6. SPuL aka Reckless Vs. 13. 9th Degree

10 Line Minimum - 20 Line Maximum (By Request From SPuL aka Reckless and 9th Degree)

Please Check-In by Wednesday, and Drop your verse by Friday.

Good Luck to both of you..

Checking in for 9th Degree, and I will be dropping his verse for him also

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check, good luck foo.

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Lol @ JTR and LyricalFlowz...

The battle is finally here...checkin' in.

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The match is finally here...

Spul you've been duckin' me for months, I tried stayin' on your heels
But you're more shook than driving instructors with Asians at the wheel
You got no appeal, so I'll only son you for a moment like I'm your foster
We're in Ghost Writerz together, how come yours aren't on the roster?
They'll get you banned again, and you'll deny it, fess up and spill guts
Oh well, you're the RV vampire - if you bit you'd still suck
And crying to strobe is actually startin' to go out of fashion
…This guy's a gangster? His real name's Sebastian!
But you've got plenty of dirt on me, and worst of all
The fact I've voted for you before…now thank AIM for that personal
It's always either "plz vote!" or "I'll bang this chick till her tummy hurts"
Well of course you would, you might as well get your money's worth
'Cuz if you were broke as ya rhymes she wouldn't let you touch her
You're wacker than a vote based on structure, motherfucker!
But on this site you're accomplished, that's supposed to stress me up
Yet I see your body of work…has developed anorexia
And if you're always biting and cheatin' then what you still flow for?
You got band from RV more than Livestrong in '04
And now I'm curious why I'm still kickin' this rhyme
'Cuz you ain't even worth my time to finish this…

Good luck Spul

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Spul
This stupid college kid. You're shit, like feces
9th degree? More like ninth try at your degree
off, but ok
Your face is so ugly, even you kno that it's tru
I'd try to cover your face.......................
.....................................but it's already done by you!
talking bout the pic? okay...
°This °kid °sucks... -°and °he °is °wacker °than °me
Wanna kno who'll win? Jus look near the 9th degree
good thinking. i like it. but wheres the wordplay?
All you are you owe to your parents, but you don't count
Cuz you jus give them a penny............................
....................................and you more than square the account!!
umm i dont think so
You ain't gon win here, man, my rhymes are jus too mean
You're gonna go and end up short, and I ain't talkin' about your jeans
i hate that style, sorry
You got here wit no-shows, and by battlin' wack fucks
You could prolly get enough exercise, by jus pushin' your luck
haha, real dope line. serious
Your charade, we see through it, kinda like it was a mist
Your wins are 9th degree burns.................................
.................................................. ...... man... they don't exist
haha, good
Take you to tha "House of pain" was "jumpin around" in pic
only way you'll "ever-last" "hard", is some viagra, you "dick!"
first line = hot ..... second = un-hot
My flow, you kno, it go and make hoes, no-show
Am I gettin' dope wit you? Oh, yea... how would you kno?
totally missed the point
Your humongous post count... only time that you look big
Wanna kno where your tourney ends?................
.................................................. .. Man, jus click my sig
another good idea, but lacked wordplay as well

*well, your verse was sure good sir. yea, umm you set
off a little shaky but the verse picked up, the bars got
hotter, the personals god stronger, the fillers got fewer.
you had some new ideas put down in ya verse (the sig click,
and the 9th degree = me thing ) but for those to work. you
gotta have mad wordplay. trust. other than that...ya verse
was decently good........90%

9th Degree
Spul you've been duckin' me for months, I tried stayin' on your heels
But you're more shook than driving instructors with Asians at the wheel
i think ya talking bout Gone In 60 Seconds...good open
You got no appeal, so I'll only son you for a moment like I'm your foster
We're in Ghost Writerz together, how come yours aren't on the roster?
haha, hot
They'll get you banned again, and you'll deny it, fess up and spill guts
Oh well, you're the RV vampire - if you bit you'd still suck
aahh, didnt like it
And crying to strobe is actually startin' to go out of fashion
…This guy's a gangster? His real name's Sebastian!
wheres the transition?
But you've got plenty of dirt on me, and worst of all
The fact I've voted for you before…now thank AIM for that personal
good shit
It's always either "plz vote!" or "I'll bang this chick till her tummy hurts"
Well of course you would, you might as well get your money's worth
haha, haha
'Cuz if you were broke as ya rhymes she wouldn't let you touch her
You're wacker than a vote based on structure, motherfucker!
good shit, what kinda shmuck bases a vote on structure?
But on this site you're accomplished, that's supposed to stress me up
Yet I see your body of work…has developed anorexia
okay
And if you're always biting and cheatin' then what you still flow for?
You got band from RV more than Livestrong in '04
decent...going downhill
And now I'm curious why I'm still kickin' this rhyme
'Cuz you ain't even worth my time to finish this…
...LINE. haha...decent closure.

*ya verse was real hot here. the flow was
magnatizing. and the punches were real on.
the personals reigned the fillers. killer verse.
umm the last 2 bars were decent. the rest
were completely Ill. but you had some good
comedy as well. verse was real good. trust.
ya verse was just a notch better.....92%

vote: 9th Degree

good verses yall & good luck.

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quote your own damn lyrics...

This stupid college kid. You're shit, like feces
9th degree? More like ninth try at your degree
5...not feelin this, too basic and the whole play on his name for a personal really wasn't that amusing at all!!
Your face is so ugly, even you kno that it's tru
I'd try to cover your face.......................
.....................................but it's already done by you!
7...HAHA!! nice play on the picture...a decent personal here!!
°This °kid °sucks... -°and °he °is °wacker °than °me
Wanna kno who'll win? Jus look near the 9th degree
4...GAY!!! you are pretty much self-glorifying here and that is just played and retarded!!
All you are you owe to your parents, but you don't count
Cuz you jus give them a penny............................
....................................and you more than square the account!!
7...LMAO!!! another funny ass line, but i still dont understand what is the big deal with all the "..............."
You ain't gon win here, man, my rhymes are jus too mean
You're gonna go and end up short, and I ain't talkin' about your jeans
5...playin off the pic again, but this time i dont think you brought an affective punch to the whole thing!!
You got here wit no-shows, and by battlin' wack fucks
You could prolly get enough exercise, by jus pushin' your luck
6...good concept for a punch and delivered nice, although still kinda basic!!
Your charade, we see through it, kinda like it was a mist
Your wins are 9th degree burns.................................
.................................................. ...... man... they don't exist
6...an ok punch, the "........." are getting annoying and the whole 9th degree burns thing is used far too many times on him!!
Take you to tha "House of pain" was "jumpin around" in pic
only way you'll "ever-last" "hard", is some viagra, you "dick!"
7...decent!! a funny line and the wordplay in it was nice!!
My flow, you kno, it go and make hoes, no-show
Am I gettin' dope wit you? Oh, yea... how would you kno?
5...a little basic multi, flowed well but the punch was played and basic as fuck!!
Your humongous post count... only time that you look big
Wanna kno where your tourney ends?................
.................................................. .. Man, jus click my sig
5...playin off a post count, that is a sure sign that ya runnin outta material!! also ya did some self-glorifying again!!!

OVERALL: 57/100



Spul you've been duckin' me for months, I tried stayin' on your heels
But you're more shook than driving instructors with Asians at the wheel
5...a decent concept, aint seen anything like this before, but duckin lines are getting more and more played by the minute!!
You got no appeal, so I'll only son you for a moment like I'm your foster
We're in Ghost Writerz together, how come yours aren't on the roster?
7...LMAO!!! this was a nice personal, the setup was kinda played but the punchline was dope!!
They'll get you banned again, and you'll deny it, fess up and spill guts
Oh well, you're the RV vampire - if you bit you'd still suck
8...HAHAHA!!! another dope personal, the vampire concept was nice!!
And crying to strobe is actually startin' to go out of fashion
…This guy's a gangster? His real name's Sebastian!
4...GAY LINE!!! the setup was ok but then ya fucked it with the whole punch on his name, having a hard sounding name don't make you a gangster....PAUL!!!
But you've got plenty of dirt on me, and worst of all
The fact I've voted for you before…now thank AIM for that personal
7...nice personal punch, nice setup how ya continued it into the next line!!
It's always either "plz vote!" or "I'll bang this chick till her tummy hurts"
Well of course you would, you might as well get your money's worth
7...LMAO!!! funny ass line again, prostitute concept was fuckin dope and an original way of using it to!!
'Cuz if you were broke as ya rhymes she wouldn't let you touch her
You're wacker than a vote based on structure, motherfucker!
5...wasn't feelin this, looks like ya added the motherfucker part to force a better flow, also the punch itself was not all that good!!
But on this site you're accomplished, that's supposed to stress me up
Yet I see your body of work…has developed anorexia
5...not really likin this either, i mean you've pretty muched fed off the shortness of his lines in his verse makin his shit look thin!!
And if you're always biting and cheatin' then what you still flow for?
You got band from RV more than Livestrong in '04
6...nice personal, a good punch!!
And now I'm curious why I'm still kickin' this rhyme
'Cuz you ain't even worth my time to finish this…
7...first time i saw this line i thought GAY cuz i didnt really look at the whole concept, it was nice endin ya line early to finish off ya verse!!

OVERALL: 61/100

this battle was kinda half and half
both had some real nice funny lines, but then both dropped some gay lines
SPuL i saw the pic and thought you were gonna play off it nice like ya did last time with Drakel's but ya only dropped one decent line on it, most of ya verse was either played or just weak as hell, 9th, you had a few gay lines, but then you droppe quite a few real killer lines that had me laughin hard.....overall you were the more consistent battler so i vote for you

V/ - 9th Degree

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This stupid college kid. You're shit, like feces
9th degree? More like ninth try at your degree
°This °kid °sucks... -°and °he °is °wacker °than °me
Wanna kno who'll win? Jus look near the 9th degree
You ain't gon win here, man, my rhymes are jus too mean
You're gonna go and end up short, and I ain't talkin' about your jeans
You got here wit no-shows, and by battlin' wack fucks
You could prolly get enough exercise, by jus pushin' your luck

Sheesh SPuL, since when were you actually decent?

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You got no appeal, so I'll only son you for a moment like I'm your foster
We're in Ghost Writerz together, how come yours aren't on the roster?
But you've got plenty of dirt on me, and worst of all
The fact I've voted for you before…now thank AIM for that personal
It's always either "plz vote!" or "I'll bang this chick till her tummy hurts"
Well of course you would, you might as well get your money's worth
But on this site you're accomplished, that's supposed to stress me up
Yet I see your body of work…has developed anorexia

WTF@that played ass closer?

And WTF@this shit. I dunno, very close. Spul you still tend to put a few lines in there that aren't punches. 9th yous till tend to word your shit EXTREMELY weird sometimes. The only punch that I thought was dope as fuck was the anorexia one by 9th, but SPuL seemed a lot more focused and had some good wordplay and nameflips. In the end, I can't vote, I just can't. Cuz as close as this is, I can't stand giving it to either of you. So count this vote as a tie unless I HAVE to vote.

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Soundclick

that sebatian line reminds me of 8mile.. wait that basically was 8 mile... "this dudes a gangster, his real name is clarence"

blah

v/ spul

most of 9ths was blah
except the push ur luck line.. haha funny shit

spul has the ghost writer line and the moneys worth line

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^ think you have the verses mixed up

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The anorexia line was fucking dope

The push your luck line coulda been a killer if you worded it better

This battle is pretty close, like mine vs. hotshh! *winks at voting council*

G/L to both of ya fam

aiight uppin' for more votes...............

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This stupid college kid. You're shit, like feces
9th degree? More like ninth try at your degree
not feelin this at all..... really not final 4 worthy..... 4/10
Your face is so ugly, even you kno that it's tru
I'd try to cover your face.......................
.....................................but it's already done by you!
ehhh, this was ok..... but fake personal-ish.... 5/10
°This °kid °sucks... -°and °he °is °wacker °than °me
Wanna kno who'll win? Jus look near the 9th degree
i thought this line was really hot..... best line so far.. 7/10
All you are you owe to your parents, but you don't count
Cuz you jus give them a penny............................
....................................and you more than square the account!!
ehhhhhhhhhh not feelin this..... its good ur setup and punch were related, but not really feelin the punch.... 4/10
You ain't gon win here, man, my rhymes are jus too mean
You're gonna go and end up short, and I ain't talkin' about your jeans
i thought this was another nice line...... u needa improve ur consistency, u have a real hot line e very few bars.... 7/10
You got here wit no-shows, and by battlin' wack fucks
You could prolly get enough exercise, by jus pushin' your luck
callin a VC member a wack fuck?!?! NO, not good!! lmao, but this was still ur best bar prolly 8/10
Your charade, we see through it, kinda like it was a mist
Your wins are 9th degree burns.................................
.................................................. ...... man... they don't exist
lol, kinda made me laugh, but not real special..... especially cuz hes like 30-5 or sumthin like that..... but the concept was real nice 7/10
Take you to tha "House of pain" was "jumpin around" in pic
only way you'll "ever-last" "hard", is some viagra, you "dick!"
WWWWWWWAAAAAACCCCCCCKKKKKKKK u woulda done better just takin this out of ur verse.. 3/10
My flow, you kno, it go and make hoes, no-show
Am I gettin' dope wit you? Oh, yea... how would you kno?
naw...... its alrite, but its a weak way of callin him "not dope".. 6/10
Your humongous post count... only time that you look big
Wanna kno where your tourney ends?................
.................................................. .. Man, jus click my sig
this was an ok closer.... the setup took away from it, but i thought it was still hardhittin..... 7/10

58/100

9th Degree

Spul you've been duckin' me for months, I tried stayin' on your heels
But you're more shook than driving instructors with Asians at the wheel
this was ok....... for some reason tho, i didnt like it all that much..... its prolly cuz the wording of the line alone is played... 5/10
You got no appeal, so I'll only son you for a moment like I'm your foster
We're in Ghost Writerz together, how come yours aren't on the roster?
lmao....... that was a real hot punch..... set up was eh..... 7/10
They'll get you banned again, and you'll deny it, fess up and spill guts
Oh well, you're the RV vampire - if you bit you'd still suck
lol..... nice, i remember actually thinkin about how the stuff he "bit" wasnt even that good also, but vampire=suck is kinda played..... 6/10
And crying to strobe is actually startin' to go out of fashion
…This guy's a gangster? His real name's Sebastian!
lol...... this was hillarious... but i unno wat to think.... we all know its 8mile..... but i unno, it made me laugh alot.. 5/10
But you've got plenty of dirt on me, and worst of all
The fact I've voted for you before…now thank AIM for that personal
this was aight...... i could imagine it bein alot better if u worded it differently.... 5.5/10
It's always either "plz vote!" or "I'll bang this chick till her tummy hurts"
Well of course you would, you might as well get your money's worth
lol..... kinda nice......6/10
'Cuz if you were broke as ya rhymes she wouldn't let you touch her
You're wacker than a vote based on structure, motherfucker!
this was like his wack punch....... just not as wack.... 4/10
But on this site you're accomplished, that's supposed to stress me up
Yet I see your body of work…has developed anorexia
lol...... i thought this was nice, but not great. 7/10
And if you're always biting and cheatin' then what you still flow for?
You got band from RV more than Livestrong in '04
this was decent......6/10
And now I'm curious why I'm still kickin' this rhyme
'Cuz you ain't even worth my time to finish this…
nice concept....... lmao, reminds of that nsync song.... "gone" or w/e... 6.5/10

58/100

ok........ this is not even funny...... ima put a tie i guesss..... i couldnt really see myself givin it to either of yall....... but someone tell me if i Have to choose

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