1988* its why March 14th is the date,this is your last day/ mmmmm? I didnt use a beat for this,i closed my eyes for this** You so none important,youd be featured last in a generic/? I saw some battles from this dude,battlin him is almost rude Dont battle me if your wack,stick with your wack ass crew*** Murder Mook would murder himself knowing you know him* U wished as christmas gift a pac full of good lyrics The only one evolve in assassin's death would be me bitch/Weak Closure Speats-no punches at opponent weak rhymes good structure, but no elevation work on elevatin homie n u b iight
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03-17-05, 08:28 PM | #12 |
New to RV
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IP: B525 44D9
Voted For: SpeatsBeats
this wuz a weak ass battle fo both of u guys. SpeatsBeats, not all of your shit seemed 2 ryme. n u didnt have much fo punches. AssAsInS-eVolve! ur structure wuz fucked up man. u had alot of stretched lines. flow: SpeatsBeats. structure: SpeatsBeats no hate AssAsInS-eVolve!, but SpeatsBeats took this one. both o fu guys need a lil elevating.
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03-17-05, 08:41 PM | #13 |
Hell yeah
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IP: 5DB5 D4B2
iight thanks......................................
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03-17-05, 09:04 PM | #14 |
Flyweight
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IP: 8C23 CA6B
Voted For: AssAsInS-eVolve!
aight Ae-Ya structure was fucked up but had some nice shit ya 2nd bar was pretty nice and last bar liked Sb-You were striahgt forward and lame I could predict wut u was guna say wit out readin ya verse mayne come more creative but good battle overal-Ae ~1~
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03-18-05, 07:37 AM | #15 |
Hell yeah
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IP: 3D49 422E
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