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Old 03-11-09, 05:35 PM   #1
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jus keyin. freein. fuck human man ima demon.

it's like....

my mind aint workin,
my lines go dizzy when my mind goes blurry,
eyes closed listen to the beat just murk it,
if i'm dissing just hurt him,
serve him on plates to manny man n give top class service,
so please just have paitence i'm worth it,
imma fiend for this game n i'm cracking out, coz i'm too eager to burn it,
i just speak what i speak coz i'm learning,
you can't teach how i teach man your worthless,
you won't reach were i'll reach i deserve it,
just give me your word and tell me the verdict,
don't close the curtains, my brain aint clicking,
just... give me a minute.. let me kick into the rythem,
i think when i write so i'm big when i'm spitting yeh,
...n when the dj's spinning pull back one time incase you missed it,
i'm the sickest, incase you missed it i'm the biggest,
incase you missed it fuck just listen,
your man is touched my wisdom,
mate you won't get nowhere spitting shit,
man i rip up the scene u aint tearing a bit,
u aint moving as quick see ive proved that i'm big,
your as stupid as him if you do this a diss,
so why do you do it if your music is shit?

could go on but i wont.

thats grime. i was made for audio

feedback plzz. will return the favour.
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Old 03-14-09, 05:23 PM   #2
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fooookin uppin this for some feeeeed
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Old 03-17-09, 12:53 AM   #3
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That's pretty good for a quick keystyle. The flow is on point especially. Pretty nice syllable rhyming for the most part. I liked it, I think it would sound especially good in audio.
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Old 03-17-09, 03:53 PM   #4
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thanks for the feedback bro appriciate it. im gona be puttin it to audio soon as i get cubase. so look out for it maaan
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Old 03-17-09, 08:33 PM   #5
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I definitely will man.
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Old 03-18-09, 01:38 AM   #6
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decent drop, u do type like u better off being an audio head which isnt bad ur flow was decent, no real multis or anything just a decent keystye respect fam...

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