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premanition | 5 | 83.33% | |
metaman | 1 | 16.67% | |
Voters: 6. You may not vote on this poll |
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03-20-05, 05:18 PM | #1 | |
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metaman vs premanition
IP: 3240 794D
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03-20-05, 05:22 PM | #2 | |
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IP: AF26 5E07
Premanition has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-20-05 05:22 PM.
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03-20-05, 05:24 PM | #3 | |
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IP: 3240 794D
metaman has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-20-05 05:24 PM.
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03-20-05, 06:05 PM | #4 | |
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IP: AF26 5E07
Metaman? Damn im still waitin on the evidence
No punches inserted so ‘explanations’ are irrelevant Gud to grab attention, get the reader to engage Man I literally wish ur shit wud jump up off the page Yeh I stage the event with true content for descent In the shadows? Meta’s got a torch in that tent Yeh you flow like a river, like air from a fan If the fan included a band round its fuckin fin span Its o.k, go borrow my verse, use that copy n paste Cos this over so quik its seems ashame it go to waste
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03-21-05, 12:04 AM | #5 | |
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IP: 3240 794D
im an authority here i punish kids daily,
he's PRE-MAN so how he gon have da balls to face me? my lyrics hit hard break you down wit pounds of notes, you bout to "go down easy" like bud ice down yo throat, why dis chicken cross da road to get merked in a text battle? this bitch is a joke his played punchlines aint laughable (lol), you asked for a battle but i bet yo shits-pre-written, yo favorite rapper drop a hot line in the last fifteen-minutes? (HA!) imma send-this bitch home cause imma menace like dennis, you couldnt send hard shots if dis was a game of tennis! all punches are pretty obvious pm if you have questions |
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03-21-05, 12:50 AM | #6 |
...Untouchable...
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IP: 93C0 D1DD
Voted For: Premanition
Prem Nice Man Did This Shit This Was Almost One Sided You Cam With Nice Punches, Personals Was Alright Man, Vocabulary Cool, Best Part About This Was Wordplay Dope SHit SOne, Structure Ey! Pretty Good, Matter Of Fact It Was Decent, Nice Job On This One Maybe You'll Battle Me One Day, Lol Just Playing Bro Metaman Nice Man Personals Alright, Punches, Should Of Use Something Like Final Destination Shit Ha Ha But Cool, Vocabulary Alright, Structre Was Neat, Nothing Really Else Here, Your Wordplay Ey! You Can Do Better Vote-Prem Prem Return The Favor Me Vs .K.onfliktz In My Sig It's 4-3 I'm Up I'm An Alias By The Way One |
03-21-05, 06:19 AM | #7 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: B3B9 F44A
Voted For: metaman
vote= metaman mettas=meta punches=metta wordplay=metta structure=tie it wasnt that a close battle coz mettaman had a better verse overall. all i can say is work on ya concepts n try to elevate more. Thats 2 both of ya |
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03-21-05, 04:36 PM | #8 | |
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IP: 0592 37D8
upppppppppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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03-21-05, 05:18 PM | #9 |
...fuck life.
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: Premanition
damn, dis wus actually better than i thought it wood be... premanition-good:loved the opener, liked the vocab, and also liked the wordchoice, you also had little multies in there, good structure, and werdplay...seen better from you thoguh, but your topicals are much better bad:i didnt really like your closer, it felt played fav line was the 2nd metaman-good:liked teh name play, decent opener, the link helped a little bad:hated the closer, it was played, flow fell off, and wasnt really feelin your verse mang fav line was the one bout last 15 minutes, that was good, lol opener:P closer:M vocab:P punches:P personals:M werdplay:P flow:P structure:P *i see potential in meta man so keep it up mang* rtf...link in sig v/premanition |
03-21-05, 08:58 PM | #10 | |
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IP: 3240 794D
uppin dis for some votes please
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03-22-05, 07:38 PM | #11 | |
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IP: 28AD 5545
uppin
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03-23-05, 12:35 AM | #12 | |
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IP: C3DD FDB3
Voted For: Premanition
lol pre got this from the opener to the end the multies were nice that first punch hit hard enough to knock metas shit off the page [lol] Metaman? Damn im still waitin on the evidence ^^^^^great opener meta you really didnt have metas that disapointed me that bud thing killed your verse kinda pointless v/premanition
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03-23-05, 12:35 AM | #13 | |
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IP: C3DD FDB3
return the favor on my battle its been open for way to long honest votes only
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03-25-05, 07:23 AM | #14 | |
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IP: 8002 63C0
uppin to finish this......................................
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03-25-05, 03:49 PM | #15 | |
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