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03-20-05, 11:01 PM | #1 | |||||||
I can rap and stuff.
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Ambient vs. (Jimmy Pocketz)
IP: 2B2B A81F
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03-21-05, 08:17 AM | #2 | |||||
I just don't give a fuck!
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IP: ECB3 36A0
In.
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03-23-05, 05:40 AM | #3 | |||||
~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP: D135 D6AF
Check Move Bitch.....
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03-24-05, 08:31 PM | #4 | |||||
~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP: DDE0 045C
This a 1st week Ko..0 and 1..So im guessin ya Lucks isnt Fuck Proof
No Possible way u can touch me..Like No ArmKidz in Duck Duck Goose Actually ya Destination equals Elimination...Thats a Twist of ya Fate U Can only Blow when u Reverse a P-89....Thats a Twist of ya Face U talkin hood..U Not 50..if any ..Really..Ya Bodys not full of any Holes u like an Injured David Beckham.Basically ya Lifes not full of any Goals you remind me of a Disfigured writer....u got nuthin but Twiztid Plots Mishandeling ya Mcgriddles....... only time u dropped anything Hotz You destined to lose..Dont get Depressed.....Go head cry me a River Ambient Linez resemble a Disfunctional Printer.....They Never Deliver
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03-25-05, 07:53 AM | #5 | |||||
I just don't give a fuck!
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IP: ECB3 36A0
time to shake off the rust i guess
OMG ur utter garbage... really b how'd d'you expect to beat the best with a verse fulla similie's that and a weak attempt at a personal.. ya verse is duller losing is a hard game.... and one u pass with flying colors ur disliked and despise and all ya verses are lame guy all of rv hate you.... & that was BEFORE they kicked u from AI let the blade mess up ya face, slice and carve realise ur simp.son WITHOUT bart, homer, lisa and marge here sinse july and still can't master the basics, dammit just leave because that verse was a bigger joke then the fuckin multie league |
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03-25-05, 10:50 AM | #6 | |||||
The Epitome Of Greatness
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IP: 28AD 5545
Troop:
You had an alright verse, some good metas decent punches but nothing too great just mediocre stuff.. Best bar: This a 1st week Ko..0 and 1..So im guessin ya Lucks isnt Fuck Proof No Possible way u can touch me..Like No ArmKidz in Duck Duck Goose best part of ya verse was the metas overall: 6.5/10 amb: Decent verse also.. a couple good metas and 1 dope punch. rest was average best bar: let the blade mess up ya face, slice and carve realise ur simp.son WITHOUT bart, homer, lisa and marge good meta there, nice punch a good personal and you came a bit better here with the punches.. not much better though. overall: 7/10 vote: Amb
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03-25-05, 11:16 AM | #7 | |||
Yeah,This Account = Alias
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IP: 28AD 5545
vote-jimmy pocketz
ambient good verse hommie but not consistant through out ya drop....punches were decent...personals were alright coulda done better like..whoa...structure was a lil bad at beginning then got into it....flow was good...multis were ok...closer was dope.... best lines: here sinse july and still can't master the basics, dammit just leave because that verse was a bigger joke then the fuckin multie league vs jimmy- hmm pretty tite opener not bad at all....flow was on point..punches were kinda good coulda done better...personals were good...multis were alright...structure was good....closer was deadly...werd best lines: you remind me of a Disfigured writer....u got nuthin but Twiztid Plots Mishandeling ya Mcgriddles....... only time u dropped anything Hotz You destined to lose..Dont get Depressed.....Go head cry me a River Ambient Linez resemble a Disfunctional Printer.....They Never Deliver v/jimmy pocketz |
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03-25-05, 12:07 PM | #8 | ||||
.::Outside The Circle::.
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IP: C37E 3A03
wow, ambient got this one, he came with some witty punches, the simpson line was nice, also i was definitely feeling the multi league line too....
Troop, your actually starting to get a grasp of basic punches, but they still arent hitting very hard yet... u had some forced rhymes and ur verse coulda read better... so overall i give this one to ambient for wittier punches, and although structure wasnt real nice ur verse flowed nicely... V/Ambient..
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03-25-05, 05:50 PM | #9 | |||||
[ a.k.a Os ]
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Vote - Ambient
here sinse july and still can't master the basics, dammit just leave because that verse was a bigger joke then the fuckin multie league ^Had to say this was the best punch on your side Ambient your structure was kinda wack to me but everything else hit dead on good job You destined to lose..Dont get Depressed.....Go head cry me a River Ambient Linez resemble a Disfunctional Printer.....They Never Deliver ^This was Troop's best punchi think your verse was decent but a lot of more played punches and I really wasn't feeling that mcgriddle line but anyways your verse was decent i just think overall Ambeint's was better with his personals and punches... |
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03-26-05, 03:33 AM | #10 | |||||
I just don't give a fuck!
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IP: ECB3 36A0
if you think structure has anything do with a bad or good verse... then you are wack
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03-26-05, 12:52 PM | #11 | ||||
FuxJustAWord
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IP: 3B27 2020
Troop:
Like Ambient stated, ur verse was a bunch of similies and metas, with semi-punches at the end, but they dont land very hard at all....... the line i felt the most was: U talkin hood..U Not 50..if any ..Really..Ya Bodys not full of any Holes u like an Injured David Beckham.Basically ya Lifes not full of any Goals ..... decent verse, with the multiple end rhymes, but u arent really attacking ambient.... its just a basic diss, and they dont hit very hard besides that. Ambient: .. yea u were kinda rusty, structure was alil off in the opener, but u filled ur verse with metas, punches, and personals, unlike troop, who really only focused on metas.... ur best bar to me was: let the blade mess up ya face, slice and carve realise ur simp.son WITHOUT bart, homer, lisa and marge by far, because most of the rest of ur verse was more simplistic, besides that and another bar... luckily for u, complexity is not the only indicator in a battle.... and for the nice personals and punches, U WIN V/Ambient |
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03-26-05, 10:21 PM | #12 | ||||
Aiming for Heads
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Pocket
This a 1st week Ko..0 and 1..So im guessin ya Lucks isnt Fuck Proof No Possible way u can touch me..Like No ArmKidz in Duck Duck Goose played.. Actually ya Destination equals Elimination...Thats a Twist of ya Fate U Can only Blow when u Reverse a P-89....Thats a Twist of ya Face you repeated yaself U talkin hood..U Not 50..if any ..Really..Ya Bodys not full of any Holes u like an Injured David Beckham.Basically ya Lifes not full of any Goals eh.. you remind me of a Disfigured writer....u got nuthin but Twiztid Plots Mishandeling ya Mcgriddles....... only time u dropped anything Hotz nope You destined to lose..Dont get Depressed.....Go head cry me a River Ambient Linez resemble a Disfunctional Printer.....They Never Deliver weak Ambient OMG ur utter garbage... really b how'd d'you expect to beat the best with a verse fulla similie's nope that and a weak attempt at a personal.. ya verse is duller losing is a hard game.... and one u pass with flying colors ok ur disliked and despise and all ya verses are lame guy all of rv hate you.... & that was BEFORE they kicked u from AI nice let the blade mess up ya face, slice and carve realise ur simp.son WITHOUT bart, homer, lisa and marge good here sinse july and still can't master the basics, dammit just leave because that verse was a bigger joke then the fuckin multie league hahahahaha Vote = Ambient
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03-26-05, 10:31 PM | #13 | |||||
Blow Me
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OMG ur utter garbage... really b
how'd d'you expect to beat the best with a verse fulla similie's good that and a weak attempt at a personal.. ya verse is duller losing is a hard game.... and one u pass with flying colors no ur disliked and despise and all ya verses are lame guy all of rv hate you.... & that was BEFORE they kicked u from AI nice let the blade mess up ya face, slice and carve realise ur simp.son WITHOUT bart, homer, lisa and marge nah… here sinse july and still can't master the basics, dammit just leave because that verse was a bigger joke then the fuckin multie league okay… This a 1st week Ko..0 and 1..So im guessin ya Lucks isnt Fuck Proof No Possible way u can touch me..Like No ArmKidz in Duck Duck Goose hell no Actually ya Destination equals Elimination...Thats a Twist of ya Fate U Can only Blow when u Reverse a P-89....Thats a Twist of ya Face okay… U talkin hood..U Not 50..if any ..Really..Ya Bodys not full of any Holes u like an Injured David Beckham.Basically ya Lifes not full of any Goals nope you remind me of a Disfigured writer....u got nuthin but Twiztid Plots Mishandeling ya Mcgriddles....... only time u dropped anything Hotz no… You destined to lose..Dont get Depressed.....Go head cry me a River Ambient Linez resemble a Disfunctional Printer.....They Never Deliver decent v/ Amb
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03-27-05, 08:15 AM | #14 | |||||
I just don't give a fuck!
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IP: ECB3 36A0
I can't edit my check in with links?? gay
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=182823 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2052557 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2052558 |
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03-27-05, 09:46 PM | #15 | ||||
In ya area.
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IP: 3358 DF00
Ambient wins by KO, 6-0 'cuz JP missed links.
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