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09-19-05, 03:44 AM | #1 | ||||||
Maggot
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Flow Hood
IP: CF74 5D3A
Flow Hood
My path of static is like mathematics full of numbers And like carpenters pull lumbers not even plumbers Can patch my leaks and close the hatch on freaks Misled On the block jolted galore Dead bolt locks on my door So in brief I hate a thief but they hardcore Plan to fracture spines then manufacture wines in order To get drunk a lots wet junk is hot inside my glass slaughter Bottles of Jim Bean but they leave me slim and mean must alter My life, falter with strife catch a knife solid like the rock of Gibraltar The computer service wisdom to my nervous system hooked Up to my keyboard see swords swung at my head stay shooked Like HIGHLANDER make no sense try steal my flow strength And chop off my head many soft on the block misled and dense Script is so nice and equipped with a device called a microphone Knock down walls of a home when I rap I’m a psycho on tight chrome Like Mike Jones looking for a dime cute face and brown round Behind, walk by grooving bling shine like brass tubing so renowned Get local awards for my vocal chords oil and lube never eat Spoil food have a loyal attitude only walk on clever streets |
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09-19-05, 03:51 AM | #2 | ||||||
Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
this a ok drop. you got some good rhymes in it. try expand your concepts.
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09-19-05, 03:54 AM | #3 | ||||||
Maggot
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IP: CF74 5D3A
my link (http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2445089)
my link(http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2445104) Last edited by shaft 26 : 09-19-05 at 04:22 AM. |
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09-19-05, 06:25 PM | #4 | ||||||
Maggot
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IP: CF74 5D3A
upping for reasoponses
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09-21-05, 09:52 PM | #5 | ||||||
Maggot
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IP: CF74 5D3A
You aim at parks with low art even Mozart would say
You are a fart that needs to depart the Hip Hop scene today A lame toad with no main road your clout on route for A head on collision this bitch has misled visions that are bazaar Have pride but no voice astride a horse no saddle can’t flow battle So don’t straddle a microphone your dome too stupid and rattled I harm plain MC’S leave their brains swarm with bees stung And hung in the hospital for medication and that’s devastation sprung So don’t be among these ballistic statistics so duck your head |
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09-21-05, 10:49 PM | #6 | ||||
New to RV
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IP: 851A D9CE
fuck maddrapper.
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09-22-05, 06:16 AM | #7 | ||||||
Maggot
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IP: CF74 5D3A
^^^^ HEY BARR YOU CAN HATE BUT DO YOU HAVE SKILLS CHECK THIS OUT
Sinister with flaws but administer laws so yall should obey Or the hood will sway to crime this is Hollywood at bay BARR hate is a sad fire you only admire stupidity so hey You could slew a city if you don’t adjust your act and thrust Raw facts in replies you see lies don’t win so people like you disgust Me, I manage affairs and damage the hairs on your head Like bad afro sheen you grow mean but don’t flow clean instead You go lean on the matrix of hatred nothing sacred about that homey Feel me |
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09-22-05, 12:38 PM | #8 | ||||||
Light Weight
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IP: B3B9 F44A
lol its cool homie you got a good flow, but like he said try n expand ya concepts coz it will make it a deeper piece. keep it up n thx for the feed on mine
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09-22-05, 07:00 PM | #9 | ||||
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IP: 0AE0 3B1A
Closed your maddrapper..post again in here and i will permanently bann you
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