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Old 08-21-05, 09:45 PM   #1
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E.C vs. Apostrophe

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Old 08-22-05, 05:17 AM   #2
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check... imma go 10 lines
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Old 08-22-05, 03:27 PM   #3
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Chickity Check Check.........
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Old 08-25-05, 06:10 PM   #4
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You have a remote chance to win.. Cause EC your a slouch...
kid your losing control of this battle.. and its not between the couch
EC wants to go 10... but i'll be killing him in 2 bars for sure...
cause when i told E to think outside the box.. he started writing by the poor..
EC its a fact your ill.. but its nothing that cant be fixed by a lowely nurse..
and you were soo fucking stumped.. you had to uproot your whole verse..
You dont get any feed on your stuff.. cause its clear no one gives a shit for E..
And you could get casted for star trek.. and not Cling-On to the Victory...
Taking the UK by storm.. nah a little sprinkle doesnt count you lame.
Even on RV your a no name.. So its pretty obvious.. the EC will never reign..


meh something quick
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Old 08-26-05, 09:29 AM   #5
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check....


in english litteracy grammer gets you all the answers,
aposprophe's only above our lines........................................,
...................................becuz his texts below our standards,
i knew rv was full of homo's these people just get me vexed,
apos was in the elite 8..........................................,
.................................only coz he liked getting his willy wet*,
verses are weak, people don't wanna read it, scrap ya lines,
coz you have to make them big, for it too catch their eye,
see, willy likes to get rode, so he looks for tackle to grab,
obviously it's true......... coz he wins all the battles he has,
let me exclaim ya ego(!).......... ill miss w(')rds and laugh,
coz this lesson in school questions(?) all the skills you have,**

Explanations,

*= his alias is wet willy. he got in to the elite 8 in korv 2
**= a play off his name and different grammer.

pz
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Old 08-26-05, 09:35 AM   #6
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You have a remote chance to win.. Cause EC your a slouch...
kid your losing control of this battle.. and its not between the couch
EC wants to go 10... but i'll be killing him in 2 bars for sure...
cause when i told E to think outside the box.. he started writing by the poor..
You dont get any feed on your stuff.. cause its clear no one gives a shit for E..
And you could get casted for star trek.. and not Cling-On to the Victory...

VS.

in english litteracy grammer gets you all the answers,
aposprophe's only above our lines........................................,
...................................becuz his texts below our standards,
i knew rv was full of homo's these people just get me vexed,
apos was in the elite 8..........................................,
.................................only coz he liked getting his willy wet*,


good battle, nice shit from both, the one thing that i think made EC lose this battle is he started off with two funny dope bars, but then sort of fell off with a couple of mediocre bars and shit, apostrophe was more consistent to me and had more bars that stood out to me as being affective and funny.

V/ - Apostrophe
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Old 08-26-05, 02:55 PM   #7
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You have a remote chance to win.. Cause EC your a slouch...
kid your losing control of this battle.. and its not between the couch
^^OK......but control lines like this are a lil blah nowaday..6/10
EC wants to go 10... but i'll be killing him in 2 bars for sure...
cause when i told E to think outside the box.. he started writing by the poor..
^^OK...but the set-up for this was gay...4/10
EC its a fact your ill.. but its nothing that cant be fixed by a lowely nurse..
and you were soo fucking stumped.. you had to uproot your whole verse..
^^good wordplay in punch..but work on set-ups...4/10
You dont get any feed on your stuff.. cause its clear no one gives a shit for E..
And you could get casted for star trek.. and not Cling-On to the Victory...
^^OK....6/10
Taking the UK by storm.. nah a little sprinkle doesnt count you lame.
Even on RV your a no name.. So its pretty obvious.. the EC will never reign..
^^Probably ur best bar in my opinion...7/10

OK..had some ite punches and shit.But you need to work on your set-ups.
Etiher the set-up be a punch itself or relate the punch.But don't just put some
shit there just cause it rhymes.Try to up your personals too.Too many general punches.


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in english litteracy grammer gets you all the answers,
aposprophe's only above our lines........................................,
...................................becuz his texts below our standards,
^^hmm..unoriginal..but personal nevertheless..6/10
i knew rv was full of homo's these people just get me vexed,
apos was in the elite 8..........................................,
.................................only coz he liked getting his willy wet*,
^^OK personal of his old name...7/10
verses are weak, people don't wanna read it, scrap ya lines,
coz you have to make them big, for it too catch their eye,
^^Ok again...6/10
see, willy likes to get rode, so he looks for tackle to grab,
obviously it's true......... coz he wins all the battles he has,
^^didn't like this one..3/10
let me exclaim ya ego(!).......... ill miss w(')rds and laugh,
coz this lesson in school questions(?) all the skills you have,**
^^Good...6/10

Ok..good punches n wordplay as well.But your verse had personals n shit.
Which was lackin in apos's verse in my opinion..

so my vote goes to Ec for harder hittin personals.

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Old 08-26-05, 04:20 PM   #8
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lol.... iiight uppin
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Old 08-26-05, 09:17 PM   #9
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Apos
You have a remote chance to win.. Cause EC your a slouch...
kid your losing control of this battle.. and its not between the couch
Nice wordplay + punch.
EC wants to go 10... but i'll be killing him in 2 bars for sure...
cause when i told E to think outside the box.. he started writing by the poor..
Lol, again, nice punch. Set up was bad though.
EC its a fact your ill.. but its nothing that cant be fixed by a lowely nurse..
and you were soo fucking stumped.. you had to uproot your whole verse..
Ok punch. Not that amazing.
You dont get any feed on your stuff.. cause its clear no one gives a shit for E..
And you could get casted for star trek.. and not Cling-On to the Victory...
Ok wordplay. Heard it before.
Taking the UK by storm.. nah a little sprinkle doesnt count you lame.
Even on RV your a no name.. So its pretty obvious.. the EC will never reign..
Ok wordplay personal.

Overall, I liked this verse. Had some funny and hard hitting punches. Not a lot of good personals though.

E.C
in english litteracy grammer gets you all the answers,
aposprophe's only above our lines becuz his texts below our standards,
Ok wordplay punch.
i knew rv was full of homo's these people just get me vexed,
apos was in the elite 8 only coz he liked getting his willy wet*,
Nah, not feeling this punch. Bad set up.
verses are weak, people don't wanna read it, scrap ya lines,
coz you have to make them big, for it too catch their eye,
His text is small. Bad punch.
see, willy likes to get rode, so he looks for tackle to grab,
obviously it's true coz he wins all the battles he has,
Compliment him a little.
let me exclaim ya ego(!) ill miss w(')rds and laugh,
coz this lesson in school questions(?) all the skills you have,**
Ok wordplay punch. Nothing wow worthy.

You need to work on your set up lines. If you can perfect those then you will be a force in this league. Till then you will lose.

Apos gets the vote for more consistant and hard hitting punches.

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Old 08-26-05, 10:39 PM   #10
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cause when i told E to think outside the box.. he started writing by the poor..
EC its a fact your ill.. but its nothing that cant be fixed by a lowely nurse..
You dont get any feed on your stuff.. cause its clear no one gives a shit for E..
And you could get casted for star trek.. and not Cling-On to the Victory...
vs
knew rv was full of homo's these people just get me vexed,
apos was in the elite 8..........................................,
.................................only coz he liked getting his willy wet*,
verses are weak, people don't wanna read it, scrap ya lines,
coz you have to make them big, for it too catch their eye,

Ec had some decents hits in his verse and apost was off and on
but overall apost verse was a bit harder
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Old 08-27-05, 06:50 AM   #11
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actually he changed the size of his text... so u ned to change it back...
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Old 08-27-05, 09:46 AM   #12
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Apos
You have a remote chance to win.. Cause EC your a slouch...
kid your losing control of this battle.. and its not between the couch

Remote control line? Seen the concept too many times

EC wants to go 10... but i'll be killing him in 2 bars for sure...
cause when i told E to think outside the box.. he started writing by the poor..

Re-wording but still outside the box lines need re-wording dopely for them to be effective now days

EC its a fact your ill.. but its nothing that cant be fixed by a lowely nurse..
and you were soo fucking stumped.. you had to uproot your whole verse..

See i thought this was pretty tight

You dont get any feed on your stuff.. cause its clear no one gives a shit for E..
And you could get casted for star trek.. and not Cling-On to the Victory...

Again played concept

Taking the UK by storm.. nah a little sprinkle doesnt count you lame.
Even on RV your a no name.. So its pretty obvious.. the EC will never reign..

Nice.

Overall i felt alot of played concepts, felt u needed good wordplays on his name for a more effective verse

E.C
in english litteracy grammer gets you all the answers,
aposprophe's only above our lines becuz his texts below our standards,

Nice concept not a hard hitter though

i knew rv was full of homo's these people just get me vexed,
apos was in the elite 8 only coz he liked getting his willy wet*,

Meh

verses are weak, people don't wanna read it, scrap ya lines,
coz you have to make them big, for it too catch their eye,

Week personal

see, willy likes to get rode, so he looks for tackle to grab,
obviously it's true coz he wins all the battles he has,

eh...

let me exclaim ya ego(!) ill miss w(')rds and laugh,
coz this lesson in school questions(?) all the skills you have,**

Nice

Overall - Ok im being harsh with the break down but fuck it im tired of played concepts etc
But this was hard a played but alright verse vs some failed attempts
think Apo got this E.C didnt come up to his usual standards with some wierd attempts which werent ever gonna hit
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Old 08-28-05, 12:01 AM   #13
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i wasnt really feelin any of EC's punches... but it was a decent battle...
it came down to
in english litteracy grammer gets you all the answers,
aposprophe's only above our lines........................................,
...................................becuz his texts below our standards,

vs.
Taking the UK by storm.. nah a little sprinkle doesnt count you lame.
Even on RV your a no name.. So its pretty obvious.. the EC will never reign..
so vote apos....
 
Old 08-28-05, 01:06 AM   #14
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in english litteracy grammer gets you all the answers,
aposprophe's only above our lines........................................,
...................................becuz his texts below our standards,

vs.

You have a remote chance to win.. Cause EC your a slouch...
kid your losing control of this battle.. and its not between the couch
EC wants to go 10... but i'll be killing him in 2 bars for sure...
cause when i told E to think outside the box.. he started writing by the poor..

v/apostrophe better and more witty punches
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Old 08-29-05, 02:14 AM   #15
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cause when i told E to think outside the box.. he started writing by the poor..
EC its a fact your ill.. but its nothing that cant be fixed by a lowely nurse..
You dont get any feed on your stuff.. cause its clear no one gives a shit for E..
And you could get casted for star trek.. and not Cling-On to the Victory...
vs
knew rv was full of homo's these people just get me vexed,
apos was in the elite 8..........................................,
.................................only coz he liked getting his willy wet*,
verses are weak, people don't wanna read it, scrap ya lines,
coz you have to make them big, for it too catch their eye,

in my eyes, apos came more consistent with punches.......both can upp their game

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