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View Poll Results: Who won this battle? | |||
kar0de | 3 | 37.50% | |
tim dim | 5 | 62.50% | |
Voters: 8. You may not vote on this poll |
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06-09-05, 08:58 AM | #1 |
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kar0de vs tim dim
IP: DEEC 8168
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06-09-05, 09:01 AM | #2 | |
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IP: DEEC 8168
tim dim has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-09-05 09:01 AM.
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06-09-05, 09:13 AM | #3 | |
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IP: 5947 53BA
kar0de has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-09-05 09:13 AM.
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06-09-05, 09:53 AM | #4 |
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IP: 5947 53BA
i'll batter n bruise this lame, leave this weak resisting knives.
n have tim meet a sticky endin, like blasting @ busy bee hives. 2 days to drop? man, what the fuck you playing at kid? i suppose you do have a life , too bad my opener already took it! see when you set up the battle, your chances of winnin were tossed. and when i put that smiley face in my verse, was jus a subtle hint you lost. i'm superior, & this weak is under-me cuz i'm wearin "tim" on my feet. and yet, the only way youd come close to dope, is if you bit offa me. if you dont get anything, pm me or dont vote. |
06-10-05, 11:05 PM | #5 |
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IP: DEEC 8168
This will be simple cause Kar0de is a retard n’ a square
I’ll split his wig and redefine the meaning of partin ya hair Think I’d lose to you accidentally……….. Please son if I don’t own you its cause you didn’t come with a refund The only illness coming from your mouth is gingivitis This kids more dim than me far from the brightest Your on 0-0 this is the only time you’ll have a perfect record Cause I rarely cut short like an extension cord |
06-10-05, 11:07 PM | #6 |
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IP: DEEC 8168
gingivitis= some dental illness...................................
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06-10-05, 11:17 PM | #7 | |
DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: 20EE 3FFA
Voted For: tim dim
Tim Dim: This will be simple cause Kar0de is a retard n’ a square I’ll split his wig and redefine the meaning of partin ya hair Ok Wordplay..4/10 Think I’d lose to you accidentally……….. Please son if I don’t own you its cause you didn’t come with a refund Nah..Worded Wrong..3/10 The only illness coming from your mouth is gingivitis This kids more dim than me far from the brightest Ok..5/10 Your on 0-0 this is the only time you’ll have a perfect record Cause I rarely cut short like an extension cord Doesn't Really Ryhme Well...and Not Hard Hitting..3/10 Overall: 15/40 Karode: i'll batter n bruise this lame, leave this weak resisting knives. n have tim meet a sticky endin, like blasting @ busy bee hives. Nah..Not Hard Hitting..4/10 2 days to drop? man, what the fuck you playing at kid? i suppose you do have a life , too bad my opener already took it! Wack..2/10 see when you set up the battle, your chances of winnin were tossed. and when i put that smiley face in my verse, was jus a subtle hint you lost. Again..Not Hard Hitting..3/10 i'm superior, & this weak is under-me cuz i'm wearin "tim" on my feet. and yet, the only way youd come close to dope, is if you bit offa me. First Line Ok..Second Line Wack..4/10 Overall: 13/40 My Vote - Tim Dim For Better Verse and Punches. ~R~ |
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06-10-05, 11:20 PM | #8 | |
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IP: 61EB 54E6
Voted For: kar0de
This will be simple cause Kar0de is a retard n’ a square I’ll split his wig and redefine the meaning of partin ya hair ^^wak Think I’d lose to you accidentally……….. Please son if I don’t own you its cause you didn’t come with a refund ^^even worse than the other one The only illness coming from your mouth is gingivitis This kids more dim than me far from the brightest ^^^1st line here was ight...but 2nd sucked Your on 0-0 this is the only time you’ll have a perfect record Cause I rarely cut short like an extension cord ^^wak Conclusion-ur punches were too basic.It's all about meta and wordplay.U had neither. i'll batter n bruise this lame, leave this weak resisting knives. n have tim meet a sticky endin, like blasting @ busy bee hives. ^^OK 2 days to drop? man, what the fuck you playing at kid? i suppose you do have a life , too bad my opener already took it! ^^suks see when you set up the battle, your chances of winnin were tossed. and when i put that smiley face in my verse, was jus a subtle hint you lost. ^^wak i'm superior, & this weak is under-me cuz i'm wearin "tim" on my feet. and yet, the only way youd come close to dope, is if you bit offa me ^^glorified Concluion-Reason ya got my vote was because ya had some decent punches at the begining.Ur verse went from good to horrible. Vote-Karode |
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06-12-05, 03:31 AM | #9 |
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IP: DEEC 8168
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06-12-05, 06:55 AM | #10 | |
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This was feedback posted for tim dim
IP: 9A74 ABE3
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06-12-05, 07:44 AM | #11 |
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IP: A181 D033
Voted For: tim dim
Alrite i ain't gonna say this was 100% one sided cos that wouldn't be fair to Karode as he made a fair effort. However his punches didn't hit too hard and his personals were really lacking. Like for example, his line: see when you set up the battle, your chances of winnin were tossed. and when i put that smiley face in my verse, was jus a subtle hint you lost. ^^^How can you know that he lost if you put up your verse first.At this point you wouldn't have known what tim dim was gonna drop so this was a bit too overconfident and, in my opinion, came back round and kicked you in the nuts. He kept his vocab too simple, when if used correctly could have been the redeeming feature of his verse. Tim dim's struture was a lot better, as his lines were more even in terms of syllables n shit.and the humourous punches made the verse more enjoyable to read, and that took away from the fact that there were no personals. Again there was no use of original vocab, but Tim's closing line was the only real weak point in his verse,if anything, due to the fact that even though the first line of the closer was decent, his final line didn't quite measure up to the previous. My favourite line in this battle was really the opener: Think I’d lose to you accidentally……….. Please son if I don’t own you its cause you didn’t come with a refund I thought that line was undoubtedly the hottest line in this battle. In my opinion, without a shadow of a doubt, tim dim won this one. But Karode, you should keep at it. Peace |
06-12-05, 07:47 AM | #12 | |
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This was feedback posted for tim dim
IP: 828D 0B7A
gonna leave feed, dont have time to vote...
both have mad punches and wordplay and mad potential, you should hit LL up with a tryout.
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06-12-05, 10:48 PM | #13 |
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IP: DEEC 8168
^will do I'm looking for a crew ty for the votes..
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06-12-05, 11:17 PM | #14 |
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IP: F2F7 D6F2
Voted For: kar0de
GOOD: Flow - Tie Structure - Tie Punchlines - Tie vocab - Tim Dim Wordplay - nope Nameplay - Kar0de BAD: forced Rhymes - nope Forced Multis - nope Non Sence - tim dim CREATIVITY Theme Battle - nope Creative Punches - tie creative multi's - nope PERSONALS: no personals OPENING/CLOSING: Opening: Kar0de Closing: Kar0de COMMENT: Tim dim: good battle, u had good punches, flow, structure but Kar0de had mo hard hittin punches... didn't left u behind, almost a tie battle... keep up man V/ Kar0de RTF for more honest votes, links on my sig
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06-13-05, 03:28 AM | #15 |
WhoAreYou?
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IP: A181 D033
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=193179
Yo tim don't forget to RTF on my battle against SickSeed |
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