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Shard has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-30-05 03:21 PM.

Tstorm has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-01-05 04:05 AM.

Yo this easy bitch cornered....... Like workin' a street whore
n' I must be salting some clouds how I'm murking a Tstorm*
swerve n' just flee scorn.. you ain't have the heart to go far
cuz the only heart you have... involve eatin' artichoke parts**
ya cartiledge in nose broke.. kid watch doubt rush your cred
sculpt more chips off ya face than a Mount Rushmore head
you covet lead..as dildo pencils or a bullet lodged in ya brain
dog shoppin at Old Navy is the only time you mallin' a name***
drunk insane or starved are bitches that like T.... dun's gay
but he pop alot of cherries... when eatin' ice cream sundaes!

* salting clouds makes it rain... but also plays out the force of a thunderstorm...
** artichoke hearts...
*** Old navy found in shopping malls... wordplay used so also means Maulin a name... which is to do a name harm in some way...


g/l



holla.

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word. Uppin for votes.....................................

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....................chea........................ vote on this................ I will rtf............

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fucking vote.........................................

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Voted For: Tstorm

votin for Re

Re got this due to way more creative punches and personals

Re
Punches- creative, hard hittin, very well delivered... nice
Personals- lil basic not as hard but very creative.... nice
flow- on the point, very easy to stay with.... nice
strucutre- nice and easy to read, easy to stay wit... nice
multies- didnt notice anyway... so elevtae on them some

favorite line:
You need more than luck to win..but theres no four-leaf-clover
No chance of improving ya interlect,....coz ya "schoolings over"*****
(nice way to close it off, nice punch as well)

Shard
Punches- a lil basic, some were hard others not, elevate on full hard punches threw ya whole verse

nah punchline:
ya cartiledge in nose broke.. kid watch doubt rush your cred
sculpt more chips off ya face than a Mount Rushmore head
(nah wasnt feelin it, weak, not impressing)

Personals- basic, some hard some not once again, get stronger
flow- good flow, nice
strucutre- nice and even
multies- didnt see any... elevate on those

elevate on ya multies n get harder punches and personals

both elevate on multies


good battle fams

vote goes to Re for harder punches and creative personals


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Voted For: Tstorm

V/Re~verb.....this was a good battle...both came wit good verses...but verb gets my vote he came wit creative punchs werdplay personals an vocab also structure was on point.....Shard...u had a good verse too u had sum good punchs but a couple of played ones that throw off ur verse..i liked the closer it was good...but u need to work on the punchs ......No Hate..RETURN THE FAVOR........
Opener=R
Closer=S
punchs=R
Personals=Tie
Wordplay=R
Vocab=R
Multi's=Tie
Structure=Tie
Overall=Re~verb

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Voted For: Tstorm

mettas=t-storm
punches=t-storm
wordplay=shard
creativity=t-storm
overall=t-strom

this was a one sided battle coz t was more consistent with his disses simple as that. Shard ya structure n flows good but ya forcing ya multies n the punches aint making much sense, sort that shit out n elevate a bit more.peace, return da vote http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=188270