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Marvelis | 0 | 0% | |
MaRVJay1009 | 5 | 100.00% | |
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04-23-05, 01:36 PM | #1 | |
aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
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MaRVJay1009 vs Marvelis
IP: 3240 794D
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04-23-05, 01:45 PM | #2 | |
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Marvelis has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-23-05 01:45 PM.
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04-23-05, 01:57 PM | #3 | |
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IP: B623 E7E3
niggas talk shit to a 16 year "old"/i'll open up ya whole life and then bring it to a "close"/cuz my flows smoke like a cigar "hit" ima keep pumpin nigga till it go "click-click"/this is "sick-shit" so i got to put my name "in it"/they call me marvelis and i have to "say" that on this text battle im killin a nigga they call "marv-jay"/im in tha dirty "south" where u would fit in cuz u got a dirty "mouth"/when u read this u definately gon b sayin "ouch"/u betta watch ya "mouth" b4 i end uup in ya home town all up in ya "house"/im a crazy nigga wit a real itch trigga finga/
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04-23-05, 02:06 PM | #4 | |
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MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-23-05 02:06 PM.
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04-23-05, 02:09 PM | #5 | |
aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
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IP: 3240 794D
like "fans spendin da nite 4 world series tickets" i "sleep on ya lines".
whut b on ya mind?,u wack only "feed-back" u'll get is some "teeth on ya spine". u should run & hide,fam fukk ya pride,my slugz a push ya lung a side. should be ashamed of ya self u 5-8 doin audio's & textin your 1-5. da type get smack n run 2 da feds,he broke i doubt dis fukka get bread. u a pre writa..not i my bar's like where u "live" they come "from:da head"* on foe's-i-bang,trust me my flows-not-lame,i see dis hoe's-not-sane. you dont rap shit like me fam u just a dickhead dat stole my name!. with guns im real handy b,u gon merk sombody? well it cant be me. i'll squeeze at ya face just 2 see ya marvelis "leave" his "family tree". *he's from a place called "da head"..so u'll get it
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04-23-05, 02:12 PM | #6 | |
aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
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IP: 3240 794D
okay uppin 4 some votes now
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04-23-05, 04:19 PM | #7 | |
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IP: B8C9 5519
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
WOOOOOOOOW Rofl Vote=Marv Marvelis i dont think even had a punch in his whole verse .. it was like a selfless ramble .. marvelis you need to elevate look more at his name flip it or something ...............
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04-23-05, 05:17 PM | #8 | |
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IP: BCE0 F41E
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
matv won dis battle becuz his verse wuz much mo tighter he had da better punchez an his verse flowd an made sense marvelis verse wuz all fukked up wit da horrible structure da shit wuz unreadable |
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04-25-05, 04:51 PM | #9 | |
aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
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IP: 0825 899A
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04-26-05, 01:04 PM | #10 | |
aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
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IP: 28AD 5545
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04-26-05, 01:13 PM | #11 |
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IP: 3354 DAC6
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
hmmm. this was one sided, marvelis ya sructure is fucked, thats a no-no, u should hve ya struc like marv j¬s..wouldnt b a prob if ya content was good but it wasnt.none of ya lines ruymed..which the way u structured it they din hve to but on rv it matters.n e way u had no punches.ya rhymes were all self-glory..which is pointless, the whole point of a battle is to diss ya opponent which u failed to do..only gud thing u had was flow & multies, but this matters nothin without personals and punches. marv j came aiight..noothin special...he did enough because he beat marvelis with harder punches which is the most important thing.
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04-26-05, 03:20 PM | #12 | |
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IP: 0825 899A
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
This battle goes in favor of marvjay1009 Marvjay had better Structure.His punches hit better than marvelis's. His personals were good i liked them a lot.To me his best line was: u should run & hide,fam fukk ya pride,my slugz a push ya lung a side. should be ashamed of ya self u 5-8 doin audio's & textin your 1-5. Marvelis dropped pretty weak.His structure fucked everything up. His punches were decent but if they were structured better then he would get more credit from me in dis battle.Personals were decent also. Overall vote - Marvjay1009 |
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04-26-05, 07:53 PM | #13 | |
Banned: Biting
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
well\ Marvjay Not Stressin Yourslef to win this battle i can see .....You basically supplied A few punchez to his NO Punchez made your verse that much more better lol i feel that you take this battle basically bcuz your verse was better andy dood could see that and plus you roppenents structure was jus ........Wack and im not even gonna start on his verse so plainly and simply told ,,,,,..You win this battle RTF in Either battle link in my sig Marvelis Aii man Your verse was sloppy To start off sayin I couldnt really read it bcuz your lines were jus like a regular paragraoh and the shit was all over the place so when i really did read it Your lines didnt come with any punchez jus basic diss lines that i here people say daily so im not givin you my vote But You can RTF i my Battles Honestly |
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